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    FAG

    Daddydavek commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in FAG

    Justin's dad is an ass! His mom is a busy-body with a like minded friend. She's not as bad as the dad, but that's not saying much!
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    I'm betting Justin's past is a bigger problem in his own eyes than in Craig's.
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    Expectations met. Neither came up short!
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    Good looking and a bit cocky too. How can Craig resist?
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    At my age, I could use a bucket...or two!
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    Chapter 9

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Yes Will has a privileged life and knows how to work it, just as he explained it to Connie. His redeeming factors include he doesn't like bullies and doesn't suffer fools gladly. More please!
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    Interesting and action-filled chapter which despite the peril, ended with some slightly positive news. Poor Defiant saw his share of road adventures and his demise was swift. Ritch continues to score and Ed is enjoying being his wingman! Will remains a good buddy too! Now I'm looking forward to next week's chapter, as I still want more!
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    That's why moderation by administrators is so important on this site.
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    Well done! You covered a lot, but I still want more!
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    At the beginning of April I'll be retired 15 years. Went back to work Tuesday thru Thursday in early January 2007 and finished in December of that year. During my career, I was lucky to be able to work a flexible schedule with lots of overtime so 6:00 a.m. to 4:30 M-F and 6 to 2:30 on Saturdays. So 58 hours most weeks. Since 2007 my schedule has been a lot looser and I rarely got out of bed before 9 a.m. or back to bed until well after midnight. That is until my grandson came along in 2018. Now he is here most mornings at 6:30 and we have him until 5:30 to 6 in the evening. At age 73, I think I do pretty good to keep up with him most of the time...but I am exhausted most nights.
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    Chapter 43

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 43

    I read your other offering first because it's a cold night and the appeal of Northern Exposure was less enticing. However, this is the better story with more depth and context. More please!
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    Chapter 8

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Poor Connie still hasn't a clue to just how connected Will and his family are. Great to see another chapter!
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    Nightfall

    Daddydavek commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Nightfall

    Well shit! Shit! Shit. I wasn't surprised, just very disappointed and so sad for two kids. When I got to the paragraph where Avery approached the drug dealer, I had to stop reading and let it lay for a couple of hours as I knew it would have dire consequences.
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    I just sent him home at 7:00 pm local time and he was here a total of 55 hours this week! And yes, I'm exhausted. He is one very active little boy who I've spoiled!
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    Things were going too smoothly, so Donovan adds some drama...or is he just an annoyance? Again, my only complaint is that I want more!
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    Escape?

    Daddydavek commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Escape?

    Lee is not only getting used to feeling safe, but is getting comfortable and liking some of life's amenities like a clean, warm, comfortable bed.... He is also learning how to cook and appreciates it takes some effort to do it right. Even Greg, despite his reservations is extending support at Lee staying and made him a deal on a cabin. Avery is just happy to have a friend...and is looking to get closer.
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    Wendy...made me think of Peter Pan. Loved this chapter. My only regret is that it came to an end!
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    Erection, engorgement, tumescence and now we have elephantiasis for the exceptionally well hung...
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    Keeper

    Daddydavek commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Keeper

    Greg's observation that Avery didn't appreciate his foster parents is clearly true. But given Avery's history, that is not surprising. I think Bill is right to be worried, but I also think he and Greg and Clay are really powerless to have any influence over the way Avery feels about Lee. They can try to keep them safe, but that can only go so far... The nightmare that Lee had was a reflection of the nightmare he has been living and hopefully he is beginning to realize that fact.
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    Loved it...want more!
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    Another historic day in our country and also busy with my grandson, I just got to this. I liked the chapter but I got a bit lost. Olga was staying at the Abello house while CJ and Owen were out of the country and then Ritch took her over to CJ's and Owens house for a visit while they were still out....but prior to that there was the paragraph where Owen and CJ took Ritch out...."CJ and Owen came by to see him around lunchtime, and took him to eat at The Tombs. ....
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    I like the new update and the slightly larger font. I've been busy with the grandson, and note I still have to read the latest chapter from Krista that you mentioned above.
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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank-you! I appreciate your kind words. Sorry, but baby sitting my 29 month old grandson 44 to 55 hours a week at my age (73) means this is one tired old man who does not have the time or the energy to undertake writing another novel.
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    The Beginning

    Daddydavek commented on Cirio's story chapter in The Beginning

    I laughed at The uncle Nikita comment. Interesting start.
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    Outsider

    Daddydavek commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Outsider

    That house will never be finished....sounds like a self fulfilling prophecy. Avery has shown and explained the facts of life to Lee. And Lee actually seems to be beginning to understand.
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