First Short Story: Just a Trim..., by Tales

[tales]

Just wrote my first short story, Just a Trim..., modern romance, if I categorized correctly. Don't know how to put a direct link to it here. Comments on appropriateness of rating, etc, appreciated. Thanks.

Edited July 15, 2007 by tales

[Graeme]

Link: Stories by tales

 

I've given the link to tales' author page, rather than the story itself, because of the content warning.

 

A nice little story. Well written with lots of clear detail. I think labeling it as adult is too harsh -- it's an M rating but you didn't describe anything explicitly so I don't think you need to give it an MA.

 

Keep writing, tales!

[tales]

Thanks, Graeme. Based on his comment, I've updated the rating to M. Other comments, let me know.