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@Demiurgeyour words “Next chapter is going to be mostly sunshine and rainbows because I am emotionally tired,” give me comfort. As @drpaladincalls him the Master of Sunshine ☀️, Wren says Golden Boy, and of course Talon just says Sunshine; but this all supports that one could draw conclusions that the Lord Master of Sunshine will be the focus of this upcoming chapter. Likewise, the rainbow always has it’s own pail of gold, or hidden treasures; this also give me comfort that the sunshine, gold, and the end of the rainbow treasures implies that indeed Malicious Mallex will meet his “End” when the “Sunshine” comes out to color us a more cheerful day; worthy of “Snut” promised to relieve our emotional stresses endured these last few chapters. Perhaps too, Anika will share her end with her cherished Lex for which she lust; hmmm, is that lust of flesh, money, or power. It shouldn’t fall to Kalian to end her, but sister has proven a backstabbing, treasonous, bitxh, and an embarrassment to the Alauis name; either the current generations have failed the Alauis name, or has proven the House of Alauis unworthy of Kalian and his now faithful brother Eon. THANK YOU! hahahaha Another fantastic chapter despite the tough passages.

Queen Maregete laughed, “I was just about to give my approval.” Then Vincent and I told who did it. Both King Fredrik and Queen Maregete were applauded. “The problem is there was no crime,” King Fredrik groaned. Near the end of the chapter, did you mean: appalled vs applauded? When Thor develops his bark, may it strike fear in the way Thor’s Hammer strikes down those that dare challenge.

Acquiring satellites....calculating... Acquiring satellites....calculating... Acquiring satellites....calculating... Acquiring satellites....calculating...

Oh my, a very crappy start to a relationship that manifest as obsessive and is rejected. The rich boy spoiled upbringing finds Marcos perplexed that anyone could deny his beauty and power; yet that power has caused him to display aggressive and possessive behavior over a young free spirit he now hopes to win over. This shows that Marcos lacks the social skills and grace that would have probably won Ramon’s attention with little effort. Now the struggle for their lives is the only remaining chance Marcos has to prove a budding love versus the unrestrained lust and aggressiveness that broke the law and the trust of the object of his affections; affections he so desperately needs for the first time in his life. Anthony seems to knows Marcos better than he knows himself. Hopefully, that phone call was just a challenge to hear Marcos admit what Anthony already knew; that Marcos was on the ship and standing up Anthony on their planned furnishing appointment. Marcus has a lot to redeem of himself, to prove deserving of the heart of our innocent and pure young champion of virtue. @vanalas, thank you for sharing yet another unique story of emotional curveballs and suspense.

As one imagines the brothers embraced with a kiss thrown in, I can’t help but reflect on the line from Rent....we’re close!

😝 I love this storyline, as I’ve always had a similar approach. My neighbor boy came over to help me work on my old rusty trailer. The lugs were left installed too long without rotating tires or packing the wheel bearings; lugs that long installed would be harder to break free, maybe 400+ Ft-lbs torque on seized nuts. He is almost 12yo and weighs 76# and yet a 4-way lug wrench only provides a one foot torque lever; giving us 1ftx76lbs=76 young man ft-lbs. Explaining that the lugs would require possibly up to around 400ft-lbs torgue, I asked him what length pull handle would give him the 400ft-lbs if he stood on it or applied his full weight. So 400ft-lbs (torque required)= X foot (lever length required) x 76lbs (his full weight); he thought and approximated near a 6 foot pull handle. I handed him a fence post pipe and asked him to loosen the lugs while I rounded up grease and cleaning supplies. I really just wanted him to see that he had that ability and my trust in his math. I was still close enough as a safety observer but let him see his algebra applied. He told me he didn’t understand algebra yet as they only had covered an introduction in school. I then asked him what he called his problem solving??? I said I call it algebra! Hahaha 🤪 I love the lights coming on in the minds and eyes of our youth.

The fact that the Wilson’s Alphas, father and son, are not totally aware of the Stuerm risks is not unexpected but the networking is already working for them with much thanks to Vinsy and all is soon to be revealed or steered clear. Likewise, the similarities in the way Vinsy wants to approach leadership sounds a bit like what the Electric Panda has laid out there for the upcoming transition...more networking says Stuerm is out and so too may be the others, as the unseen brings Vinsy reservations but also seeing the effort of the Panda 🐼 transition may give the Power couple an opportunity to bring self governance and give member participation a boost. What new academic solution might the Hmmm 🤔, the things that make you say hmmm, the shy Panda 🐼 and bashful Wolf 🐺 are growing closer and closer; we’ve shed the jammies and only have the briefs 🩲 to stand as that last bit of modesty before coupling. Perplexing will be the cornucopia of sounds heard in testimony to that splendid event. .

