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rawboned - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 30, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
When I see rawboned guys at the gym, I want to feed them some cornbread. Bruh, do you even eat? -
In movies, you might call these people extras. Life is full of extras. -the ten other people in an AA (12-step) meeting -the usuals at the bus stop -the three people who always hit McDonald's for breakfast when you are there -Mr. McCorkell, who runs the newspaper stand in the lobby They can be useful: -When Todd got home from the AA meeting, what David A said about holding onto resentments bugged him for hours. He was really starting to hate David A. Whatever he said had an uncanny knack for being precisely what Todd didn't want to hear. -Mark at the bus stop was really in a mood this morning. His teenagers were getting on his nerves. -I was standing behind one of the regulars at McDonald's when I heard about the plane crash. -When I figured out that Mr. McCorkell, who ran the newspaper stand in the lobby, was the only person worth a damn in the whole building where I used to work, I updated my resume. That's all folks. You need never mention them again. OR... they might become useful later on, so you mention them in passing. You don't have to name them, but by naming them, you give them a little upgrade in status as a person who was memorable enough for your protagonist to know by name. Who knows? Maybe Todd gets serious about his sobriety and asks David A to be his sponsor. Maybe Mr. McCorkell becomes your character's Yoda. The craft of writing is an art, not a science. Figuring out who is a character, who is an extra and how many words they get is one of the zillion and a half decisions you have to figure out on the way. Choose wisely. -
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recital - Word of the Day - Fri Mar 29, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Young pianists are often challenged to do difficult pieces at public recitals. I understand it can be a terrifying experience. -
Me either, but for years I’ve worked cleanup for the spring and summer seasons at a campground in Boliver county, Never have I ever skinny dipped in pond water (yuck).
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pompous - Word of the Day - Thu Mar 28, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
People are mere dilettantes at pomposity compared to cats. Cats have mastered being pompous into a fine art. -
Me either. Never have I ever owned a tractor (but I've worked on them).
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settee - Word of the Day - Wed Mar 27, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
I had a settee, but I had to reclassify it as a scratching post. 🐈 -
nuance - Word of the Day - Tue Mar 26, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Today’s authors face new challenges. Our predecessors could be as subtle and nuanced in their approach as they saw fit. Now you have to bludgeon your readers with a lead filled clue stick and they still say- duh, I don’t get it. -
Douglas Fir - Word of the Day - Mon Mar 25, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The smell of forests in the Pacific Northwest is amazing. Douglas fur, alder, hemlock, and pine combine to create a fragrance that is spectacular. -
intrinsic - Word of the Day - Sun Mar 24, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Some might argue that creativity is an intrinsic part of being gay. We see things differently than the rest of the human herd. Art, literature, science and technology would be very different without our contributions. I contend creativity is the gay superpower. -
Never have I ever been a fan of Disney, the great destroyer of IPs.
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One of the undiscovered countries of writing is the effect of violence on the perpetrator. It's not at all what you might think. Of course, there are mindsets who revel in it. We've done the homophobic bully trope to death. What we have not explored in great detail is what makes him (or her) tick. That is often ugly and a head-space most readers or writers do not wish to visit, even in fiction. An even more interesting case is the psychology of people who are thrust into violence by circumstance, like a teacher forced to act to stop a school shooting or an employee of a retailer who is forced to act to stop a robbery. These people are often punished for their good deeds. The truth about violence is that it leaves profound psychological scars on all parties involved, victim, perp, or innocent bystander. It can be so deep as some PTSD specialists suggest that it can rewire the brain neurotically and cause a condition called emotional dysregulation (link below). This can be verified by brain scans. Substance abuse is a problem as old as grapes and has traditionally been treated as a primary disorder. What is being discovered that often, it is actually a symptom of underlying mental conditions like PTSD and bipolar disorder. Treating addiction has historically been very difficult, with a low success rate unless the underlying disorder is recognized and addressed. Helpful links for more info: Post Traumatic Stress Disorder Overview, Mayo Clinic Complex PTSD, Psychology Today Emotional Dysregulation, Psychology Today Role of PTSD in Substance Abuse
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nectarine - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 23, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Nectarines are a type of peach. They are actually a mutation which gives them a smooth skin and smaller size. Nectarines may taste sweeter than peaches in general, but their sugar content is actually a bit lower. They are a healthy sweet snack you can enjoy without guilt. -
Me either. Never have I ever been to Australia (but I would like to)
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Rending Time Darkest night to brightest morn, Depressive state to manic glee This is a horrific burden borne In desperate silent misery Unknown and unseen, the battle rages, The inner war never ends. On invisible silent fields, where the cage is, Remembered pain yet rends. Battles and wars may mercifully end, Don't ever make the mistake of thinking it's done, In your dreams, wounds and fallen friends, You'll smell the blood and smoke and wonder, did we really win?
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larder - Word of the Day - Fri Mar 22, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
No Cajun larder is complete without at least a half dozen different peppers. -
irate - Word of the Day - Thu Mar 21, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Dealing with taxes always brings out my sweetness and light. Who am I kidding? Irate doesn't even start to cover it. After the Feds get over raping me this time, I'll be lucky if I'm not homeless. -
merganser - Word of the Day - Tue Mar 19, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
It's his accent, Hagar. How that duck stays out of the oven, I'll never figure out. -
RIP Eric Carmen, former singer-songwriter for the Raspberries.
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I didn't mean to. It seems my house sitter had a side gig. I recognized my couch and keep is as a sort of shrine. Never have I ever run ten miles (but I think I'm stubborn enough to get there).
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pelage - Word of the Day - Fri Mar 15, 2024
JamesSavik commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
If I am not careful, my six cats will garland me in my own pelage of cat hair. 🐈🐈 🐈⬛🐈⬛ 🐈🐈⬛ -
James Version 7577.00 Odin# init -compile module -f james_personality_v7577.00 | link base-code | run Warning! Personality module james_personality_v7577.00 contains multiple red flags: -PTSD -Depression, chronic -Chemical Dependency Tendencies -Trust Issues -Rage Issues -Inability to bond with others This personality module is deemed damaged. It is not advised to continue. Continue? (Y/N) Odin# Yes Memory sc
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Bed (Six cats + 1 thunderstorm == crowded bed)
