Marzipan
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Second chappy is coming like tomorrow So not much to wait! Thanks for the cheer
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A small break from the writing did good for me. Does it count a block when I wrote poems? Well, now I'm bursting with ideas and words Happy writings to all!
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Raku, it won't be a dual and sorry Cailen, but I'm gonna root for Zolia Lily. :2thumbs: She entered the this Unsanctioned Contest with her story, but I think missed to put a link here or PM you... You can check her via PM if needed, I'm sure And here's a link to Lily's story: Luke and Caleb's Bad Beginning I promise Raku, it will blow your mind
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So, I decided to enter the Unsacntioned Contest by Rakuten06 with my story. I was so excited with his idea of having a deaf lead character in a story I would love to hear your thoughts. Is it realistic enough? And I'm trying to keep the tone light-hearted for the first time even with a serious theme in the story. :D Here it is Sing for Me
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Hello Raku I'm entering this with a story called Sign for Me It will be about 15k, and I'll try to post 1-2 times a week.
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I'm really excited about this story! Thanx guys
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Tim is back!!!! Let me hear your thoughts! Story can be read here: Tiger and Pidgeon
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Young rebellion! Oh dear I much enjoyed this Soo French... I miss France.
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I'm so happy happy happy for you guys. Hugs and kisses. You deserve this, both of you **dances**
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It is not a bad choice you are making. Internet can seem like a harmless place so there is always place for discussion about the idendity safety policy and trust among peers. I don't mind having GA connections that stay anonymous, they can still be meaningful.
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There will be more Thank you so much darling for all the help you have given me with my first ever story. If it wasn't for you, I might never have started to write this.
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I hope you will like it If you'll read, let me know what you think and be brutally honest!
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My favourite line was from Will: “I’d rather have this single moment with you than a life-long relationship with anybody.” It was a surprise to me that the protagonist wasn't actually only making a choise between old and new love, he was actually battling with his own emotions and trusting in them. That made this story so much more deeper. And I love the way love can just walk/run or what ever to your life. Life is so full of surprises that one never knows what can happen next. Now, this wasn't a cheery story, but it felt real. The ending was good. It didn't need any more tighting up.
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O_o I asked something cheery to read from Jian. It is Friday today. He suggested this. He has twisted sense of humor. I will kill him now. Well as a story, I loved it. The first part was heart warming and so cosy. The last part filled fith anguish and sorrow. Thank you Anyta again for the story. It brought me up, then down but left me with hope.
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That hit me. Hard. With just few words a whole story in my mind.
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Now it is complite, my first ever longish story is complete. My baby has flewn out of the nest. *tear* Finally I'm gonna start working on the next big project on the series. Daniel from 'Introducing Daniel' wil be in it, and his biological dad and ... I can't tell you more yet
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Try shutting it down and taking the battery out for a while then restart. I don't know if that helps any. I have had same troubles in the past with my previous lappy, and it worked then.
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HaPppY BiRthDaY JWoFL Have a good one babes! And save us some cake
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Shattered Moon, Broken Rose
Marzipan commented on S.L. Lewis's story chapter in Shattered Moon, Broken Rose
Made my chest ache, it was so perfect. -
My favourite of the three This came closer to me and was easy to relate. The Dorian Gray part was amazing.
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New York, I'm Going...
Marzipan commented on TIMOTHYtimothy's story chapter in New York, I'm Going...
WOW. This was breathtaking! A love poem to New York. You made it sound such a living lover. Breathing, pulsing and hot. Images flashing and mixing together in a combination that can only be NY. -
I liked the links between nightmarish images and the indications to the happenings in real life. At least I assume that the police officers kissing and controverce around it was something that I have read in papers - not sure . Well. It was quite hard to read for me though. It was maybe too clever for me.
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To Bob - It is not? How do I make it easier then? I think it is something that everyone experiences differently. I don't dwell on it 24/7 but it does hurt when I really allow myself to think about it.
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**Demands more poems from Comsie** They made me smile, so that can not be bad.