Poor Wren, which sounds ironic in itself, has been betrayed in multiple ways; not only of and by the Royal Counsel but with agents acting against and from within his own order of the Verseckt. The deceit is deeply embedded with Anders appearing to be the general of this hostile force; but is he the force behind this movement or just the weapon of choice. The focus on controlling Kalian, and the threat Talon presents to that plan, has them so desperate as to threaten Kalian’s destruction for the larger goal(s). Wren must understand Kalian more than expressed openly, but beyond the personal betrayal for which he exacted revenge on the Verseckt betrayer for, I believe he eagerly awaits the awakening of the Golden Sunshine ☀️ Kalian has yet to unleash with focused determination; plenty for all of us to kill, but control your rage and emotions Kalian... It is beyond consideration that Malicious Mallex will impose his will upon Kalian. The defeat he promises to show Kalian will be his own; whether literally or in seeing his own forces crushed by the Little Lord of Sunshine that persists without property or family. The suspense is already a driving force for this chapter but @Demiurge, did you have to leave us without a crash cart to restart our hearts?

It’s somewhat funny to joke about the stereotype of the brother DNA being like the opposing poles of a singular magnet, but I find this situation begging of a kid not learning sharing and making friends. Aiden seems to have bonded not only in parental/child relationship with Seamus, but then he has also become possessive and unsharing of his very bestest friend Seamus. Aiden needs time to develop social skills and bonding outside of Matt and Seamus’ fultime/Funtime parental focus. Aiden is very smart but socially spoiled and underdeveloped as no daycare friends extend beyond that environment and time allowances, and no other friend relationships have been introduced. Aiden’s sharp little mind needs age relative friendships to broaden his mind and expand his imagination...beyond muus! What a temper-rat brat you’ve given life to @Mrsgnomie, but once the loud little mandrake is transplanted, it should flourish.

Hmmm, the journey has begun, but whose journey is it? Is it the journey Wren makes to reclaim is humanity? Is it the journey of Kalian’s band of rescuing misfits, to become more than the individuals they have become? Are is it the journey of Sunshine, our Golden Boy getting a giant step closer to understanding his own destiny? Kalian doesn’t know it yet, and Talon can’t yet understand it, but Kalian has apparently pulled Talon back, twice, from the big fade; if only he knew what he could be capable of and how to use it. Wren understands more than he says but then again his style seems to be one of observe and coach, and not to preach; but what a playbook he must have....yeah, it’s a trap....lol, but who’s? Noticeable too is that Talon refers to his special boy, Sunshine, without knowledge of who he is, but he then says “ it is them...but who is that?” Is “them” the band of misfits? Or could we be seeing the gathering of the ancient powers represented by the modern gifted players. The secrets of the books on the ancient powers has yet to revisit us yet. @demiurge, you’re outdoing yourself with even more suspense and danger...beyond Wren’s sharp white claws being near Eon’s nips and bits!

G is a psycho. This exercise doesn’t built trust in the team, the leadership, or even the individuals themselves. It’s all just mind fukn and very much undermines all that is really important. As Tyler says, Zeke WAS faithful and loyal to G’s plan, but then he now has distrust and is less likely to even repeat the same level of loyalty and will second guess missions for hidden agendas. Tyler is a smart cookie and I believe he is still in character for his own objective; perhaps to expose Zeke to the sad reality he already knows but hesitates to leave because of his commitment to ....the mission against the bad guys, not G. Likewise, he has made Zeke see him as a more capable and once back-briefed, Zeke will also see him as a more equal partner in his overall mission; not G’s. Tyler has focused his time with Zeke to better understand his crush. I believe Tyler is still committed to Zeke but in a way that can break him away from the caustic environment of G. Fantastic suspense and surprises for us @Littlelovestories,

Good grief, Andrea needs to respect her brother and especially as a guest in his house; I would have told her quickly that it’s my house and my life, you’re welcome to leave and if this persist you’ll need to leave. The full attack, 20 questions, and judgmental jabs were way over the line. Her personal life and her relationship is no excuse to disrespect someone else’s relationship. A peaceful balanced discussion may be acceptable but the host has ever right to stop it or ask the person to leave...NOW!

