Daddydavek
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My concern is that the Russian spy will somehow involve CJ in recovering the stash of documents, once he reveals how to find them...
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"He claims he has files safely stashed outside Mexico and Russia but will only tell you where." This is the part that has me worried. Also when Northman finds out CJ went to DC for an IVF consult (the cover story) he will be further pissed and probably say and do something. And now I have to wait a week.....ughhhh!
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Baby was awfully needy and Teach was more than prepared to fulfill them.
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" One little comment in HTTC had followers up in arms wanting to know details. Those details are included in the final chapters of the Mexico book. " That "one little comment" refers to a literary device common!y referred to as a "hook." And I believe the comments here and in the chapter comments as well as the series blog have set several more. I for one am thoroughly hooked.
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I voted for the email option. I'm disappointed that there are so few responses in total.
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susurration - Word of the Day - Sun Feb 27, 2022
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Are you forgetting about Ritch?
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Thanks for sharing the gift of your imaginative stories. This one is my favorite so far. The banter is fun and entertaining and reminds me of the dinners in Mark Arbour's stories.
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eupeptic - Word of the Day - Thu Feb 24, 2022
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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plausible - Word of the Day - Sun Feb 20, 2022
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Late to the party again! My excuse is it is Sunday! (not Friday) But I sure enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing another short chapter!
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anathema - Word of the Day - Fri Feb 18, 2022
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Another well crafted chapter that flowed so well, it was over before I knew it. Just re-read to savor it. My two favorite scenes were CJ talking to his dads and then in the restaurant and his mention of the "enclave". Somehow I suspect Margaret finds out about the denial of the leave request and jerks Northman's chain.
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Okay For Me To Hold Your Hand
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Okay For Me To Hold Your Hand
Maddox realized he has to woo not just seduce Jonathan to win his heart, and I think Maddox is up to the challenge.- 20 comments
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Late to the party again, and the comments range from scary to hilarious...as usual! Seems like both Ozzie and CJ like Heinrich and I found it funny to have them teasing Ritch about being a publicity hound! Thanks as always for providing a bright spot and laugh on a dreary rainy February day.
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I also think of a backwater https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/slough
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I agree, he would get some great feedback and comments! I really like the story and the characters and the whole crew at the Priory and the farm. After the first chapter we are still wondering about the fate of Trevor despite him coming through surgery. Johnny seems to have plotted with the gardeners about planting some misdirection with the newspaper people and hopefully that will work out. Still no report on how Ben is actually doing and a million other questions to answer.
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As Ricky Ricardo used to say: "Lucy, you got some 'splaining to do!"
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Sad that children are lab rats...
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A recap and Chapter 1 of the second book went up yesterday at AD. https://awesomedude.com/nigel_gordon/being-johnny/index.htm
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Sparks are flying and they both are combustible.
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I think the Russians got the message that CJ didn't appreciate being fucked over. I just worry that the foolish Russian spy will escalate things...
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emancipation - Word of the Day - Tue Feb 1, 2022
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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I think the cry for someone to pray for him will be too little, too late, as they are both bewitched, certainty bothered and Q is bewildered and he knows what is going on!
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Another interesting chapter. I think most of the obvious and pertinent comments have already been made. Northman's attack about 'new money' was gratuitous and probably permanently solidified CJ's contempt. The withdrawn point clearly was an attempt to deflect blame. The travelogue was fun and informative as always. Thanks for sharing!
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