Puppilull's poetry prompts - 14. Poetry prompt 10 - Italian sonnet

I guess you had the same dream as my sister. lol
I don't know why I always have to read your poems aloud to get into the melodie. This time I was alone, though. So no weird reactions from other people. And yes, I like it.

On 11/21/2015 01:51 AM, aditus said:

I guess you had the same dream as my sister. lol

I don't know why I always have to read your poems aloud to get into the melodie. This time I was alone, though. So no weird reactions from other people. And yes, I like it.

Ha, ha! Good thing you got through it without looking like a looney! I think my background in theater and singing might mean I subconsciously go for theatrics.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Thanks for taking the poetry prompt challenge! It's a good sonnet, for with the Italian form, dreams are perfect to explore. I like how the 'kissing rhymes' (the b-b words) sound natural and comfortable together. That's impressive, and part of why the form is a challenge in English.

I like how the poem seems to capture the unsure nature of the dream, or what it means, and telegraphs it well. I like that aspect a lot!