Headstall's Poetry Prompts - 27. Chapter 27 Poetry Prompt 4- Folly, and Bitterness

On 12/07/2015 03:49 AM, Reader1810 said:

Poweful words telling a powerful message - a message that is beyond the grasp of fools.

As always, nicely done Gary

Thanks, Reader... there are none so blind as those who will not see. Well put...'beyond the grasp of fools'... I so appreciate the support... cheers... Gary...

Some people who lie to themselves and refuse to see their own faults or just don't care about anyone's feelings or needs but their own. You captured that well here. You are very good at wielding powerful words.

On 12/07/2015 07:48 AM, LitLover said:

Some people who lie to themselves and refuse to see their own faults or just don't care about anyone's feelings or needs but their own. You captured that well here. You are very good at wielding powerful words.

Poetry is so good for my soul. I was so agitated when I woke up, and I calmed right down after getting these out... although I could use some sleep lol. Thank you, Lit, for telling me your take on these poems... I think there are some who, when they want something, know what the consequences may be, but ignore them, figuring it's their right to have what they want. It's only when their life falls apart that they're forced to face the cost of their selfish desires... just my take on things... we all see things differently... been around a long time...bitterness resides lol... cheers... Gary

Wow Gary.. these are powerful. Well written and powerful. People make mistakes and sometimes its worth fighting to keep things together, sometimes its not. And well only the people involved and make that choice.
nice work Gary
tim

Powerful words my friend
I hope these helped purge some of the past

On 12/07/2015 01:32 PM, Mikiesboy said:

Wow Gary.. these are powerful. Well written and powerful. People make mistakes and sometimes its worth fighting to keep things together, sometimes its not. And well only the people involved and make that choice.

nice work Gary

tim

Thanks, tim. I really appreciate the review and the support. Your kind words mean a lot. I think I am evolving, in that I am learning what not to waste my time on. You can't change people, and even when they ask, be careful about getting involved or giving second chances you know won't work. I hate that I feel bitterness, but I do... Cheers, buddy... Gary...

On 12/07/2015 11:06 PM, Bucket1 said:

Powerful words my friend

I hope these helped purge some of the past

Thanks, Bucket. I'm glad you found power here. These did help purge more past, and even present stresses... I try to be there for my friends, and that won't change, but it's difficult sometimes... thanks for the review, and the support, my friend... cheers... Gary...