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So Little Magic Left

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What do you do when you simply don't fit into your world? Shawn Martoni never did. A past of turmoil and misfortune kept a solid foothold from ever forming.

But what if there was another world under our own? Someplace where all that's left of the creatures long since forgotten might live. Would Shawn find his place there or simply find another form of the underworld?

***NOMINATED FOR BEST HERO/VILLAIN IN THE 2013 READERS CHOICE AWARDS***

A special thanks goes out to Layla for choosing this story and making this piece of modern fantasy happen. I hope you enjoy it! There's so much to tell but I don't want to spoil it! Read!! Read and leave comments!!

 

Last but not least, an endless array of thanks to MJ85 for polishing this into something special.

Copyright © 2014 Mann Ramblings; All Rights Reserved.

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
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  • 4. Chapter 4
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  • 5. Chapter 5
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  • 6. Chapter 6
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  • 7. Chapter 7
    • 3,292 Words
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  • 8. Chapter 8
    • 4,515 Words
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  • 9. Chapter 9
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  • 10. Chapter 10
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  • 11. Chapter 11
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  • 12. Chapter 12
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  • 13. Chapter 13
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  • 14. Chapter 14
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  • 15. Chapter 15
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  • 16. Chapter 16
    • 3,425 Words
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  • 17. Chapter 17
    • 4,021 Words
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  • 18. Chapter 18
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  • 19. Chapter 19
    • 4,021 Words
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  • 20. Chapter 20
    • 4,785 Words
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  • 21. Chapter 21
    • 4,075 Words
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  • 22. Chapter 22
    • 3,911 Words
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  • 23. Chapter 23
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  • 24. Chapter 24
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  • 25. Chapter 25
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  • 26. Chapter 26
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  • 27. Chapter 27
    • 4,590 Words
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Himmin

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

A sweet story that grows on you the more you read it, until you have to just devour it all. The deeper you delve into the story, the characters all come to life and are well grounded, all whilst a believable world and society is created. Thoroughly enjoyed this story and I think many others will fall in love with it too. 

 

For short: highly recommended ^^

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Brayon

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   0 of 1 member found this review helpful 0 / 1 member

A fantastic tale of love between two people from two different worlds. The writing was excellent, vivid pictures were painted, dialogue flowed naturally. My main beef and the reason why I left four-stars is the following:

 

Because the writer employed in error, the "Show, Don't Tell" method, that publishers seem to insist on, there are gaps in details to make this a fully complete story. The lack of Infodumps, a staple of the Fantasy Genre, leaves out the details needed to explain the divisions of the world. Too much assumption is done by the reader, in order to fill in the gaps.

 

The story was great, don't get me wrong on that. It could have been a lot better, had the writer employed the genre's staples.

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