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  1. Philippe

    Chapter 16

    The confirmation that the real person behind this, attempt to get Jesse, is within the snare would bring this full circle for Jesse; life, and freedom awaits. Hopefully this operation will bring it all down upon the perpetrators and the network of co-conspirators.
  2. Philippe

    Chapter 6

    Indeed, why he didn’t calmly explain to Jared what he wanted and ask him to approach Sandro requesting to talk is beyond me. Directly approaching someone that you had just had a physical brawl with expecting they wouldn’t be expecting more is just dumb. Sandro’s reaction is somewhat understandable that he would expect some lame excuse for is assault…not suspecting it might actually be true. The planets have aligned to give an unforgiving gravitational force working against Mark. Sandro could have given just a little more time for Mark to explain as plenty of people were there to keep things from getting out of hand… Then again…teen underaged drinking at a loud house party…
  3. Philippe

    Chapter 6

    It had people seeing red!
  4. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Interesting that you should mention Daniel and Jimmy. They looked oddly at Levi when he said he had some to do with Luke. Could it be that these two came out to check on Levi only to see the commodore departing Avalon? Wanting to see wants going on, then worried for Levi they could have been on a stakeout…only to witness the drunken voyage towards the crash site. Perhaps they rescued the drunken, no longer as naive, and…still a good friend. Scared shitless teens do so many stupid things but admittedly, hanging the keys back on the key hook has definitely been a twist; it bought time for the night, but now it complicates the stolen vehicle theory…beyond the hungover and bruised Levi. Now if the friends were smart enough to rip down the wires for appearances of a hot wire stolen car before dragging Levi home the. I’m impressed that a young generation youth could see the old car as having a simple solution right under the dash.
  5. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Ok, own up. Dad, I took the commodore to a party. Then when I got ready to leave…. i have no idea how those keys got there. 😈
  6. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Yup, the set up, feed him a drink after he eases up enough to trust a little.
  7. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Then again, how many of us really kept a good count on drinks when we were distracted by exciting new things and hormones plugging ears and brain clotting; so anywhere from 3 to…
  8. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Well in all fairness, what teen wouldn’t be shell shocked to wake from a first and bad hangover and be greeted by a popo at the door when…this dad has just taken him in not long ago. Has he ruined it and will now go the foster care? Or worse, Juvi?
  9. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Sometimes even adults can play dumb, and wait for dumberer to fess up. That’s a major guilt and shit show, but another way to skin a cat ( sorry @Summerabbacat, just an expression).
  10. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Teen stupidity on top of closeted gay, repressed Churchie, homeschooled and naive, then HYPER-HORMONAL brain clotting. He’lol confess, but maybe later. Likewise, the talk of the small town is still bound to reach Riptide warning levels by the time Levi does confess.
  11. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    Lots of similarities between Levi and Matt’s history but Casey is definitely not a Luke quality guy.
  12. Philippe

    Chapter 23

    I think Levi has probably just found employment in body shop of humble humility and a debt of gratitude that things didn’t go worse than expected, Not worse for the Commodore, not Levi’s bruised body, but from the new meat comment and the wave-off shake of Casey’s head, I believe Levi’s wreak may have same Levi from a night of video porn blackmail and/or possibly rape. The hours spent repairing the Commodore with a very disappointed dad will be a long road of recovery; of the trust and faith that Matt, Luke, and the tribe thus far given Levi. Total confession beyond Father Costa will possibly buy back some of Levi’s trust and dignity a home but then then word will spread of the church boy visiting the devil’s playground; hopefully the rumors will reveal the destiny Levi avoided when the commodore decided enough was enough and put the guardrails into Levi’s path. Yes, it could have been worse, but maybe now Levi will realize his true friends, family, and what is truly treasured; what is important to him. Meanwhile, the phone, the text, the bonfire site, and all the people may find confessions are a great way to unload all that troubles…Levi. The cockroaches have run but they can’t hide forever.
  13. Philippe

    Chapter 22

    Ahhh now, just because someone tries to button up loose ends doesn’t mean they are not fly, besides, it’s hard to keep such thoughts zipped up when whether it’s straight from the cut or we give it the boot, Levi is still a cool name.
  14. Philippe

