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    Emi GS
  • Emi GS
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  • 06/29/2016
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My Immature Poetry - 24. Funny Pa

strong>This Cinquain has been written funnily when my father forgot his mobile at some store. Just a fun side.

My Feet

hurt, but I am

riding still because Pa

lost his mobile and I'm his search

engine.

strong>Thank for encouraging me by reading. And don't forget to review... :)
Copyright 2015 MGK; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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Parker Owens

This is fantastic, Emi! I really, really like this...just my kind of wit and warmth and humor. What a wonderful addition to your collection.

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Kapucinski

So beautiful. This is, what poetry is about for me. You take just few simple words and capture the mood and the sentiment so accurately, that other 'search engines' can relate. Thanks!

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Emi GS
On 06/30/2016 01:34 AM, Parker Owens said:

This is fantastic, Emi! I really, really like this...just my kind of wit and warmth and humor. What a wonderful addition to your collection.

Yeah a really funny incident and I am riding sweaty and all to get his mobile before someone took it. And I really glad you enjoyed it that much. :)

 

Thank you for the enthusiastic review... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 06/30/2016 11:20 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Nice Emi.. very clever and amusing!!!

Thanks Tim. And here I need to thank Val for her encouragement and some suggestions. I am glad you enjoyed it... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 06/30/2016 04:56 PM, Kapucinski said:

So beautiful. This is, what poetry is about for me. You take just few simple words and capture the mood and the sentiment so accurately, that other 'search engines' can relate. Thanks!

Its always makes me smile to read reviews from new readers. And thank you so much taking your time to read and review for my poem. :)

 

Yeah, I too definitely believes in simple words that makes wonders...

 

~Emi.

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