Puppilull's poetry prompts - 2. Poetry prompt 12 - Rondo

I don't quite understand the 'rules' of a rondo... I read the prompt when I was exhausted from writing. All I know is this is very powerful, to the point of stunning. You should maybe format it better... so all the lines are separate, but it wouldn't change the impact it had on me. Poetry is definitely one of your callings... cheers... Gary

Puppilull, I don't think you need to worry about the free fall at all. This is really meaningful, and wonderfully expressed. Good job!

I agree with Gary, the formatting would only make it easier to read... And, maybe you're a poet yet!

What I'd like to know, is this inspired by a movie moment? It must be a killer moment if it is! Please pop back to the poetry prompt page and maybe attach a link to the scene if you can. That would be awesome.

On 08/05/2015 03:59 AM, Headstall said:

I don't quite understand the 'rules' of a rondo... I read the prompt when I was exhausted from writing. All I know is this is very powerful, to the point of stunning. You should maybe format it better... so all the lines are separate, but it wouldn't change the impact it had on me. Poetry is definitely one of your callings... cheers... Gary

Thank you so much! It's like a drug this poetry thing...

I'm using my tablet and phone, so the format issue is irritating. I thought I had it fixed, but apparently not...

On 08/05/2015 05:09 AM, Defiance19 said:

Puppilull, I don't think you need to worry about the free fall at all. This is really meaningful, and wonderfully expressed. Good job!

 

I agree with Gary, the formatting would only make it easier to read... And, maybe you're a poet yet!

Thank you! That's so nice of you to say!

As for format, see my reply to Gary below...

On 08/05/2015 05:43 AM, AC Benus said:

What I'd like to know, is this inspired by a movie moment? It must be a killer moment if it is! Please pop back to the poetry prompt page and maybe attach a link to the scene if you can. That would be awesome.

I'm writing this on my phone on a very, very iffy wifi in Spain... Will try and explain myself in the thread. It is indeed a movie scene.

Wow...that was intense. Very moving Puppilull.

On 08/05/2015 01:25 PM, LitLover said:

Wow...that was intense. Very moving Puppilull.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Very well done! It made me think of what it's like to start life as a child and then growing up to find out the truth.

On 08/10/2015 08:02 AM, Twisted_Dreemz said:

Very well done! It made me think of what it's like to start life as a child and then growing up to find out the truth.

I sincerely hope you're not speaking from experience. I get what you mean, but that would be a terrible thing to happen to a child.

Thanks for reading,reflecting and reviewing!