Nephylim
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I'm glad I'm keeping your attention. Maybe you should take a break in case you get bored I'm so glad you're enjoying my stories. This one was my first NaNoWiMo so I'm particularly fond of it
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I'm glad you liked it. Ash hasn't 'gone' yet, trust me
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Well, when I started reading it was on the basis that I felt obliged to as it was in the competition and not because I thought I would like it. But as soon as I had read half the first chapter I was completely sucked in and stayed sucked in until the end. A wonderful story
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How interesting and complex. You had me guessing right to the end.
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Chapter 13 - Ghosts from the Past
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Ghosts from the Past
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Chapter 4 - Don't Be Scared
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Don't Be Scared
WOW, thanks. And for sure, call me Nephy, or that bitch, or you know - her I'm not precious. Thanks for the review. I'm really glad that you are loving the story because I fell in love with the characters myself -
thanks hun. I'm glad i didn't disappoint.
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Do you prefer to read or write chaptered stories or otherwise?
Nephylim replied to Kev de Cauchery's topic in The Lounge
I guess both. As long as a story is good quality i will enjoy it no matter how long it is. Sometimes I like to read things that are self contained and easy to read in one sitting, other times I like to get caught up in a chaptered story. I even like cliffhangers, they get the blood racing and the anticipation sharpened. I find it difficult to write short stories because the word limit is too confining and restricting. I have written short stories and enjoyed the experience but only when i have a self contained image of what I want the story to be and where i want it to go. I gues both to both then really -
Physical Long hair Lovelly eyes Personality Gentle Sweet Kind Faithful Lifestyle Alternative My main MUST HAVE in a realtionship is that they accept me as I am, all my strange beliefs and behaviour and all.
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You know how much I hate you for this chapter. Bitch
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Yes, that was sexy alright
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Well, I think that Silver is very confused and I think that the whole discussion about love just fried his brain. He's not really used to this kind of conversation. He's changed but not as much as either he or River think he has. Thanks for the review as always
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He is silent all the way to the car and I don’t know what to say to him. It’s as if I have just met him for the first time today and I suppose, in a way, I have. I’m in awe of him. To tell the truth I’m slightly scared of him, of the confidence and self assurance, the edge... and frankly I am freaking out about where and how he got them. Where has he been and what has he been doing? That boy, Ariel, who probably wasn’t a boy at all, had been wearing... well he hadn’t really been wearing very muc
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Yeah, okay. You won me over. Yeah, it;s right. It's the way it should have been. I guess that the way things went made it clear in the end that Coop and Kyle were never meant to be and Chase and Coop were...are. You are such a bitch. I'm so glad I left off in the middle and got to read the last half in one go. If not I might have had to kill you
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Well, I have to admit that Coop is redeeming himself just a tiny bit. I also have to admit that Coop and Chase are good together. Coop is getting over the committment thing and i figure that things are as they should be even if it's not as we would have wanted them to be. I still want to slap Coop but i guess that i'll put the spade and castrating tool to one side for a while
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A GIRL??? And Chase as a boyfriend??? Great... another broken heart in the trail left by the great Cooper Carpenter. Whatever he's got he deserves.
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Okay. One Coop really should listen to Sebastian Two. Coop really should stop seeing Chase Three, Coop totally deserves Spencer sleeping with Kyle Four. Spencer should keep on sleeping with Kyle... hell he's been a better boyfriend to Kyle without being his boyfriend than Coop has Five... Coop should just get the clap for being such a slap
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Sigh. SO he gets to scew up more guys. Well woopy doo for him. As far as the writing goes that was a fabulous chapter. To be honest I can't remember the last time I read a story with so much sex but also so much story. Nice one
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If i thought that Kyle was really happy I would say Good for Him but I don;'t think he is. Something is going on and it worries me. I guess Coop is about to get hurt and I should be glad about that but Kyle is caught up in it so I don't. Goddamn man you know how to play the emotions don't you. And the sooner Spencer finds out about Chase the better.
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Hmmm. WTF. I hope that this one falls on him from a very great height. Still not wanting to bury him but only because I want to give him a chance to do it himself. i appreciate teen angst and I apprecaite confusion and commitment phobia but I swear if he hurts Kyle one more time I am going to find a way of getting into this story and using that tool on him. Maybe I'll just go off and rewrite the ending from here.
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Yeah right... Who the hell does Coop think he is? I know that kids make mistakes and fool around but how many times can he break somone's heart before he gets the picture that it's wrong to do it. How can he lie there after what's happened and think that? I think that your writing must be bloody good to get me thinking like this about a person who doesn't even exist. I've seen in other reviews talk of a shovel and a hole. Well I figure it's Coop who's using them and i would like to borrow that shovel. Maybe I won't bury him but I sure as hell would like to hit him over the head with it
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Okay. I REALLY hate Cooper. I want to take Kyle, wrap him in a box and only open it on special occasions.. like to celebrate a day ending in Y. He's just so wonderful I am actually feeling really sad for him and angry as hell at Coop. Actually what I am thinking right now is that Kyle deserves better and he shoudl close the door on Coop forever and find someone who deserves him. I'm not sure I ever care what happens to Coop now. He's made his bed so he can lie on it with whoever he likes... except Kyle or David.
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There had better not be !!!!! I am so with Frostina on this one. GOD Coop is SUCH a dick and not in a good way
