My First Story is finally up!

[Aleric]

After many MONTHS of hard work, I finally finished

the first four chapters of my first story! Please add

this to the archive?

 

Authors name: Aleric Minoru <aleric.minoru at gmail. com>

Story name: Singularity

Story link: http://stories.alinoe.com/

Genre: sci-fi

Description:

Thomas Wolf spent the greater part of his life working on an infinitely

fast computer. Endless possibilities open up, when finally he succeeds.

He doesn't want to share his knowledge with the rest of humanity however.

Instead, he only discloses his secret to Victor, a 14-year-old neighbor boy.

When Victor disappears and Thomas gets stuck with his 12-year-old brother

somehow, things take a surprising turn. Will Thomas be able to contain

the forces he unleashed? Is he the master, or the toy of what he created?

 

Story codes: (so far) no sex (but will be tt)

The story is in progress

[Pyro]

I have read Singularity, and I must say it is an interesting story. I have found it very interesting and a good read. The mix of scifi and realizem is very well done. A GREAT story and I can't wait to read more.

 

Pyro :-)

[Julian Alexander]

Good story Aleric.

 

I like the scifi theme you put into it.

 

Keep writing man.

[JamesSavik]

 

Good work Aleric!

 

I'll put it in the queue of stuff to be read!

[Aleric]

Thanks for the wonderful feedback and encouragements guys,

it really means a lot to me to have friends here. :king:

 

Note that this wasn't just a first regarding the story, but also for the

site itself; as you will have noticed it "forces" people to give

feedback (a rating) after every chapter. I believe the

concept works: I know exactly how many people have actually

READ my story (and not just 'clicked' on it and then left as MANY

do!) But, it turns out that very few people do MORE than

the mandatory click to rate a chapter: not many add some text

as well to say what they liked or disliked in particular.

 

[ And considering that it takes just two mouse clicks and each

chapter has costed me about a month of work, I think it's sad (and

weird) that some even do considerably MORE effort than just

two mouse click while trying to AVOID having to give a rating! :wacko: ]

 

Anyway, my conclusion after the short time that this feedback-shark has

now been tested, is that people like to read, but that the barrier

to give feedback is very high for most. I am sure this is the case

in general. So, authors: don't think people aren't reading your stories

when you don't get feedback via email, or on the forums. A lot of

people really DO read it.

 

Aleric

[Aleric]

Myr, can you please take the time to add this story to the archive?

See the post of June 8th for the summary/data.

 

Thanks,

Aleric

 

PS I am almost done with chapter five (just waiting for my editor),

will let people know here when it's up.

[Aleric]

After many MONTHS of hard work, I finally finished

the first four chapters of my first story!  Please add

this to the archive?

 

Authors name: Aleric Minoru  <aleric.minoru at gmail. com>

Story name: Singularity

Story link: http://stories.alinoe.com/

Genre: sci-fi

Description:

Thomas Wolf spent the greater part of his life working on an infinitely

fast computer. Endless possibilities open up, when finally he succeeds.

He doesn't want to share his knowledge with the rest of humanity however.

Instead, he only discloses his secret to Victor, a 14-year-old neighbor boy.

When Victor disappears and Thomas gets stuck with his 12-year-old brother

somehow, things take a surprising turn. Will Thomas be able to contain

the forces he unleashed? Is he the master, or the toy of what he created?

 

Story codes: (so far) no sex (but will be tt)

The story is in progress

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

 

The story code has been changed from 'tt / no sex' to 'tt / bt', as of

chapter 6. This is the last time I add a post to this thread, because I believe

that the only appropriate place for new chapters is in the 'Story Announcements'

forum, isn't it? It's a bit confusing, some clarification would help me

(I know, I'm stupid). Of course, you can also register on my site to get an email.

Ok... off to posting the official release now in 'Story announcements'.