Bill W - Halloween Story - Revenge

[Bill W]

I just posted the first chapter of a two-chapter tale for the holiday.  I hope you enjoy it and I'd love to hear what you think of it.

[Daddydavek]

I think I want more than a two part story.  Any chance of expanding the scope?   I think the whole idea of the transplant from a rowdy school in Texas to a suburban school in Maryland could prove interesting.  

 

(Well you asked me what I think!)

 

The whole ghostly troubled spirit of the murdered boy works well for Halloween, but let's resolve that and then use the living characters to round out a good teenage coming of age story.   

[Bill W]

DaddyD, I think about your suggestion, because I originally only thought about this as a Halloween tale.  If there is enough interest, then I'll see what I can come up with. 

[Former Member]

I loved this story!  I hope you'll consider expanding it a little.  I would love to see Hunter and Jacob's relationship expand.

[Bill W]

Thanks, Myiege.  I will consider the suggestion you and DaddyD have put forward.