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  1. I enjoyed the description of the old house. I liked the dream, that made me think. And I was glad to have the background details of Jon's parting with his friends. Really good chapter. Good Read.
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    Chapter 6

    I’m so young, experience wise. Being born with ancient wisdom helps. Being born with instinctive knowledge makes leaps forward easier, that is, if some of the important bits are not left out. Of course, I have my own personality quirks. And, I have some control to limit the totality of me. Being human helps a lot. I can be wrong and fail but it all adds to the end result, which means being pigheaded and foolish are just as important as being judicious. My people almost have a scorn for their own
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    Arrivals

    I have lived long enough to have felt most of what life brings, this bought memories and tears. Good chapter. The last line was wonderful.
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    Bad Dreams

    Well, you told us what was going to happen in the prologue, but it still hurt to read it. Well done chapter.
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    Departures

    I like this start. Your picture in the gallery got my attention.
  6. F e l i c i t a t i o n s ! (I WANTED TO SAY SOMETHING DIFFERENT.) ♥
  7. 2012 Poetry Anthology Fast and Quick before it becomes thick and past the due date.
  8. Desperate Mumbo Jumbo by bugeye I cracked time Humpty dumpty style Scrambled it up And made egg pudding Break time What doughnut What coffee You have no time And thus have no Me time No me No you Either or either Why bother There would be here And here would be there Desperate mumbo jumbo Mambo mambo mambo Gay tango I snapped space Into it’s place No more lift and separate It’s all not there So let us all just jiggle And wiggle wiggle wiggle The despair What to do with all that’s fair
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    Chapter 24

    I read the whole thing and glad I did.
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    Who...Are You?

    I enjoyed your epic story.
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    Chapter 1

    I enjoyed reading your story, nicely done.
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    Birthday Surprise

    I liked this Lugh, thanks.
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    A Changelings Tale

    I enjoyed reading this one very much.
  14. I enjoyed reading this and hope there is more soon.
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    Chapter 14

    Thanks for continuing this story. This was a good chapter.
  16. I am so glad you posted. I have missed seeing you on GA. And the cover looks great !
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    Chapter 1

    Terrific, I enjoyed reading this. Wonderful pacing. Engaging. Charming, but of course.
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    Chapter 5

    I spend a good amount of time now in my office on the ground floor, sitting behind the desk. Wondering. Thinking. Still confused about what this all means. Mostly going over my life. A mini review kind of. Blue is always with me. And of course now Ty is often here. There were several suites on the ground floor. One was this office. One had a billiard table in it. Another had an old juke box in it. Etc. Another was a bar, but I don’t really drink, so there was a lot of ice cream in the frig and s
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    Chapter 6

    Well, I am glad that they know about each other now.
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    Chapter 5

    Rollerblading is hard.
  21. Happy Birthday! Lugh! ♥
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    Chapter 3

    Haha, nice chapter, I love big hearted people like Jonathan.
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    Chapter 2

    Church ! ?
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    Chapter 1

    Funny, my idea of hell is Abercrombie. Good start.
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    Chapter 4

    My family. My people. We are human. Just as human as everyone else. At least for the last five or ten thousand years. We are just a little different is all. I have found out a lot about all this in the last months. Since the day I met my Aunt Serena. That day was also my twenty first birthday. It was not a coincidence. I hate to blurt things out like this but I am the “Unexpected”. Seems my people have a very long history, as long as that of the universes themselves. And well they have this hi
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