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Falling Apart

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Genres: Romance
Sub-genres: Contemporary Romance

Control. Discipline. Be Strong. Be Good. My mantra. I can do it. I have done it for years now. I need to do it, it's my job. But damn if those two intriguing lords have me faltering, willing to disobey my Master to help them.

This story is set in an alternative historical earth, something like the Renaissance time. Kye is a young man who is has agreed to a service contract with Lord Barrett for the sake of his parents.  He didn't know what that service contract would entail.  This is told from Kye's POV. 
Warning:  This story contains dubious consent and abuse and violence (hey, it's one of MY stories, what do you expect?).  Please do not read if any of this bothers you. That being said:  enjoy the ride!
Copyright © 2016 craftingmom; All Rights Reserved.

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  • Action Packed 6
  • Addictive/Pacing 7
  • Characters 7
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 2
  • Compelling 1
  • Feel-Good 1
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 4
  • Tearjerker 7
  • Unique 5
  • World Building 3

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
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  • 4. Chapter 4
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  • 5. Chapter 5
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  • 6. Chapter 6
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  • 7. Chapter 7
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  • 8. Chapter 8
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  • 9. Chapter 9
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  • 10. Chapter 10
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  • 11. Chapter 11
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  • 12. Chapter 12
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  • 13. Chapter 13
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  • 14. Chapter 14
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  • 15. Chapter 15
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  • 16. Chapter 16
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  • 17. Chapter 17
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  • 18. Chapter 18
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  • 19. Chapter 19
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  • 20. Chapter 20
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  • 21. Chapter 21
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  • 22. Chapter 22
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  • 23. Chapter 23
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  • 24. Chapter 24
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  • 25. Chapter 25
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  • 26. Chapter 26
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  • 29. Chapter 29
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  • 30. Chapter 30
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  • 31. Chapter 31
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  • 32. Chapter 32
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  • 33. Chapter 33
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  • 35. Chapter 35
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  • 36. Chapter 36
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  • 37. Chapter 37
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  • 38. Chapter 38
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  • 39. Chapter 39
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Pascal

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

We follow Kye, after he makes a decision that will change his life forever. The question is though, will he be able to change too, overcome his learnt behaviour and thinking?

What a fantastic story! Every character is so well written, they come alive in every scene. Thank you @craftingmom for making me cut a few nights short 😉

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Caz Pedroso

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

I fell in love with Kye very early on in this story. Here was a young man who was trying to do his best and everyone around him was either abusing him or thought he was a pampered pet.

Then to make matters worse he is rescued only to be judged by his rescuers as well.

Slowly the real story comes out and Lord Ash gets to know the real Kye. It’s not long before Ash falls for Kye and they begin to work at a relationship.

Of course, things never go easy. Cue Kye’s dad to try and mess things up for Kye…Again!

I won’t spoil the ending, all I will say is I have read this story so many times can probably repeat a lot of it off by heart.

A great read :) 

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Parker Owens

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Falling Apart is a fantastic yarn set in an absorbing alternate reality. Here, a boy named Kye discovers his own strength, his true worth, and the courage to change his destiny. It is a gripping and beautifully told tale. 

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