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Headstall's Poetry Prompts - 3. Chapter 3 Haiku-Tail Thumps and Clicking Nails

Tribute to Mallory

Headstall’s Poetry Prompts

 

 

Chapter 3 Haiku-Tail Thumps and Clicking Nails

 

 

 

Wake to silent house

No nails clicking on pine floors

Our sentry is gone

 

 

 

Aching loneliness

Memories lurk everywhere

Wish I had you back

 

 

 

Compelled to your grave

Airless football placed atop

Thought you might miss it

 

 

 

Tail thumps on the floor

Begging at your food cupboard

Missed pain in the ass

 

 

 

Bite marks on blue Frisbee

More tears from an endless well

Couldn’t throw it yet

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It really is the little every day things that we miss the most isn't?

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On 07/10/2015 07:15 AM, Reader1810 said:

It really is the little every day things that we miss the most isn't?

Yes it is, Reader, and there are reminders of that everywhere. Sorry it took so long to reply but it was easier to put it off. Thanks for the review and the sentiment... cheers... Gary...

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On 07/10/2015 09:03 AM, LitLover said:

These were wonderful Gary. The football had me bawling.

I can finally reply now. The football one was so hard. When I put it on her grave, I was a mess, and when my kids saw it there, they were the same. I felt kind of bad that I did it, because I didn't think of them seeing it. Thanks for reviewing, Lit... Gary

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It took me four days until I caved and got a new puppy after my first dog died. I couldn't stand the silence and all the things you so expertly put in poetic words.

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On 07/16/2015 03:30 AM, aditus said:

It took me four days until I caved and got a new puppy after my first dog died. I couldn't stand the silence and all the things you so expertly put in poetic words.

I just can't think of that yet. I was doing fine today, and then the mail came, with an incredible condolence card from our veterinarian, saying what a wonderful dog Mallory was, and what wonderful owners we were... It was signed by the whole clinic, and it was sweet, but it sent me into a tailspin again... thanks for the review, Adi... Gary

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The 'couldn't throw it out yet' part resonated deeply with me. For a time I thought I could not bear to look at Leppy's bed in the kitchen, and considered tossing it out. But then, the other dogs began going to it, and I knew they were missing him too. That bed is used everyday by them now, and it's best that they still have a piece of 'him' too.

 

Thanks, Gary.

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On 08/26/2015 11:45 AM, AC Benus said:

The 'couldn't throw it out yet' part resonated deeply with me. For a time I thought I could not bear to look at Leppy's bed in the kitchen, and considered tossing it out. But then, the other dogs began going to it, and I knew they were missing him too. That bed is used everyday by them now, and it's best that they still have a piece of 'him' too.

 

Thanks, Gary.

These ones were me at my lowest... when the reality of the permanence set in. It was the process necessary to heal. Thanks for giving me this outlet, and for reviewing...Gary

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On 09/28/2015 01:07 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Gary... crying with you..

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Man, I was a mess then. So were my kids. the support from here meant a lot, as did writing these poems. They were a release for me, I guess in a way like poetry is for you. Thanks for the review, and the commiseration... cheers... Gary...

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