    Chapter 5

    Mark should bypass Insta and instead go old-fashioned and serenade Sandro with some simple gay funny love song/poem. Nothing like coming out to him in his public front yard. 🎶 Tip toe through the tulips with me. 🎶 A little tongue in cheek but whatever the boys need from each other needs to be agreeable to at least satisfy their comfort zones and expectations.
  15. Philippe

    Chapter 5

    Teen brain?
  16. Philippe

    Chapter 5

    Paralyzing fear of losing your best friend and crush because they haven’t shared that fact that they’re gay and you haven’t shared with them likewise, both for probably the same reason. Mark has just now come out to his parents but remember that it been 6-months and Sandro has only been out now for a short time himself; maybe a little longer with his immediate family but it doesn’t seem likely since both sets of the parents have been trying to get to the bottom of this situation. Personally I think both boys need to write a 4 paragraph letter to the other, Only one simple/short sentence <15 words for each item mentioned: 1. Apologize for their own confusion and contributions since friendship lockout 2. Simple What, when, and how/why they’ve been dealing with their problems 3. What they would like to happen; for themselves and for each other. 4. Request the other to see them; private but chaperoned. House office with at least one parent each available perhaps. The letters should remain private but need a pledge of being complete and sincere. This would break the ice and de-escalate the conflict between the boys enough to talk. Yet it would be a safe space by set up but make no promises other than to clear the air and hopefully find a common friendship still alive but maybe bruised.
  17. Philippe

    Chapter 4

    That’s a pretty good run on Mark’s teen depressed defensive logic…been there too. The teen version of F it.
  18. Philippe

    Chapter 4

    The nest punch will be that special sticky sweet lemonade rum; one or both may puke their guts out and stumble home hopefully arms over each others’ shoulders; just please don’t let it be drunken teen driving and death or near-death visits with the reaper.
  19. Philippe

    Chapter 3

    So true, the claw marks just go deeper to back up…nope, you can’t make me.
  20. Philippe

    Chapter 2

    I think he’s major depressed, thinking who could want him…when his own bestie and his crush didn’t choose him either. The harsh homophobic reply was after Mark had blurted his slur but it seems Sandro didn’t have a problem or reservations before that. It’s a shame kids choose such harsh responses and draw such absolute lines, but I remember at probably around 12yo being very jealous of my bestie starting to spend a lot of time with two other friends, so what did brain child do, I stopped spending time with any of them. 🤦‍♂️ However, in retrospect it was probably best as them got caught shoplifting during their afterschool escapades; the time while I normally did my paper-boy deliveries and probably contributed to the new friends for my bestie. Instead of homework first, he liked to hang before his mother returned from work as a single mom.
  21. Philippe

    Chapter 2

    I sometimes wonder if it’s not acting homophobic as a defense but also a combination of trying to gage how much the friend will agree or whether they maybe rebut telling them it’s no big deal… chill. I know it’s faulty logic…teen logic, so it does make me wonder.
  22. Philippe

    Chapter 1

    Ahhh, explosion of hormones without a owners Manuel…or the internet as a reference without knowing the right questions.
  23. Philippe

    Chapter 1

    Not reading ahead but probably a very good reflection of the transition from young besties, that we and only we share the closest secrets and friendship, others are just friendly acquaintances. Then comes the reality…maybe not all secrets are shared, both ways. Why did he start like him when we were besties? Doesn’t he know that I have feelings for him, and now he chooses him?
  24. Philippe

    Chapter 1

    Dreaded sperm buildup is another common reference
  25. Philippe

    Chapter 4

    No doubt a discussion would help them both help the other. Troy has fears of any 16yo that he’s about to have commitments when freedom and independence seems simple. Yet, he doesn’t realize the ranch may actually be the freedom and independence that he wants…to live a life he can enjoy be shaped or tailored somewhat more for his personal tastes. There are many, many options that may still include the ranch, especially if Morgan gets to stay and if Morgan embraces more of the ranch life as his own destiny.
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