[NickolasJames8] The World Premier of I

[NickolasJames8]

Well last night I sat down and pounded out a new poem, and here it is...it's called I, and it's for no one and everyone all at once...I guess it's for all the people in my life

[Xiao_Chun]

I loved it Nick! Is it for Taylor?

 

This poem is bitter-sweet. Whoever this poem is written for, Nick loves him very much. But after you know somebody for a long time you can see his imperfections and flaws. At the end of the day, are these flaws overshadow all the beautiful things that Nick fell in love with? I

Edited October 3, 2006 by Xiao_Chun

[AFriendlyFace]

awww!

 

That was beautiful, Nick!

 

It was a great expression of love in all it's glory and shortcomings! Thanks for sharing it with us!

 

Kevin

[DarkShadow]

Very nice Nick! I liked this a lot. It pulls you through a miriad of emotion before leaving you with a smile.

 

Thanks for the pleasure.

 

Take care

[NickolasJames8]

I loved it Nick! Is it for Taylor?This poem is bitter-sweet. Whoever this poem is written for, Nick loves him very much. But after you know somebody for a long time you can see his imperfections and flaws. At the end of the day, are these flaws overshadow all the beautiful things that Nick fell in love with? I

[TalonRider]

Nick,

 

That was absolutely beautiful. I read it before I got too far into this post. It really does show your love for all those around you.

 

>hugs<

Jan