Kileoli

It was nice of Charlie to give Taine his blessing, so now Taine is free to do what he wants with Tyler. Yoohooo hot sex scenes for us! And he should be very thankful that Taine found him a hot boyfriend, paid his debt without telling Daddy and is on his way to get rid of the 3.5 angry witchy (ex?) girlfriends. So let's see the shopping and then the ring. Is Tyler going to help Taine buy and try his 🩲?! A rainbow unicorn shirt is good too.

I like them all smart, I have pretty much connected whatever I could, even the kids are smart. Unfortunately R is an older model so I couldn't integrate him. Must look for a new model, Jamie wrote his master on IoT so maybe I can integrate him 😂. But I am also a fan of light switches, analog stuff and offline clouds. That's why I hate most of smart home solutions and a fan of patching my own. I need to have control over smartness, im a smartass anyway...oh no, now I have another idea... "Digitalizing and integrating the sex toys into our smart home🙃"

The stakes get higher and higher. So basically they are not allowed to perform rehearsed things but the real thing, and from the other couple in the end they are going to break up or out Time. This story sounds like a nightmare.

Correction: Direct quote from R: " I wasn't emotionally involved at all, I was just very drunk when suggested and later too proud to back off"😅 And there goes my love story!😂

And I thought you're one of those nice authors who are not that mean to your characters! At least let Scott take a photo if Sean and Gabriel and post it here.

I just realized I made the spoiler for the next chapter which is not yet online😅

It was not nice of Sean leaving Gabriel without a note. Besides someone has to take things in their hand and push Michael and DJ into each other's arms or they will be unhappy and lonely forever. Considering how valuable Scott is you don't tend to kill him, right? He makes awesome photos. But then photos cants save him from this Asian-Latino, it's him hunting Gabriel and Scott, right? Though sounds too easy.

Out of curiosity, does it look like something like this? I don't know these things. We have two ovens ( 1 with microwave and the other with steamer?!) and then one extra stove(?) I'm not sure if they are called those things but they are fancy a bit and so much fun to use and I can connect them to our smart home ... As an after thought maybe Liam can install cameras to show the status of the meal, sending the pictures to PC to analyse and Rick can ask Alexa how much more time they have for the sex before the food burns .. thanks for the idea

Rick was pretty involved the same as Liam. The difference is it took Liam a while to accept his feelings and Liam would have never done anything if Rick hadn't initiated. As for your oven. I hope you have a new oven and have solved the problem ( does calling daddy work?) 😁 When you have problems with choosing the technical aspects the guy can help, financially they still call Rick's father. 😅

I respect your feeling and continue but I stop trying with the cliffhangers 😅

I just realized non linear stories have several problems: 1. It's sometimes confusing for the readers. 2. As the writer you should have considered every single detail beforehand because once you have it ended in a certain way the whole past stories have to end in that certain way so no place for errors and no place for new ideas. 3. Cliffhangers are a non-existent concept. As an example, I spent a while thinking how to end the chapter that it sounds like Rick decided against meeting Liam. After posting it I realized that was so stupid because the readers know they met in Türkiye. So....there's no point to make them hate each other, leave each other, break up with each other, marry a girl, have sex to make babies....it just doesn't shock the readers. Just the fact that nobody commented on Daria (Liam's girlfriend) says everything. I stop writing this story....I have spoiled everything.😂😅

Rick’s room had grown warmer over the course of the evening, not because the air outside had changed but because the quiet machinery of the desk had been running too long—the monitor casting a steady pale glow, the laptop fan pushing out its low mechanical breath, the desk lamp angled close enough to the wall that the plaster behind it absorbed a slow amber heat. The window stood open behind him, admitting a thin draft that carried the faint metallic smell of rain from somewhere deeper in the ci

Never send adults back to school! The three witches sounded scary. Are they going to make him drink love potions?

This chapter was just too much and creepy with real struggles, good job. Now I gotta see how I can close my Pandora box again.

Did you have a happy ending too?

Second person is a big challenge to write and read but telling a whole story with it is a work of art. A sad story with a happy ending

I didn't know about the first and last name thing. Thinking about it you're right. We have this neighbor that even refers to herself with the last name and it took me 2 years to make her use the desired pronouns and my first name, when talking to me since I didn't feel like using the proper pronouns talking to her ( no, not the "it"or "they". I'm not non- binary, at most dimension-less. There's the you and the polite you (du/Sie) in German, and if you mess them up.... Oh the stroke, I forgot that and true you didn't say anything so I have to keep on wondering what happened between 1987 and 2014 ( besides Taylor and Charlie's birth). So we're out of Merrickville and into the demonic bureaucratic world of Mr. Ellis and some femdom?! Don't forget to warn us when the girls start manipulating Charlie.

Oh sorry guys, I gotta refresh the page before commenting. Someone was pulling the same conclusions 😅

Ok, there were not so much new info. You avoided telling us the story of Michael and Ellis, can it be that he saved mr. Devil and died so Ellis has to compensate by doing something for Taine. Still it doesn't make sense, the photo belongs to 1987 but Ellis had been trying to pay back the last eleven years. So does it mean that Taine and Michael broke up a lot earlier?! BTW why are we calling Alistair with his last name. And since you finished the third series can we assume that Charlie doesn't get his body back or learns a lesson and become a demon hunter and we should attend the burial of the professor with the real Charlie, Chloe and Taylor?!

Then you should refer to Ashley properly with it or is it they?! And you win the price of "best non-binary" couple written in GA or a badge ...there should be a badge for it , right?

The game is on. So if the player/ chapter introduction rate is 1 player/ chapter. We will have 9 chapters to get the whole pieces and some walk-arounds to develop strategies. @Topher Lydon Are you done with the writing or is there a chance to change the ending? It's so creepy knowing they are probably going to fall really hard for each other and some time later being forced to break up or outed in Tim's fall. I'm not sure how much I want to be reminded how easily we are watched and manipulated on a daily basis. I probably go watch that video from an influencer telling people about the wellness trend of house burping instead....or maybe not cause I knew it already. * Read with the gotteral unspeakable consonants of " Stoßlüften"*

Don't blame the @akascrubber, this line was a bit confusing: "He quickly regained her composure, storming off in the opposite direction. But the image was burned into Tim and Justin’s minds."🙃

That was one quick peek into the royal life with a coming out story. It was really good, quick, efficient and an announcement. And what happened to the unicorn?

Applause to Jack, he did convince the alpha to take their relationship to next level and the alpha got his own version of two in one. Where are the evil forces now? Hidden and watching them and waiting for the next round?

That was an interesting fast track. So next time directly to the dentist.... But then as nice as my dentist is, she's not my type 😁