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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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My Immature Poetry - 30. A Lonely Sky

A Haiku tried the night where me and the sky looked so empty without a reason...

The vast emptiness
Spreads on the rainy night sky
Behind tall teak tree

 

The First version of the poem with the help of the suggestions given by @Mikiesboy and @AC Benus

 

The vast emptiness

spreads behind the tall teak tree

on this rainy night

Thanks for reading. Do comment your thoughts before you leave...

~Emi.
Copyright 2015 MGK; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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