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Headstall's Poetry Prompts - 24. Chapter 24- Poetry Prompt 15- Missing You

Prompt 15- Free Verse

Headstall’s Poetry Prompts

 

 

Chapter 24 Missing You

 

 

I struggle with my patience

Unusual for me

I miss you

I miss your skin

But, even more

I miss the scent that rises from it

That heated reminder of where my home is

I miss us

No worries, I can handle it

It’s just that

I ache

Some things are worth waiting for.
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Beautiful Gary. I get it. Get missing 'him'. Hope he's back home soon. I wanted mine back from the moment he left .. and hope he's never gone that long again.
I hope your guy is aching for you, too.
tim

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The surety of love and the strength it bestows upon us is wonderful.
Nicely done Gary. :)

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Wonderful Gary!

 

When the one we love is missing, we miss many things. You've expressed these nicely.

 

Thanks for this.

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On 11/16/2015 06:00 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Beautiful Gary. I get it. Get missing 'him'. Hope he's back home soon. I wanted mine back from the moment he left .. and hope he's never gone that long again.

I hope your guy is aching for you, too.

tim

Thanks, tim. I figured you would get it. I talked to him tonight. I just needed to get it out. Thanks for the review, buddy... cheers... Gary...

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On 11/16/2015 06:04 AM, Parker Owens said:

Yes. Beautifully said.

Thank you, Parker. Much appreciated. Cheers... Gary...

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On 11/16/2015 06:20 AM, LitLover said:

Beautiful. I hope he realizes how lucky he is to have a man like you waiting for him to come back home :)

Thanks, Lit, and yeah, he says so, and I believe him. Thanks for reviewing, my friend... cheers... Gary...

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On 11/16/2015 06:29 AM, Reader1810 said:

No likes... :heart: :heart: :heart:

 

The surety of love and the strength it bestows upon us is wonderful.

Nicely done Gary. :)

Thank you, Reader. Lovely words. Much appreciated... cheers... Gary...

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On 11/16/2015 06:56 AM, Defiance19 said:

C'est l'amour, that ache... Hope he hurries home. As always Gary, splendidly said...

Thanks, Def. That ache we all know. Thanks for reviewing... cheers... Gary...

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On 11/16/2015 07:24 AM, skinnydragon said:

Wonderful Gary!

 

When the one we love is missing, we miss many things. You've expressed these nicely.

 

Thanks for this.

Thank you, Skinny. Missing someone is tough, but it isn't all bad...thanks for the review... cheers... Gary...

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On 11/17/2015 12:28 AM, Bucket1 said:

Ahhh that special yearning...

Yeah ... I'm sure we all know the feeling... thanks for reviewing, buddy... cheers... Gary...

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