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The Ultimate Vehicle of Earthly Bliss - 21. Trapped

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Gefangen

(nach dem Französischen des Paul Verlaine)

 

Blau steht der Himmel überm Dach

Ein stiller Traum

Und seine Zweige überm Dach

Wiegt ein Baum.

Die Glocke vor dem Himmel dort

Leise klingt

Ein Vogel auf dem Baume dort

Klagend singt.

Mein Gott wie ist das Leben nur

So Klein und matt!

Ein quälend Lärmen hört man nur

Dort von der Stadt.

Was hast du getan, ach, der du hier,

So endlos weinst?

Wohin verlorst du, der jetzt hier

Die Jugend einst? [i]

 

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Trapped

(after the French by Paul Verlaine)

 

Blue waits the sky above the roof,

A frozen dream,

While boughs sway over the same roof

As if to scream.

The bells wait before heaven there

And slowly ring,

While birds within the tree there

Plaintively sing.

Mon dieu! If life were not only

Small and gritty.

A vibrant pulse is heard only

From the city.

So, what have I done to be here

With endless cries?

Where did you, who are now trapped here,

Spend those youthful sighs?

 

 

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[i] “Gefangen” Toni Schwabe, Ibid., p. 23

https://archive.org/details/3476447/page/22/mode/2up

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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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It has to be a challenge to find rhyming words which fit the meaning of the original poem.  

This evokes desperation, description, endurance, and yet -- joy and love.

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Trapped is most apt a title for this poem. Schwabe makes me feel the granular frustrations of day to day life in a small, sclerotic town with no pulse, no heartbeat. Beyond the roof - the limits of that town - I sense vibrant, warm life, as the first eight lines suggest. Beneath there is greyness and dull despair. Thank you for bringing yet another gem to us. 

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