Red Running Shoes

I had to add this after reading Tim's review - it's hysterical! As usual! lol

And I think he hit the nail on the head too.

Aaww, thanks Lisa, I'm glad you liked it and agree. You should join us in the story forum, where we're all shouting at the characters, Addy and each other in the most hilarous manner in order to work out what the F... is going on.

On 12/23/2014 04:30 AM, Lisa said:

I had to add this after reading Tim's review - it's hysterical! As usual! lol

 

And I think he hit the nail on the head too.

On 12/23/2014 06:40 PM, Timothy M. said:

Aaww, thanks Lisa, I'm glad you liked it and agree. You should join us in the story forum, where we're all shouting at the characters, Addy and each other in the most hilarous manner in order to work out what the F... is going on.

Okay, so, this is a great story. The characters live and breathe, the dialog is true to life, I literally feel the emotions as I read through the story. I am completely on Jonah's side here, Ren was absolutely wrong to do what he did and although Jonah is using his running shoes, he is acting according to the needs of his heart. There are lots of arguments for and against so many of the motives and interactions in this story, but for people who have lived through these types of situations I can honestly say that Jonah, whatever his faults might be, acted in the only way he could to maintain his own sanity and integrity.

My heart aches for Jonah, but all I feel for Ren is pity that he threw away love for arrogance and childish spite.

On 01/26/2015 06:04 AM, AzPolarBear55 said:

Okay, so, this is a great story. The characters live and breathe, the dialog is true to life, I literally feel the emotions as I read through the story. I am completely on Jonah's side here, Ren was absolutely wrong to do what he did and although Jonah is using his running shoes, he is acting according to the needs of his heart. There are lots of arguments for and against so many of the motives and interactions in this story, but for people who have lived through these types of situations I can honestly say that Jonah, whatever his faults might be, acted in the only way he could to maintain his own sanity and integrity.

My heart aches for Jonah, but all I feel for Ren is pity that he threw away love for arrogance and childish spite.

I'm glad you're on Jonah's side and you understand him and his motives.

Also thank you so much for your nice words, AzPolarBear55. There is no greater praise than reading you can literally feel the emotion or the dialog is true to life.