[dkstories] Do Over Redux Chapter 29

[NaperVic]

WOW!!! What a great surprise!!!!

 

I don't want to give away any spoilers, but

 

Thanks Dan!!!!

 

Vic

[dkstories]

Don't forget to check out the blog entry about the chapter...

[Constantine1453]

Gah! Urg!

 

I will say, that this was a really good way to dive back into the story, and um...wow.

 

Incredible.

 

However, I wish that you had written a little bit more than just exposition about Davey's previous relationship - it started, and then it ended. It would have been nice to see a 'middle' chapter, to break up the 'and then three years pass'.

 

But wow, what a chapter.

 

C.

[EMoe57]

When I read this chapter, my first thought was "Oh Dan, you better get chapter 30 done pronto!"

[brax]

I was tense the entire time reading this chapter. I was really happy,and then... jesus christ... lol.... im still too tense to really move... Awesome chapter... PLEASE Get the next chapter out ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

Brax

[dkstories]

I see now how I get responses from readers...shoot a main character!

 

 

Just kidding here....it's a really good weekend here in Los Angeles where we're at the E-board meeting. Not only is the hotel full of democrats (including lots of cute young dems), but the US Soccer Team, and soccer teams from several other countries are also staying here (lots of eye candy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

 

Yep, I have managed about a half page of chapter 30 so far...and I will be doing a little typing tonight...after I read DD 30

[zammy]

An awesome chapter! A few unexpected twists, some great emotional insight into the characters, a wee bit of action. What more could I ask? Aside from more of the same I mean.

 

I'll be checking the site anxiously every 20 minutes waiting impatiently for chapter 30.

 

Just kidding, real life obligations must come first, for both the writer and the reader. But that doesn't mean I won't look forward to it.

 

Keep up the great work Dan!

[Philistine]

i'm so glad i thought to check today. damn, that was good. but argh, now i'm desperate to find out what happens. dammit, you're learning these evil tactics from dom, aren't you?! >_<

[misanthropicfiend]

Hey Dan... Great chapter! I can only echo the sentiments of those posting before--a very nice/interesting surprise/twist, thank you for writing, and we're patiently looking forward to the next.

[dkstories]

I am happy people seemed to have enjoyed the newest chapter. I'm working on 30 still, and I did recently put up a new blog entry if anyone's interested.

 

Enjoy!