My Immature Poetry - 6. Bin Thumhaara Pyaar!!!

Gosh, this is beautiful. It's so songlike. One like is not enough; I'd give you a hundred if I could.

Knowing what the message is through the English version helped my reading, but I wouldn't need it to recognize some awesome poetics here.

Like in the first section, 'Nahi' anchors the end of each line while a new word starts it. In the following lines, that's reversed, and 'Naahi Yeh' grounds the beginning of each line. It's so beautiful.

It really is lovely. I hope you post more of your Hindi poems on GA.

On 11/13/2015 04:18 AM, AC Benus said:

Gosh, this is beautiful. It's so songlike. One like is not enough; I'd give you a hundred if I could.

 

Knowing what the message is through the English version helped my reading, but I wouldn't need it to recognize some awesome poetics here.

 

Like in the first section, 'Nahi' anchors the end of each line while a new word starts it. In the following lines, that's reversed, and 'Naahi Yeh' grounds the beginning of each line. It's so beautiful.

 

It really is lovely. I hope you post more of your Hindi poems on GA.

It's My Honor to get this Enthusiastic Compliment from you. I so proud of Myself right now...

The words you pointed out are the basic concept I took for this poem. I had done a lot of research for this poem, put all my efforts to write is as good as it can be...

Hindi poems??? I'll think about that. But I doubt that most will understand it. And it's not that easy to build suitable English version every time...