The Alpha 3. Running With The Pack

I'd like to praise the author a bit. Wolf roped me into editing for him even though I don't feel I'm qualified, and I'm glad he did. Few have any idea how hard it is to write a good story, but I'm the only one (ok, maybe a Jarhead knows too) how hard Wolf works on improving. I've tried not to make him sound like me, but I've not taken it easy on him. He's verbose at times and SIMPLIFY became a frequent comment I'm certain drove him crazy. Wolf pays attention and learns. I'm proud of the growth I've seen in him and I do look forward to working with him again sometime soon. If he doesn't get his butt in gear with a new story, I may have to send Ethan over to provide a little incentive. Or maybe I should send Ethan and Aidan together. Naked.

3 hours ago, Carlos Hazday said:

I'd like to praise the author a bit. Wolf roped me into editing for him even though I don't feel I'm qualified, and I'm glad he did. Few have any idea how hard it is to write a good story, but I'm the only one (ok, maybe a Jarhead knows too) how hard Wolf works on improving. I've tried not to make him sound like me, but I've not taken it easy on him. He's verbose at times and SIMPLIFY became a frequent comment I'm certain drove him crazy. Wolf pays attention and learns. I'm proud of the growth I've seen in him and I do look forward to working with him again sometime soon. If he doesn't get his butt in gear with a new story, I may have to send Ethan over to provide a little incentive. Or maybe I should send Ethan and Aidan together. Naked.

Roped you in huh. I seem to remember you sending me a message offering to help me improve Running With The Pack. I growled at you often, but listened to your explanations for why something was wrong. Learning from you was a joy. I feel truly lucky to have you as a mentor.