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    Mikiesboy
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  • 04/30/2017
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NaPoWriMo 2017 - 5. Days 28 to 30

It's done.

April 28, 2017

 

Once vibrant brick is now faded
Six feet four inches it stands
For years it sheltered the garden
Now gives into weather’s demands

What secrets are protected inside?
Push aside the thorns to see
but your precious blood
is not enough to set the lock free

Bramble and ivy protect and destroy
In the south corner, does mortar perish
No longer does the iron gate open
A guardian; it will not relinquish

 

 



April 29, 2017

 

Monsters hide at every turn
Under beds and behind the door
Run, now, don’t look back
If you see - then you’ll believe
Once you know, there is no hope

 

 

 

April 30, 2017

 

I don’t want to go bed
It keeps chewing chewing
All day long its in my head
I close my eyes and see it
chewing chewing chewing

Finally .... it is finished.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Parker Owens
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The images in these remind me of Dickens, or something late Victorian. Rank overgrown gardens and decaying estates come to mind, along with the title Bleak House. These are discomfortable, unsettling, even frightening. They are marvels if simplicity.

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3 hours ago, aditus said:

The chewing poem  will follow me around for a while, I'm sure. 

Adi.. i cannot get the pic out of my head.. i thought maybe writing it would help.. but it hasn't. It was a horrible dream, 2 or 3 days ago. I've even written it out for future reference but it's still there.

 

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Headstall

Each one rolls into the other... rather macabre, but intriguing. Well done on the whole month, tim... I Iiked these three and the fear underlying them... cheers... Gary....

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4 hours ago, Lyssa said:

:hug:    :kiss: Send you some sun rays, to cover you in golden light and find rest.

 

Very intense poems, I like them.

Thank you for the sunny thoughts, Lyssa!!  Glad you liked the poems.. i hope they dont like you and keep out of your thoughts!!  xoxo

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1 hour ago, Headstall said:

Each one rolls into the other... rather macabre, but intriguing. Well done on the whole month, tim... I Iiked these three and the fear underlying them... cheers... Gary....

Thanks Gary.. they are all related .. maybe i'll write it as a story one day... i dont usually have dreams i can remember and frankly i wish this was one of them. 

 

Thanks so much for reading.. and for your comments xoxoxoxo

 

tim

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Bucket1

Congrats on completing the month... a great diversity of poems with some treasures

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asamvav111

"Monsters hide at every turn
Under beds and behind the door
Run, now, don’t look back
If you see - then you’ll believe
Once you know, there is no hope

 

 

 

I don’t want to go bed
It keeps chewing chewing
All day long its in my head
I close my eyes and see it
chewing chewing chewing"

 

 

 

Stars of my knight

pale at the brilliance of the morning sun

at peace yet contrite

but no longer at war with himself

arrive at his final repose

Edited by asamvav111
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1 minute ago, Starrynight22 said:

You do so many styles so well

You are kind ... frankly April 2017 was a bad month for poetry, it was forced.  2018 i am much much happier with ... because i gave myself permission NOT to do it, so of course i did.

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