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My Immature Poetry - 28. Chapter 28

strong>I have an online friend whom I call as my Little Brother. We haven't met yet but love and care for each other. On one occasion he had sent me some 'Shayaries' addressing me. And this is my promised version of English translation...
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I have an online friend whom I call as my Little Brother. We haven't met yet but love and care for each other. On one occasion he had sent me some 'Shayaries' addressing me.

I know they may be look like some normal line, but they meant special for me. So, that's why I wanted to share some of those here. I hope you guys enjoy reading... smile.png
 

Jinda hote huwe, Jindgi se door hai.
Teri khushi ke liya, khushi se door hai.
Iss se zyada pyar ki saza kya hogi.
Tere hote huwe tujhse door hain hum.

Mujhe yeh gham nahin
—badal gayaa zamaana.
Meri zindagi hain tumse
—kahin tum badal na janaa yaar.

Raat ko maine duwa mangi,
Duwa mein apni maut mangi.
Par, KHUDA ne kahan
—Mout to tujhe dunga jaruor,
Par Uss ka kya
Jisne teri lambi umar ki DUWA mangi—


And here are My English Version of translation... smile.png

 

 

Alive— but away from a life.
For your glee, absent from delight.
Is there another torment than this—
You are still here—yet still afar.

I am not in despair of that
—this society has changed.
My life got wedded with you
—lest you change thyself, dear.

At night I prayed,
in plea, I sought for my death.
But, God spoke back
—For sure, I'll grant thee death,
but what of that one
who sought the wish of thy long life—

strong>Thanks to all who supported and waited for me to translate and publish here. Always want to hear what you think...
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On 23/09/2016 at 1:50 AM, AC Benus said:

Lovely, Emi. I like the ending very much. :yes:

All credit goes to him. He was the who spoke the words. I just translated with my little poetry  knowledge. I'll let him know that you all liked those. And thank you for the review. 

 

~Emi. 

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On 23/09/2016 at 2:11 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Emi it is absolutely lovely. Adore it!!

 

They were just a rough translation. In Hindi, the meaning will snatch your heart and give a mesmerising feeling. I am glad you loved them. I loved them myself as well. Thank you for the review. 

 

~Emi. 

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On 23/09/2016 at 2:15 AM, Parker Owens said:

Wonderful, Emi...it was well worth the wait. What a moving poem.

 

Actually it's a set of poems called Shayaries. Just like couplets. But no rule on lines and syllable. There may be Shayaries with different forms but these were not them. But I am glad you liked those. Thank you very much for the review. 

 

~Emi. 

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