Puppilull's poetry prompts - 16. Poetry prompt 18 - Rubaiyat

I haven't had the time to study the prompt, Puppilull, but you gave beauty to death... as a poem it had power for me... and I understood "Muse" very well... cheers... Gary

Hi Pup!
Loved the Muse poem. I thought it was brilliant.
The poem about the bridge, was wonderful. You told the story I saw in the video and made it beautiful.
You did a terrific job! Thanks for sharing.

tim

Tumble, grumble, inverted, humble – love it! There is motion and then a feeling; that's almost the sensation that being inspired itself. Wonderful.

On the longer poem, it is beautiful. I like your rhyme choices for this type of poem a lot, and I hope you will have filed away in your brain when some future inspiration hits. I bet we could see some stunning Rubaiyat from you!

On 02/13/2016 03:26 PM, Headstall said:

I haven't had the time to study the prompt, Puppilull, but you gave beauty to death... as a poem it had power for me... and I understood "Muse" very well... cheers... Gary

While the muse poem more or less wrote itself, the other one was much harder. So much emotion it threatened to take over completel. I guess that's the difference between written poem and silent movie.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

On 02/13/2016 06:23 PM, Mikiesboy said:

Hi Pup!

Loved the Muse poem. I thought it was brilliant.

The poem about the bridge, was wonderful. You told the story I saw in the video and made it beautiful.

You did a terrific job! Thanks for sharing.

 

tim

I actually had to struggle hard to focus when writing the bridge poem. All that emotion threatened to flood me completely. The relationship to my muse is more relaxed, even if I can be challenged a lot...

On 02/14/2016 12:37 PM, AC Benus said:

Tumble, grumble, inverted, humble – love it! There is motion and then a feeling; that's almost the sensation that being inspired itself. Wonderful.

 

On the longer poem, it is beautiful. I like your rhyme choices for this type of poem a lot, and I hope you will have filed away in your brain when some future inspiration hits. I bet we could see some stunning Rubaiyat from you!

Like I said before, my muse poem just appeared in my mind and all I had to do was write it down. Apparently, musie wanted the spotlight... I think the motion - emotion captures how my muse works. Never standing still, always trying to be honest.

The bridge movie was much harder. I was on the verge of being overpowered by my own reaction. So I had to distance myself, which made it difficult to say what I truly felt.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!