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Like I said, as they're edited (I'm the one behind, not Jim) :P.

 

So there isn't the same problem as before, I'll be back to post the chapter in a sec... but I hate what it does to my formatting. :(

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Thanks to Jim for editing!

 

Chapter 27.

 

5 months earlier

 

October

 

Owen couldn

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Why do I feel still like I want to smack those two??? At least they're getting to a point where they are starting to work things out. Can't wait to see what 28 brings.

 

 

Hrm....

 

 

:::sets up a tent and waits for 28 now::

 

:)

 

Linxe

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OMFG!!!! Two chapters in one day!

 

I think we've all been warped to an alternate galaxy...or maybe the moon shifted. blink.gif

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OMFG!!!! Two chapters in one day!

 

I think we've all been warped to an alternate galaxy...or maybe the moon shifted. blink.gif

Maybe both, but I'm not complaining. :D

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Maybe both, but I'm not complaining. :D

 

B)..........................Good news!! Bad news I'm going to have to go back a lot of chapters to recapture this story :(

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This is outstanding - I've come out of my cave (read long absence) to post THANK YOU AND AWESOME to ITFB 26 & 27.

 

The whole world just seems like a better place when Dom is posting. Maybe it's just me (but I'm guessing not! LOL) but I get this stupid grin on my face when I see a chapter posted for one of his stories.

 

Now the waiting begins (large crowd - say 200,000) gathering in the square watching for the smoke signal on Aiden/Owen.

 

Thank you Dom - 2010 just got brighter.

 

George

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What the hell. We get a major cliffhanger at the end of 26 (which, by the way, I LOVED. Dennis & Travis ftw!) and then the next chapter does nothing to resolve it, and ends on another, if less intense, cliffhanger.

 

For the rest of this evening, I'll be refreshing the ITFB page every few minutes. I hope I don't have to do this for too long.

 

Thanks Dom for the great story! :D

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What the hell. We get a major cliffhanger at the end of 26 (which, by the way, I LOVED. Dennis & Travis ftw!) and then the next chapter does nothing to resolve it, and ends on another, if less intense, cliffhanger.

 

The multiple cliffhangers reminded me of how the later chapters of TOSOM played out. It seems like we'll be seeing several plots come to a fiery (both literally and perhaps physically) end....

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Wow...thanks Dom...come on A/O sort your differences out you need each other. Thanks Dom also for filling us in with what happened to split them up in the first place.

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okay...I'm sure that Dom will resolve the difference between Owen and Aiden. But...

It worries me and it makes me sad to see the two of them so sad :(

 

Aiden's moving...Owen's pretty much dying inside, etc.

It's just so sad...this chapter is so sad :(

 

I hope the next chapter will be happier :)

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True Rad - but I think it's a major change that Aiden is at least being honest at the end about his feelings... I'm hopeful :-)

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okay...I'm sure that Dom will resolve the difference between Owen and Aiden. But...

It worries me and it makes me sad to see the two of them so sad :(

 

Aiden's moving...Owen's pretty much dying inside, etc.

It's just so sad...this chapter is so sad :(

 

I hope the next chapter will be happier :)

I think the end of chapter 27 indicates a pretty good chance for reconciliation:

 

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