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Crossing the Moon 1. The Moon Series

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Elias didn't dream with wide-eyed wonder about the day he could seek out his mate or mates. He felt trapped, constricted in a world where Omegas weren't allowed to do anything for themselves...where Omegas couldn't even leave their community. But, then he received the biggest Khonsu stone that their werewolf community had ever seen. Just what did the Gods have in mind for him?

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  • Action Packed 4
  • Addictive/Pacing 4
  • Characters 6
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 1
  • Compelling 2
  • Feel-Good 4
  • Humor 3
  • Smoldering 4
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 2
  • World Building 4

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Holy shit! I was just e a ting it up man! THIS IS SO GOOD! The emotions are perfectly described without it needing to be extreme. I can so very well feel the excitement and stuff without all of that weighty suspicion and paranoia that other stories like to generate for "spice". This is a wonderful work OBVIOUSLY emanating from a Wonderful author. My god, all the best. There is nothing to overthink ^^ <3

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On 2/23/2018 at 4:40 PM, JustinJPCF said:

Holy shit! I was just e a ting it up man! THIS IS SO GOOD! The emotions are perfectly described without it needing to be extreme. I can so very well feel the excitement and stuff without all of that weighty suspicion and paranoia that other stories like to generate for "spice". This is a wonderful work OBVIOUSLY emanating from a Wonderful author. My god, all the best. There is nothing to overthink ^^ <3

 

Our characters tend to live in the moment. Thanks so much for your thoughts! All of the stories on this account are actually a collaboration of two authors. We started working together a little more than two years ago and have become great friends! The very name HindertoyBL is an anagram of "Robin" and "Thirdly," only we replaced one of the "i's" for an "e" so that it made more sense. In any case, we are both quite glad that you've been enjoying the story so far.

Random babbles, part 2:

 

Robin: I sometimes get excited...especially with January.

Thirdly: well, I did design him with you in mind

Robin: rly? *happy burbles*

Thirdly: purple eyes, red hair, slutty…didn't you notice?

Robin: *shakes head*

Thirdly: you love purple things, and redheads, and sultry cuties

Thirdly: whoa, wait, the redheads part might have been me, I take that back

Robin: lol I guess that is very true! *cackle* but, it's a purplish red, right?

Thirdly: yes, red-violet

Robin: I do like unnatural hair colors

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Random babbles, part 3 (notes on Farshael/Shael):

 

Thirdly: hmm what should he look like? when I think of air, I think white and blue...so maybe white hair and sky blue eyes? probably the same height and physical looking age as Gin (who you said was 18) so that he forms an instant camaraderie with him

Robin: I like it very much

Robin: Viktor would be jealous as hell

Thirdly: Maybe short, soft spikes?

Thirdly: big eyes for sure, big

Thirdly: and of course a big bum

Thirdly: proportionate to his thighs and overall legs

Thirdly: like a swimmer...only instead of swimming he's flying

Thirdly: that's how they fly...as if they're swimming in the air

Robin: nod And the air currents help him along like water current for a fish?

Thirdly: yes

Thirdly: I'm thinking he should have an average skin tone with freckles

Thirdly: rosy cheeks

Thirdly: and butt dimples

Thirdly: which actually have an actual name/term but I can never remember what the real name/term is

Robin: Freckles sounds adorable!

Robin: Fiesty as fuck?

Thirdly: yes

Robin: And he'll see through alllll of Viktor's flirty shit?

Robin: But he wants Vik, too, right?

Thirdly: oh yes

Thirdly: to him Viktor is like an incubus lmao

Robin: lmao

Robin: But he's trying to resist?

Thirdly: of course!

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1 minute ago, Dmrman said:

Just to say... you both have a way that makes them sound so fun and fresh... Brainstorming at it's best and you have fun with it also...:glomp::glomp::heart:

 

Sometimes we brainstorm a lot more scenes and ideas than we actually apply to the story. For example, we've yet to touch on who Gin's mate is (we know exactly who it is, but we've yet to mention it). That tale might have to be told in a possible sequel or side story.

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Random babbles, part 4 (notes on eye colors):

 

Robin: jeeze... what eye color do we not have a lot of?
Thirdly: I can tell you, hold on
Robin: thanks
Thirdly: In this story we have....

Emerald Green, Golden Yellow, Warm Brown, Saturated Purple, Royal Blue, Multi-Orange, Hazel, Aquamarine, Slate Grey, Sky Blue, Silver, Blue-Green, Black, Black, Grey, Pale Silvery Blue, Bronze, Pale Yellow, Hazel, Red

 

...so that's....

green=2? (if you count the blue-green)
yellow=2
orange=2? (if you count the bronze)
purple=1
brown= 1
black= 2
blue= 5? (if you count the blue-green and silvery blue)

red= 1
hazel= 2
grey/silver= 4? (if you count the silvery blue)

 

So we don't have...pink (lmao, no don't do it), gold, khaki?/creme, dark green, seagreen/mint, teal...light brown, olive...

