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My Immature Poetry - 10. My Winter Eyes

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">Inpired by Drew, I wrote this Tanka. Hope you people will likeit...

While The World Seeing White Backgrounds,
What I See Is Just A Fog.
With The Rising Nude Sun,
Whole The Green Settled down.

span style="font-family:Georgia,serif;">Thank You All for reading. Likes And Reviews are Heatfully Welcome.
Thank You Drew for Being such an inspiration...
Copyright 2015 MGK; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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While the images are all pretty strong, I'd encourage you to look at the Tanka prompt again. There are some requirements of the form that are not really showing in this poem. :)

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On 12/21/2015 05:04 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Hi Emi!!

I like your poetry. It's a great way to express yourself.

tim

Thank You Tim, for all the things... :)

 

~Emi...

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On 12/21/2015 05:06 AM, AC Benus said:

While the images are all pretty strong, I'd encourage you to look at the Tanka prompt again. There are some requirements of the form that are not really showing in this poem. :)

Yeah!, I was intimated by Tim2. I'll work out soon and update it. Thank You for the concern.

 

~Emi...

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