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The mating was pretty hot, not gonna lie <.<
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I voice in my head told me to just keep it at "sexy shower time" and then have them go eat breakfast.
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Thanks. One of my brighter moments. 😂 💜💙
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I also really like that as well. The sparseness started with necessity. I was using a new narrative device and other than lowercasing and italicizing everything, there was nothing to distinguish the wolf voice from Grey himself. Now whenever I write the wolf, he is in my head as a mixture of those two: Thank you for saying that. I thrust Grey into these extraordinarily odd situations, so how do you expose characters and give them voice when nothing around you is mundane enough to breathe and take a step back. 💜
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Thank you. 💜
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Yeah, I didn't sleep after all. 1am soon. Well I think I know who those are! It is all coming together nicely. Can't wait to read more. Thanks, @kbois.
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@kbois I need to sleep!!!!! So. WHAT IS? WHAT ARE THEY!?!?! I'll continue tomorrow, this time for real. 😐💜 I'm really glad I have it all at my immediate perusal.
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OH COME ON! I read this... …and I knew Ben was done for. Done for! Two sentences later and... Yup. I was right. It is my power. Also this... OF COURSE, YOU IDIOT! THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT IT MEANS!!!@@$% Everything in this chapter was on point. Thanks!
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I lied a little, not done reading 😛
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Ben is awesome. Ben is fucking awesome. Happens to the best of us. It's what I'm going to do right now.
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Well well well. I do love cliffhangers, WHEN I WRITE THEM MYSELF!$!@#(*% All feelings of anger were quickly replaced with feelings of utmost affection for Ben. So balance has been restored. Let's continue!
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@drown I didn't comment much on this story because I didn't who @kbois was. But when you read the comments in the next two stories you'll understand this comment better. BTW we in the Korner Krew are taking bets on when @kbois will send you to the korner. Not if but WHEN!!!! What are the prerequisites of becoming part of a so-called "Korner Krew"? Do you get sent there for saying something naughty?
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Yeah, that's how I felt. Glad I wasn't reading it on a train. 😶 Time to fix that wolf. 🤕 Poor guy.
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Oh....definitely buckle up Buttercup. Hope you like twists and turns. Rage moments are real. Make sure you read the comments... they get better and better as you go along. My Krew is "special". Enjoy and feel free to comment along the way. Also... don't believe anything a short-legged yapper says. I will! Trust me! Lots of comments. You start out so nice and sweet... it's cute... but we all know better. Haha. There's a viewing party accompanying my reading journey, nice. I like the banter.
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I will prepare a tomato, cucumber, and millet salad and pair that with some grilled cheese sandwiches. Thank you for the inspiration, @Mikiesboy. In fact, I found my sandwich maker recently and it has to be used!
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Hooked. What a backstory. Time to get some vengeance. Sebastian and Reilly will be an interesting match, looking forward to reading more.
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Today was the day I stumbled onto your story, and here we go! Your characters are instantly lovable and distinguished. I like the shifter elements you introduced so far, a deviation from the norm. Let's enjoy this ride then Very good writing.
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It's a bit uncommon, but so endearing! Wouldn't fit either Jamie's or Mike's character to be calling each other 'honey'. But every time Jamie says "boyfriend", my heart jumps with glee. 😬
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How is everyone doing today? Berlin is sunny today with clears skies and temperatures around 9ºC/42ºF. Going to cook myself some good food and prep food for the week. Need to save money for the drought that's about to hit me while I prepare my journey from employed to self-employed. And home-cooked food is healthier anyway… for the body and soul.
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Excellent advice, thank you. 💚
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Your characters are excellent. And now I'm intrigued what Stravor will do eventually. He swore an oath but his parents already told him it's all wrong, and now the boy grows closer to him. Will Keter catch his heart and soul before his own is ripped out? EXCITING!
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An excellent start into an enthralling world. Thank you!