 

Robin: lmao You should put that eye color summary somewhere for readers
Thirdly: done

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Random Babbles, part 5:

 

Initial Conception (before ever writing the story)

Thirdly: Huh...someone on fictionpress requests for us to write a werewolf story. This is how I responded:

  • HinderToyBL is the combination of two authors, RamblingRobin and Thirdly. 
  • RamblingRobin has a fun 'melting pot' of supernatural beings in her story Prophylaxis. One of the main characters is a werewolf. 
  • Thirdly has read many online stories about werewolves...a great "reverse harem" werewolf with one female protagonist is Fhelly's Blood Moon on AFF (adultfanfiction). A great "male x male" werewolf one is Unwanted Mate by Naga Lord, also on AFF. Another great one is the one that inspired UM (Unwated Mate), Inside Out by Evan Francisco on Wattpad. 
  • In spite of both authors having read the Anne Rice novels, Twilight, the Anita Blake series, and even the Sookie Stackhouse series...the subject has yet to come up about a possible collaboration featuring werewolves (or their general nemeses, vampires). 
  • Thirdly would have to pitch the idea in order to entice Rambling Robin into such a tale (which generally isn't too difficult, as Thirdly's a fountain of ideas) and both authors would need to find time in their busy work-college [and in RamblingRobin's case, also 'mom'] schedules in order to contemplate the plot...
  • It's certainly possible, but it will take time.

Robin: We can totally do a werewolf story if you want to. As long as I can create the characters I'm going to write and I can get excited about the story, I'm game. I honestly don't mind having a million projects going.
Thirdly: jafjkwaoerpoaijweproiajs;eokajrwekrojpaowiehtfaoks;
Thirdly: -happy inner implosion of squee-

Robin: lmao

Thirdly: we're gonna be plotting up storms and making up stuff all over the place and, of course, new babies (characters)

 

 

Namesake (towards the end of the story)

Thirdly: f*ck
Thirdly: we never gave January a last name
Thirdly: ummm ummmm
Thirdly: January Vidal Aristide?
Robin: Sounds great!
Robin: He's so fancy

 

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Thirdly

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Random Babbles, part 6: The "Fucking" Synopsis

 

Robin: Who hasn't had sex together yet?
Thirdly: OH! very important
Thirdly: Nolan needs to do Mateo and I forgot who else
Robin: lmao 
Thirdly: I think Jany. lemme look back...

Thirdly: ok let's see...

  • Nolan: thinks it's all a dream at first...leaves with the gang
  • ends up passing out asleep
  • wakes up with Jany, calls him new Master
  • Jany gives him a hand job after a feeding, which does not count
  • Nolan gives Quin a handjob while feeding off him, which does not count
  • Nolan thinks he's a terrible lay
  • starts hankering hard for Eli, the bond surely calling him
  • gets a show of Mat sucking Pax off and Nolan and Eli rutting
  • Jany gives him another hand job
  • then Eli sucks Nolan off the rest of the way
  • Oral sex DOES count, it causes the stone to add Eli's color at last (as he has found all his mates and, effectively, tasted Nolan so he head a taste of all his mates lol)
  • Pax and Nolan frot, which does not count
  • then the 3 tops (Jany, Mat, Pax) go to Viktor's
  • Eli and Quin stay behind where Quin ties Eli up and has Nolan fuck him
  • Nolan x Elias= complete consumation

 

Robin: Lmao best. Synopsis. Ever.
Robin: The fucking synopsis.

Thirdly: Then Quin has a turn, 

  • Quin x Nolan = complete consumation
  • the 3 tops come back with all the info about Khonsu and Anubis, boys are too freaked out to do anything...they decide to go on moonlit romp
  • chaos happens, boys come home
  •  Nolan then ends up in a threesome with the newly vamped Quin....
  • Pax x Nolan x vamp Quin= complete consumation

 

Robin:  That one was fun
Thirdly: So, yes...both January and Mateo must claim Nolan
Robin: Eeeeee
Thirdly: which means a Pax x Elias x Quin on the side
Robin: What can we do to make it amazing and hot
Thirdly: It's January, he makes everything amazing and hot lmao
Robin: Very true
Robin: Brainstorm time

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8 hours ago, JayT said:

You could always have Nolen fucking Mat while Jany fucks Nolen (we all know Mat is a closet bottom)

 

Also, Mat's not a "closet" bottom. His mates know he likes either way. He's as much of a switch as Quin is, if I'm not mistaken. If anyone would be a "closet" bottom it would be Pax, who rarely bottoms and never expresses how much he likes it. :lol:

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