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Between The Push And Pull By Hudson Bartholomew

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I'm going to be self-deprecating right now and assume that no one will have any real interest in discussing my story about Ryan and Erik (porn stars who start out as colleagues--i.e. get paid to have sex with each other--and potentially develop into something more).

 

But if on the off chance someone does want to discuss, here's the place to do it.
 
Between the Push and Pull

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Love the tattoo.  I had a little trouble picturing it myself, so the pics helped. :)

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Love the tattoo.  I had a little trouble picturing it myself, so the pics helped. :)

 

 

I'm glad it helps! Searching google images for cool tattoos is one of my procrastination techniques, so I was happy that I didn't have to call it procrastination this time  0:)

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Glad I could be of service somehow.   I agree with Valkyrie on this one; the pictures were a major help.  Thanks Hudson!

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This is a Canadian model named Eric Miron. Saw his picture and thought: *gasp* Ryan! Except minus the beard. Maybe Ryan should grow a beard? *wink wink*

 

 

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Mmmm! :blushing: beard is sexy IM0 ;)

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I'm always thinking of your story when I'm listening to the new Ed Sheeran song, especially the chorus :)

 

I'm in love with the shape of you

We push and pull like a magnet do

Although my heart is falling too

I'm in love with your body

And last night you were in my room

And now my bed sheets smell like you

Every day discovering something brand new

 

And now after the last two chapters Ryan's bed sheets are gonna smell like Erik ;)

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I'm always thinking of your story when I'm listening to the new Ed Sheeran song, especially the chorus :)

 

I'm in love with the shape of you

We push and pull like a magnet do

Although my heart is falling too

I'm in love with your body

And last night you were in my room

And now my bed sheets smell like you

Every day discovering something brand new

 

And now after the last two chapters Ryan's bed sheets are gonna smell like Erik ;)

 

 

Oh wow! I hadn't paid attention to the lyrics before now, but it's like they were written just for Ryan and Erik  :2thumbs: Thanks for pointing them out!

 

I love the idea of bedsheets smelling like a lover. Mmm... sexy.

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At first it was the rhythm of the music but when I really listened to the lyrics they really stick to your story, like it resonate with your words. The title, the attitude the guys have towards one another, every times learning a bit more about the other...

It's crazy, I never had this "whow" feeling between a song and a story. You and Ed Sheeran did a great job.

 

Oh maybe you could propose him a new version of the video clip of his song with your story as a script and featuring this cutie you post a picture of earlier ;)

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Oh maybe you could propose him a new version of the video clip of his song with your story as a script and featuring this cutie you post a picture of earlier ;)

 

 

EXCELLENT idea! Now, where to find Ed Sheeran's phone number...

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EXCELLENT idea! Now, where to find Ed Sheeran's phone number...

If you find it, give it to me, after all I should be your agent for this and for you to concentrate on your writing 0:)

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If you find it, give it to me, after all I should be your agent for this and for you to concentrate on your writing 0:)

 

 

Done!

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I know you're trying to portray Amanda as Ryan's friend, but she annoys the shit out of me. She has no right to nag him about getting dressed up for Halloween. She can ask or suggest once, but when he says no, she should respect that. To me she's not a real friend, and hardly a good colleague. She just a nosy, pushy, selfish girl who should be told to grow up or fuck off - because that kind of act isn't cute at all. :pissed:

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I know you're trying to portray Amanda as Ryan's friend, but she annoys the shit out of me. She has no right to nag him about getting dressed up for Halloween. She can ask or suggest once, but when he says no, she should respect that. To me she's not a real friend, and hardly a good colleague. She just a nosy, pushy, selfish girl who should be told to grow up or fuck off - because that kind of act isn't cute at all. :pissed:

 

 

I really don't think Ryan finds Amanda annoying, it's more just the dynamic of their friendship; she teases, he pretends to grumpy, it's kind of their shtick. 

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I really don't think Ryan finds Amanda annoying, it's more just the dynamic of their friendship; she teases, he pretends to grumpy, it's kind of their shtick. 

 

Then he is a much nicer guy and friend than she deserves. :lol:

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Then he is a much nicer guy and friend than she deserves. :lol:

 

 

He is a really nice guy :) A little gruff on the outside, but a teddy bear on the inside!

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