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My Immature Poetry - 15. Not So Valentine Poem

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">A Valentine's Poem I had written, which is not so Valentine.

On this Valentine's night,

like usual, I throw you out

into my toilet gutter.

'Cause you're no more matter.

 

I'll just throb and cry

Self-pity, which I never try.

Now because you're gone

all I do is clean me down.

 

After that, I go again and again

to make myself drown in wine.

Which really gonna skip my dinner.

Finally I would say, you're no more matter.

strong>This is for the guy who cheated me for another one, Yeah My so called Ex.
I wanted to write a story for this Valentine's day, but utterly failed. So I am giving you people this poem. This is my inner feeling, which i again utterly failed to do. laugh.png
Thank you all for reading
Copyright 2015 MGK; All Rights Reserved.
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Emi, poets write what they feel. That's what you've done. He's a cute guy, but obviously not too bright if you left you.
Keep on writing buddy!
tim

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You feel hurt, you write hurt. I totally agree with Tim, poets write what is deeply felt. But know that I feel a desire to support you, and hope you are healing, too. Hugs and thanks for sharing.

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On 02/16/2016 02:50 AM, Roberto Zuniga said:

Hey Emi!

A poem from the heart. I hope the healing doesn't take long. Hugs and kisses from Mexico!

Hugs You back too. Yeah indeed it a poem from heart. I am glad you liked it...

 

Thank you for the Review... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 02/16/2016 04:43 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Emi, poets write what they feel. That's what you've done. He's a cute guy, but obviously not too bright if you left you.

Keep on writing buddy!

tim

Thank You, My Friend. I am glad you liked it.

 

~Emi.

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On 02/16/2016 05:12 AM, Parker Owens said:

You feel hurt, you write hurt. I totally agree with Tim, poets write what is deeply felt. But know that I feel a desire to support you, and hope you are healing, too. Hugs and thanks for sharing.

Thanks Parker. I just wanted to do that, but I am kinda Non-alcoholic. I wish I had done that. You know sometimes doing bad will heal you.

 

Thank You for the Review.

 

~Emi.

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