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Ok, so that's great and all that Ray's now on "American Idol" and he may be a winner...but...what the hell happened with Frank? You totally left off with him having a heart attack, in the hospital, and the readers didn't know if he was going to live or die. Now all of a sudden, Ray is doing his "American Idol" thing and Cam, Andrew, Brenda and Frank are all in the audience. Again, what the hell happened with Frank? Obviously he's fine, but I think you should have started the chapter with the aftermath of Frank's heart attack and what the doctors said about his recovery. It wasn't until the last part of this chapter that the readers even knew that Frank survived. Other than that little continuity blip, it was a good chapter. Boy those judges are harsh! lol And I didn't know Katy Perry sung a song called "The One that Got Away". I only thought Jake Owen sang that one. Oh man, you shoulda had Ray sing "Donkey"; that would have gotten the audience and the judges up there and dancin'. lol

Matt's parents are so wonderful. I don't know how many parents would be so understanding and always there for their kids. Andy's parents are really coming around for Andy also. It's just too bad it took something like this happening to make Andy feel their love and support. I'm looking forward to Thomas finishing his testimony. I really loved the quotes you found, Elias. They are so true. They made me think back to how I act with my kids and what I could do better.

Yep, Siggi's back to his old ways - having sex so he can stop feeling. The having-sex-with-Gisli part surprised me. I didn't realize they had done it before or that Gisli was even into that. I hope you're having a good Easter, James!

Beautiful story, Louis. I loved the ending. Will is such a smart guy and so insightful. It was hard for Basil to see what Will saw about Corneles b/c he was so stuck on the past and his feelings towards his ex. I'm happy Corneles found love with Ruwan, but most important, I'm glad Basil is able to paint again.

Omg, Andy!!!!! I can't believe you ended it like that!!! I was actually laughing when I was reading about all the rumors and how they escalated from servant to servant. lol Sorta like the telephone thingy when you tell one person one thing and by the time ten people hear it, it's completely different. lol I can't wait to find out what Max's dad walked in on!

Omg, I am speechless!!!! Who was the monster who tortured and killed that girl? That wasn't the girl from the beach, was it? I couldn't remember if the girl from the beach was named Melissa. Shit, who would do that just to frame Davis? And who else knows about him? And how the hell did the guy get his DNA? Jesus, what a chapter, Tony!!! Hurry up and post chapter three - I'm on pins and needles here!!

I didn't realize that Dayna was Issac's sister. And what a mess she got herself into. What is it with these sisters, wanting to mess up their siblings? lol I hope that Tara reads the speech before she prints it out! lol What a bitch her sister is! So Jaemin finally left Miracle. Stupid to do it now and not graduate. JMO And who is Faye Carson? I don't remember that name at all.

Ok, so Sean sent a text to Tara's sister, but he doesn't know who the hell they were all talking about, so what damage does he really think he can do? lol I cannot believe that David is Aiden's real father! Holy shit! On a happy note, Miracle and Tara are friends. Hmmm, strange, huh? Ok, on to the next chapter.

Trevor! I can't keep up with you! You're a writing machine! lol First of all, I can't believe Miracle called Eric from a pay phone in Cali. Second of all, I can't believe there are still pay phones out there! lol Third of all, I can't believe he now screwed Kevin, albeit unintentionally. And that whole scene at the prom? Just fucked up. But not as fucked up as what Miracle is now doing to Tara and Aiden. I mean, I can see where Miracle is pissed at Aiden for not telling him about Tara and the whole king and queen shit, but really, to do this? Holy shit. The whole story with the store clerk arranging this so he could rob the place but look like the victim is so convoluted, it's funny. lol And now Miracle will get away with something else. Ok, on to the next chapter!

I wonder why Bryce didn't pull over and confess his feelings to Davis? I really enjoyed the first chapter. I'm looking forward to their college days, and I'm really curious about the prostitute who got punched. Where is Wills Tower? Is that near the school? Oh, and one other thing: 11 inches? Really? lol

I love Robbie! He's a pisser and a terrific friend! I'm so proud of Penguin! He passed all his tests and now he can help others! What a smart kitty. Sean is such a romantic! That was a perfect date for Daniel. I look forward to reading about more perfect dates with them.

