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Puzzle Pieces

   (9 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

Daniel found his forever friend in Hone when he was just four-years-old. They grow up inseparable. The only secret between them is that Daniel is gay. If life is a puzzle, the only piece missing is the truth.

 

Posted for Pride Month

Copyright © 2021 Mrsgnomie; All Rights Reserved.
  • Signature Author
  • 06/21/2021 (Updated: 06/17/2021)
  • 1 Chapters
  • 1,000 Words
  • 11,279 Views
  • 50 Comments
  • Teen
  • Complete

Story Recommendations (21 members)

  • Action Packed 2
  • Addictive/Pacing 5
  • Characters 19
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 1
  • Compelling 10
  • Feel-Good 14
  • Humor 6
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 7
  • World Building 8

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W_L

   6 of 6 members found this review helpful 6 / 6 members

It's a cute story of best friends and revealing, who you are to others. Neat coming of age story.

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  • Love 6
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chris191070

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

A heartwarming tale of two friends. Thanks for writing.

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  • Love 6
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Topnotch

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

Love this tale of two friends. How scary it must be to come out to your bestie. I love the deeper meaning of the puzzle pieces, everything is following into place. Well done! I would totally read a longer version of this! 

  • Love 7
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kbois

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

Sweet coming of age tale of two friends and their strong bond. 

Nice work Mrs. G!

  • Like 1
  • Love 7
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drown

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

This is a perfect short tale of two friends.

And I did cry.

If you ever feel down on a morning after waking up, just read this, then you can go about your day and feel happy that there's good in the world. That friendships matter.

  • Love 4
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FSELL

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

A very sweet story, lifelong friends ….. awesome 

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weinerdog

· Edited by weinerdog

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

After just reading this I just thought I would add some recommendations and another deserved 5 stars.

Echoing what i said in my chapter comment why can't the reaction one the characters Hone gave be the norm? It boggles my mind my this should be an issue.What comes in a close second though is why is there coconut Mac-n-cheese (read the chapter comment to understand that)

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Bft

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

A great coming out teenage story for Pride month, just a shame that it’s so short 

  • Love 4
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Headstall

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

'Sweet' is often overused, but that is just what this short story is. Read it! 

  • Love 1
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