@headtransplantasks: Out of curiosity, do you think warnings are necessary at this point? I figure that readers who made it this far get the idea about the content, and I don't necessarily want to continue giving away what's going to happen before the chapter starts. But I still want to make sure I'm doing the right thing. Let me know your thoughts. *** just my 2 cents, and I’m not fully abreast any posting standards authors must comply with *** I would think the cover statement at the beginning of the story is fair warning, or if compelled, then put the same general statement on each chapter stating “Reader Beware; this STORY contains abuse and such content is central to the storyline and is inseparable in story content and it’s characters.” Then let the general statement ride independent of any particular chapter content; preserving storyline suspense without those pesky directional announcements.

Me smells a smelly wet dog has just run into the house to shake his environmental gifts for all to share; regardless how unwelcome. So the newly turned human Triple Affinity Shadow Mage, is born into his wolf as an Alpha and transforms hybrid all in a week. Now forced to fight a rogue Alpha that had no real claims to having pack territory, loses to Vinsy, within weeks of his turning. Now the EC has an emergency session to “decide” what to do with this new Alpha...ahem, I mean territorial dilemma. Ironic that the human Stacy was exposed to the supernatural, but from the point of view we witness that the council is more concerned to establish new precedent with awarding unclaimed territory. The territory without an Alpha requires EC governance either directly or by appointing a representative; not a desired task for the council I’m sure; so is it not convenient that the new all powerful Alpha Mate is now answerable directly to the council, when before pack law would provide some distance from the council? Hmmm 🤔, it seems an self initiated invitation to have added EC oversight and monitoring of this special Alpha. But now poor Vinsy has to hold council and review for all supernatural issues, challenges, and governance of his newly awarded Shadow Lands Pack Territory; Vinsy wanted to have a place for all to feel welcomed. As for the Alpha couple, they can now rest easy knowing that they have his and his doghouses/territories, for those chilly spousal days requiring extra space and bed arrangements. lol 😝 No, no, no, over here, you are the Alpha Mate. Hahaha 🤪 As the dust of this news settles, the counsel of Vinsy’s informal council of family, multi-pack friends, and general pack family will see to his success. @astone2292the suspense and excitement continues; your story is every bit as interesting and rewarding as it has been, very well done my man, congratulations again!

Sleeping on Egyptian Cotton can be life altering...

OMG, poor Eon; that has to be a roller coaster of shock, fright, paralysis, surprise,...and intrigue???? Hahaha Hmmm, Wren, Talon,...are the Verseckt all preordained to bird related names? Will the Verseckt emerge from the shadows to exact the pain deserved upon those daring to attack their order? Pale skin, red eyes,...is Wren more than a dungeon recluse? Albino? Wren prides himself on knowledge and is thought to be ancient..., so what does Wren already know of Kalian’s abilities and for that matter how does Talon fits into this lifetime event that seems born of prophecy. It almost seems as if Wren wants to personally be there for Talon, but not necessarily in the traditional sense, but rather to coach the emergence of the powers about to be born to our favorite young couple; likewise, he has to be there to protect Kalian anyway! Hahaha Dear Ole...ex-dad, formerly dad? Anyway, the dads have succeeded in giving Lex and Anita a major dose of the medicine forced upon Kalian; bravo to the dads screwing up so justly! Meanwhile, we’ll let @Demiurgereturn us to the more “hands on assistance” that Wren brings to this adventure!

Yeah,...he’s pregnant. lol 😝 Hmmm 🤔, so ...gestation or incubation? What is the alien period and size of clutch? Awww 🥰, bouncer will quickly defend against those nasty ole Kardoval and help with any nesting. Hahaha 🤣 OMFG, @Cia, you introduce so many thought provoking considerations for thinking outside our little ole blue and green world. Love it!

Anders is a wicked bastard for sure. Even Malicious Mallex doesn’t realize his own lack of utility if he doesn’t control Kalian; Anders even said he could lure Kalian with someone else if Lex was the issue, watch your own back Lex! Hahaha, I can’t think of a more deserving person. Wren needs to make his first visit with Kalian quickly! As @drpaladinsays, Wren will not be happy; the King has a hostile takeover going down under his nose, add to that, an attack on the Verseckt and Wren’s protege with this plotting. Hopefully, Talon can be located soon. I hold hopes that the link is capable of more than communication and that the power of light will bring strength and clarity to the darkness. Imagine this strange partnership of Wren and Kalian...is there a future where Wren’s curse may be broken? It still seems there are some that are privy to the secrets of Kalian’s light, but they also seem to lack the understanding of the close relationship with the dark. Tyren appears to have kept the confidence of the link; reassuring after the rumors following Talon getting flash burns. Is the Queen a willing participate or another pawn of her own vanity. She too could be expecting rewards Anders has no intent to share. Absolute power corrupts absolutely??? @Demiurge, another thriller chapter with some clues confirmed with more stirred into the mix.

