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    Emi GS
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My Immature Poetry - 27. My Youth For You

strong>A challenge given by me to the fellows of 'Live Poets Society', and here is my submission in the name of a Lyrics Poem...
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I have a challenge for you all. The below, is a line which will have to be your first line and chose which ever form you wanted to choose, according to it. And finish it. Show your influence on your surroundings... wink.png
 

My Youth, my youth is for you—Just for you.

 

 

My youth, my youth is just for you.
Only for you— Just you.

Capture the blueness of these eyes,
and hold those brown frizzles.
Absorb the redness from these cheeks,
and kiss those rosy lips.
Touch every inch of white skin.
and engulf each black mole.

My looks, glamour and handsomeness
are all for you— Just you.
My youth, my youth is just for you
Only for you— Just you.

Fasten my breath— Make it shallow,
and increase my heart beat.
Create goose-bumps all over me,
and make me sweat highly.
Take me with you to the ninth cloud
and make me squeak and spurt.

My physique, charm and coquetry
are all for you— Just you
My Youth, my youth is just for you.
Only for you— Just you.

strong>A Big :thankyou:  to all who took the challenge and wrote a poem.:worship:  I glad you did.:2thumbs:  And now don't forget to tell me what you think of my poem... :D
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AC Benus

"Fasten my breath—make it shallow,
and increase my heart beat."

 

Beautiful lines!!! I love that turn of phrase, 'fasten my breath.' Love it! You've been pretty true to the Lyrics Poetry Prompt challenge too, and I appreciate your hard work. Please keep it up.

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On 22/09/2016 at 0:06 AM, Parker Owens said:

I think it pretty racy, Emi. Not to worry...it gave me a few shivers, after all!

First of all, sorry for replying so late. I had to re-read the poem again to reply. :gikkle:

 

Yeah, I felt like I was a sacred thing that going to be sacrificed. All rushy yet all in detail. :*) I am some what proud I made shiver you. And thank you for the review. I appreciate it.

 

~Emi. 

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On 22/09/2016 at 1:09 AM, Roberto Zuniga said:

I liked it, it's like raw feeling and passion and tenderness. XO Emi!

 

Sometimes it's best to be raw and passionate. ;) I am glad you liked and enjoyed it. And thank you for the review. :)

~Emi. 

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On 22/09/2016 at 1:10 AM, Headstall said:

Nice, Emi. I loved the 'nothing held back' pledge that is made.... 'ninth cloud'... awesome...

 

Yeah I turned quite a rushy type. I don't know what I was thinking right then but the challenge made me that exited. I am glad you loved it. Thank you so much for the review... :)

 

~Emi. 

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On 22/09/2016 at 1:39 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Hooooot stuff, Emi.. phew i need a cool drink now.. i agree with Roberto.. hot and raw... nice!!

 

Gosh. Even now you are making blush with those compliments. :*) I think I took the challenge seriously and my mood might triggered and emitted this poem. I was very happy so many felt the rush and intimidate with the feeling. Thank you for the review tim. :hug:

 

~Emi. 

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On 22/09/2016 at 2:58 AM, AC Benus said:

"Fasten my breath—make it shallow,

and increase my heart beat."

 

Beautiful lines!!! I love that turn of phrase, 'fasten my breath.' Love it! You've been pretty true to the Lyrics Poetry Prompt challenge too, and I appreciate your hard work. Please keep it up.

 

Thank you so much. :hug::kiss: I am so happy and glad you loved it. It always make my day when you appreciate me like this. Thank for today too.

 

~Emi. 

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