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The Ultimate Vehicle of Earthly Bliss - 8. A feather in the wind

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Gedichte aus „Bleib jung meine Seele“

 

II.

Du bist ein tiefer Brunnen

In deß Gruft

Das Wasser lockt, bis daß es den der sich darüberbeugt

Herniederrust.

 

Ein leichtes Spiel – ein Federlein im Wind

Bist du mir –

Und vieler Jahre langes Schweigen

Löst sich vor dir.

 

Du bist ein Feuerbrand, deß Garben

Glühendrot

Die Nacht durchsirren. Wo sie fallen

Trifft der Tod –

 

Ein Lachen bist du, das, kaum noch ertönt, schon

Weit verklingt –

So wie in meiner Kindheit Nächten

Ein Lied durch ferne Gassen singt.

 

Bist leicht – bist Spiel mir – und

Doch Ewigkeit.

Vom dunklen Mund der Ewigkeit

Trink ich schwer und langsam deine Schönheit

Bis zum Grund. [i]

 

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The Two “Stay Young at Heart, my Psyche” Poems

 

II.

You are like a profound well

In whose crypt

The waters lure until they flow

Round the one peering down.

 

A lithesome game – a feather in the wind

Are you to me –

But many stifled years melt away

Where’er your tread goes.

 

You are like a firebrand whose sparks whirl

Glowing hot

To buzz through the night. Wherever they fall

They thwart death –

 

You’re a laugh, that, as soon as one hears it

Fades away –

Like in my childhood when night-songs would sing

Through some far-removed thoroughfares.

 

You’re lithesome – a match for me – yet

Eternity.

So from the dark mouth of eternity

I deeply, slowly imbibe your beauty

To the dregs.

 

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[i] “Gedichte aus „Bleib jung meine Seele“” Toni Schwabe, Ibid., ps. 47-50

https://archive.org/details/3476447/page/46/mode/2up

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These lines speak especially persuasively to me today:

 

But many stifled years melt away

Where’er your tread goes.

 

You are like a firebrand whose sparks whirl

Glowing hot

To buzz through the night. Wherever they fall

They thwart death –

 

You’re a laugh, that, as soon as one hears it

Fades away –

Like in my childhood when night-songs would sing

Through some far-removed thoroughfares.

I have been trying to reconnect with someone who was dear to me once. This poem reminds me that love is in motion, it’s not a tableaux. 

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  On 2/29/2024 at 4:40 PM, Parker Owens said:

These lines speak especially persuasively to me today:

 

 

But many stifled years melt away

Where’er your tread goes.

 

You are like a firebrand whose sparks whirl

Glowing hot

To buzz through the night. Wherever they fall

They thwart death –

 

You’re a laugh, that, as soon as one hears it

Fades away –

Like in my childhood when night-songs would sing

Through some far-removed thoroughfares.

 

I have been trying to reconnect with someone who was dear to me once. This poem reminds me that love is in motion, it’s not a tableaux. 

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An excellent observation, Parker 

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  On 2/29/2024 at 8:27 PM, ReaderPaul said:

Some persons are an inspiration to certain other persons.  The person referred to in this poem seems especially esteemed and inspiring to the poet.

The reference to a well and then drinking/imbibing deeply to the dregs-- beautiful.

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Thanks, ReaderPaul. Your comment reminds me how dream symbolists say clear, deep water is representative of consciousness. A desire to dive in and swim to the bottom in a dream, they say, means a person has a desire to plumb their own depths to a greater extent than they are 

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