Oh wow, what a spoiled ass;...absolute power corrupts absolutely; perhaps with his riches he will finally see his own ugly reflection now.

With a dagger held tight, Vincent did constrain might. But challenge did come from a rogue Kordell, A malevolent Alpha compelling humans to hell. Opportune attack on Beta and girlfriend, The rogue choose crimes charting his end. With anger and rage the Mage Wolf did collect, Conversation and restraint second to PROTECT. With a snap, crackle, pop, the Alpha did give, Mind too twisted to accept the gift to live. Now Stacy exposed to fur and claws, Doesn’t seem adverse to meeting In-laws. Pure hearted Vincent feels conflicted at best, Taint of a kill on the heart does rest. Does this make him like Stefan the Shade, For the darkened path could that step be made. Hero at heart and purity ring true, For Stefan and Kordell in a pod are one not two. With purity of heart feeling somewhat askew, Love and council will mend and renew. First aid for the gladiator awaits at the door, Mentor, mother, comfort and more, Please @astone2292 scribe us some more!

Lol, no not a well thought out adult solution perhaps 🤔, but I can appreciate the young man trying to come into his own; perhaps fighting resentment the workers hold against the spoiled kid of the all important head scientists. But also, I think of his trusting innocence of having grown up in space; this is his neighborhood in terms of familiarity. He race of humans don’t recognize the threats as they hadn’t seen the aliens, those deeming the race unready for contact, so Essell’s entire race is proceeding, in blessful ignorance of the higher intelligence, sending the unarmed and/or unescorted expeditions for mining exploration and scientific breakthroughs; not deemed dangerous, though admittedly, that doesn’t mean safe. So with that context, the wayward conduct of a teenager/young man character is much like us country kids that explored unfamiliar woods and animals often alone and unafraid, as we thought it our world and our right; and somehow we all survived...often with the ole switch bush getting stripped of yet another branch that afternoon when the truth was revealed. Sitting for supper was often added punishment as a tanned and fevered bottom tends to make for a restless meal. When thirteen, my father unexpectedly came home for lunch and found me sitting on the fender of mom’s used car, it had not held it’s turning and was running quite rough. With my legs in the engine compartment to allow me to reach the center mounted distributor rotor and shaft, I had just pulled that entire rotor shaft, and distributor housing with spark plug wiring still attached from the engine. Dad’s words were something along the line of OMG son, that only goes together in one way...shaking his head he retreated for lunch mumbling about calling his mechanic friend tonight. I removed the suspect bad parts and then moved my mom’s old car, we had yet to sale since to new one was running rough, to the front drive for her to take me to the auto parts house for new parts and tune up supplies. The car was returned to it’s reassembled condition and I awaited dad’s return home. After his dinner and evening reports he turned to me and asked if I was ready to ask his friend for help as it was my mess to confess and correct. I held up the keys and asked why? Can we go for a test drive now dad? 😝 Needless to say the car running like new saved that poor switch bush another stripping, but that was the way for us independent kids. One needed confidence and determination to execute your plans, and a strong backside when you went far beyond your safety and understanding.

Lmao, with all the clarity and excitement one can experience with the hormonal changes of bonding...I can’t wait until the pregnancy enriches the mix!

I like the way you highlight that passage, but I’m reading between the lines...two years before I caught him...almost as if it was expected but took two years to fulfill destiny; so big trust issues. Bobby likewise has already grown up in an environment of trust and would not play well into Uncle’s persistent paranoid trust issues.

I tend to agree when I hear him in the present, but thinking back to his understanding of his exosuit, it was indestructible and the best tech they had from the research section he hoped to augment with his independent research. The suit being breached was rather unexpected and even Bouncer’s bonding was not quite understood yet. So now Essex himself become the specimen of an inter-species, intergalactic, nanotechnology, DNA reprogramming, experiment...on an alien ship. 😝 So I hear ya, but I’m think I might be wondering if the Mr Toad’s Wild Ride of life wouldn’t have me tumbling out of the lab, hoping to wake up; Bravo CIA, I’m so loving this roller coaster ride of twists galore @Cia, the suspense, thriller, sci-fi romance still has me on the edge.

May you continue to find the inspiration and creativity that has allowed you to bring us this fantastic tale. Please, please, please, keep it going 🙏.