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I think that Rizan, Jiv and I need to run away....or join a support group...anyone who has been randomly syruped raise their hand!

oh well crap! Guess I'd better watch my back...and my ribs..and my flank steaks...

I actually have a toilet trained cat, a boy one too. He never put the lid up...but I can say that even male animals get that ahhhh look... Every time he would pee his eyes would close halfway...it was hilarious!

Oh ho...good as always! Though...I have to say that the fact that the girls were hitting on the 2 guys who had the disabilites was odd...ulterior motive? Or just ego thinking they would be hard up? I like your character evolotion thorugh the chapters and I agree, the level of intimacy seems perfect for 2 guys who are as close as Zeek and Jake are.

You ask..I'm in the process of delivering...we have to resolve if Caleum is going to recover from his poisoning and then we shall get to see more and more of the culture and world. Bel'loc may live in a hunter/gather/warrior society...but it is by no means the primitive one that Caleum thought it was at first. Ch. 4 will begin to flesh out the story and add some new characters. Big thanks for the props...Everyone has been so supportive, it really has been fun writing and having people like what I am scribbling down. I probably would have quit writing this story by now if it wasn't for all of you.

Oh Gads...27 now you're getting old! Ancient, even! LOL...Enjoy the birthday!

Wow! This chapter was down down and then up and then boom, down...based on comments I at least know a hint of the story direction, but still... How Jayden is physically and mentally, his reaction to Cal and his revelation, will he be able to perform again? I really like this story, after Chains and Death is not an option, I would have to put it in 3rd overall. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Well personally I take someone calling me kinky as a compliment Life is full of repression, I want as little of it as possible! I can admit to liking the darker side of sex, and in stories it is just fun. I like the way that you write this story, abuse can be insidious, especially when couched in a bdsm lifestyle. As for people commenting on liking it, well therein comes the repression, but I've seen your overall read count...obviously it's keeping more than just Connor and I coming back for more! Thanks for the story Nephy, keep it going, I'm eagerly waiting for that one hell of an ending!

Thank you Sam, I am so happy you are enjoying my story!

9 cause it's yours, of course! I just played yesterday or so, but had to comment on your avatar!

Surprise! What a difference a day makes...go check the story update... I'm off to work on Chapter 3, after I catch up on some reading! Chapter 2

I tend to leave my chapters unresolved in some way or another...much like your categories one and two. As for length..I prefer to write short chapters, 5-6 K at most actually. It is long enough to get into the scene going on but no too long to loose interest or have the distraction factor you spoke of. Then I will write more chapters more often...rather than fewer ones, but bigger. I have noticed writers who post more often have a greater following, since the story is fresh in the minds of readers.

Yes, it's weird but look at all these people who have thought about it..we have our own pool for a cartoon character delusion support group....now if only they put 30 minute cartoons into 3D.

Last year at the Josh's company Christmas party, the field superintendant kissed the company owner/boss, right in front of their wives and the entire room during the white elephant exchange.... talk about LMAO..and needing to cut both of those double fisted drinkers off from the bar! Course no one censored them...it was just funny...Great group of liberal thinkers!

Still like yours..giving it a solid 8....

WOW! Thank you all for your comments, I appreciate the feedback and compliments so much! There seem to be a few common interests....so I will answer what I believe those to be instead of individual comments this time, hopefully you will forgive me. Bel'loc is, well, my ideal for the hot man...the one you see and just go RAWR, I could sooo sink my claws into THAT! He is very physical as you will see, but don't make the mistake of underestimating his intelligence...still waters run very deep. However as much as I love him, though, Caleum is probably my favorite of the two. While not as "exotic" he has that classic look that will stand the test of time. He has so very far to grow emotionally throughout this story; yet he is always going to be there doing what is right and true in his mind, even if it comes at great personal cost. I often wonder where he learned such an attitude, growing up in the midst of a great political court...now if he could just get that stick outta his..well.... As for the story continuing...These two have so many adventures to live and experience, together as well as apart...I wouldn't dream of not sharing them with you. With that being said...I have finished writing Chapter 2 but it needs a bit of polishing...I won't give you a specific time, but soon, you shall see it soon! After that, brace yourself...Chapter 3 will bring many changes... That's all the insight I have to share for now...I am glad everyone enjoyed chapter 1 and hope you will continue to enjoy the story as it unfolds.

Kurt, you looked surprised...was the picture taking cooler than you expected??? LOL

Here you go Bugeye...one headstone, just for you!

Wow... I would throw up if that picture didn't have to be a fake! But seriously, anything even approximating that is sooo not attractive to me!!

Oh yes, I still remember the first time I saw Willy Wonka at a sleepover when I was 7. I was soo pissed off when they remade it into the freakshow version that Depp did... it is just disturbing. P.S. I am not dissing Depp, fans of his please don't kill me, just the screenplay as written...

I'm not going to dignify this thread...all I am going to say is that you better watch your back, kitty cat! I know how to get a hold of a pair of gelding emasculators....

Awww.... You have good kissing stories Mattie! Thanks for sharing...

Great job Rilbur!!! You deserve it.. Congratulations!

I'm sorry, maybe it's the style I grew up around but I just prefer board shorts to speedos. I like they way they hang on a fit attractive guy's hips...so delicious looking, without showing everything in it's glory...or lack thereof.

Please, both of my parents were way too messed up to remember much of anything much less my first words, lol... However I was told as a teen that I had learned the correct application of the word B*tch by the age of 2, and loved to use it. Absolutely shocking coming from me, no? LMAO