Omg, poor Zach, no child should ever have a "mother" like Willow. What a bitch. She's such a horrible, horrible person. I'm glad Zach isn't taking what she said to him to heart. Her words could certainly crush a child who's more sensitive. I'm happy to read that Scott is back and the therapy is going well (at least with Scott and Will), b/c Scott and Noah pretty much stopped going. I'm things are pretty much back to normal for the family.

Omg, yes!!!! DON'T KILL TREY!!!!!! We'll all be in tears!!!! (Mark, Trey's parents, your readers...) Mark was very nice to offer help with the computer. They should definitely get a new computer w/o a doubt. lol Especially if they can afford it. It'll be well worth it just to be able to Skype or something with Trey. (not that I've ever Skyped myself...don't even have it on my five-year-old Sony. lol) But it's old and it still works. lol Great chapter, Renee - glad you're back!

Now this is NOT good. It doesn't matter what Clinton said he would tell Cj, now that Cj saw them kissing Clinton maychicken out and go back on his word. I'm just praying he doesn't do what a lot of guys would do when faced with this situation: I'm hoping for Corey's sake that Clinton doesn't push Corey away, claiming that Corey came on to him, and then Clinton will call Corey all these horrible names. That would be so horrible for Corey. I hope Clinton can man-up and tell Cj the truth. Although I have a feeling Cj's gonna get physical. Damn, Jenny should have been there to take him out again! lol This was another riveting chapter, Krista!

Loved this second chapter, Valkyrie! I'm glad Sean didn't let Daniel stew for too long. lol Can't wait to hear about their date and their background: Trevor...Michael...=)

Something's got to be done about that little turdface Arthur. He just can't go around beating up people. And what the heck does he know about bindings???? I wonder why Oscar had that dream - it was really depressing and sad to dream about a family who abandoned you, even if you don't recognize the family as being yours.

Great review, Addy! You make the story sound really interesting. =)

Well, Wheeler is certainly not making Dillon look good. Now not only is he being accused of the previous crimes, but now his actions started the boys on a whirlwind of sexual activity that they would have never even thought of doing befofe they met him. Now at least with Matt, everything is out in the open with his parents; there are no more lies for him to tell. Great chapter, Elias!

I really like Aiden. I don't think he would ever intentionally hurt Miracle. I know Jaemin is still in love with him though. I hope Jaemin doesn't get in trouble with the mob guys for trying to get Eric for Miracle. What a tangled web Miracle weaves. lol I can't believe he and Aiden did it on Jennifer or her roommates's bed in her dorm room when either one could have come in. lol

I'm with Cole - definitely didn't see that one coming. Wow, Mikeal really got thrown for a loop. And that was not how he should have found out. He's eighteen, how long were his parents going to wait until they told him? And he never thought it was strange that his sisters didn't have any Japanese features? I think his parents are going to be furious with Hy (I'll call her Hy - I won't even attempt to spell her name; I'll only butcher it. lol), when they find out he knows and he took off. Great chapter, Cassie! As usual!

Great chapter, Shadow! I'm glad Emmett wasn't stuck with those wings, but who knows when they'll be back? Now it gets interesting knowing that Jayden is his mate, and he didn't really want to be avoiding Emmett.

Lol, me too and the eye candy isn't bad either. All they need are singlets. haha

Great video and great song!

CONGRATS THORN!!!!! I'm so happy for you!!!

It was very generous of Aiden's mom to buy the plane tickets for Miracle to go back home for awhile. I know he's trying to set Eric up, but I don't know, Eric seems too smart to fall for anything Miracle says. I didn't understand the bit at the end about the gang. All of a sudden Miracle was back at Aiden's? And the bikers came by to pay a visit? Or did I miss something and I'm not remembering reading about Miracle coming back. I thought he was going to stay Down Under longer.