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Omg, CJames! You had me rolling on the floor with these boys. Poor Brandon - he had no idea what he said! Yeah, his gaydar definitely needs a tune-up. He should tell Instinct about his family and what they did to him. Does he really think his folks are going to be at the concert? Couldn't he just sort of sneak into Phoenix and sneak back out after the concert and no one will be the wiser? On a completely different note, who the heck is The Scar? Ok, on to the next chapter!

Love Devil Woman - what a great song! And isn't John Barrowman the guy who plays a bi-guy on Dr. Who or one of those shows?

I first found Cassie on that other site when she was writing the NTS series. I was hooked on that from the first line. I don't think I realized it wasn't a typical mainstream story, but I was too invested in it to back out! And I'm glad I didn't back out! It's a fantastic series and if there's anyone out there that hasn't read it, I highly recommend it. =) I remember that time Cassie had the problem with the "impersonator". I was sort of new here at the time but I remember. It's horrible that people will stoop so low as to steal an author's hard work. Cassie spent so much time and energy on her story and when I was reading it I knew I read it on the other site first, buy the real author. Glad that's water under the bridge now. Cassie's a great author and I'm really enjoying her new "Geeks" story.

Damn, CJames! Now I know why I see those banners all over GA claiming you are the KING of Cliffies! lol I'm thrilled Brandon's bad luck is going to take a turn for the better. Too bad the boys of Instinct can't fire that asshole Gabe. What a tool. I just love your story CJames! I love reading about bands and music... Ok, on to the next chapter. =)

Holy shit, hh5, that's Fabrizio!!!!! I was so in love with him!!! Omg, I used to stalk his website all the time!!!! Omg, whatever happened to him? Yeah, Ethan Gold, the nice Jewish kid from QAF.

First of all, Fitz, I want to say that I really enjoyed your note on YouTube to your readers. I also liked your version of Hallelujah. It's a great song! One of my kids heard it while I was listening and he said, "Oh, that's the song from Shrek!". lol Now, on to the review: I was so angry with what Scott did up on stage that I almost threw my laptop out the window. Luckily I didn't, otherwise I couldn't leave a review. lol And HE LOOKED GOOD!!!! How DARE he look good!!! He's supposed to look like he lost fifty pounds, unshaven, with greasy hair and bags under his eyes!!!! WTF???? Unless...he spent all this time looking better just to win Noah back. There's that. But never mind that, I'm pissed at him. He thinks he can just waltz up on stage, play a few songs (not even really showing that they are heartfelt), and Noah's gonna just take him back. Just like that? What an ass. And to do this in front of all those people??? Does he have any fucking IDEA how utterly DEVASTATED Noah AND ZACH have been? What an idiot. So actually the first song I thought of that Noah could sing was this one by Green Day's American Idiot cast (FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC play - only saw it twice though. ): To you... Too much too soon Too little and now your coming unglued Too much too soon Too late and now it sucks to be you Too much too soon Too little and now your coming unglued Too much too soon Too late and now it sucks to be you too He's talking shit about how it's better way back when He lives every waking moment as means to an end We are we are but I'm not I never used to be So god bless your fucking past and to hell with your glory She packs her bags and says goodbye and bon voyage Farewell we'll see you in hell I hope you rest in pieces Fuck you Oh..oh oh oh oh... Oh..oh oh oh oh... That's the first song I thought of. Of course when you mentioned "Jar of Hearts" and "Say Something", I thought, "Oh yeah!" And how about "Leave the Pieces" by The Wreckers? That's another great one. I will admit that I felt badly for Scott (I'm going to nickname him db (douchebag), for short. It seems appropriate - I nicknamed my ex, Scott, db, so maybe all Scott's are db's. No offense to other Scott's out there I don't know.), when Zachy (we call our Zach Zach-Zach), yelled at him and slammed the door in his face. But Scott totally deserved that. He had five months to come and talk to Noah and Zach. Five months. He decides to air their dirty laundry (as Noah put it), in front of strangers. That is NOT the way to win your husband back. Stupid idiot. Where is his sensitivity? Oh yeah, it flew out the window the second he walked out on the best fucking thing that happened to him since Steve. Fucking coward. Can you tell that I'm just furious with him? You would think he would have learned when he pulled this shit when Steve died. But that was ok; it was just him, he didn't have a husband and child that he just walked out on. I'm really surprised he went to see Will. I think that was another stupid move on his part. How can he put Will in that position? What? Atlanta doesn't have any other qualified shrinks? Asshole. Ok, I'm gonna stop now before I start throwing things. lol I can't wait to hear what he's gonna say to Noah in the next chapter. It better be good. Great job, Fitz! =)

Wait, who said he was ugly? Man, I must need glasses b/c from where I'm sitting, he ain't ugly at all! Did you see that head of curls?

HAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You lost me at 'embed'!!!!! And what's a bookend? Lol, the only bookend I know is a heavy thing you put at the end of a row of books so they don't fall. Hahah Did I mention how utterly computer STUPID I am????? Idk...it did work the first time I tried the BBC Code Mode thingy but when I tried it before it didn't work. Maybe it depends on the videos?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W-TE_Ys4iwMhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W-TE_Ys4iwM&feature=player_detailpage Don't laugh at me, I love these guys; they are so cute! Ok, for some reason the video is not showing. Why is that?

Omg, that's an oldie!

Great chapter! I loved all your descriptions of the park and the fireflies and the sad boy. I'm happy it all worked out for Hamish.

Jeez, I really thought the beginning happened! lol Good to know it was only a dream/nightmare. So I don't get it: Jaemin and Miracle enrolled in a school? Are they still living in the cabin? And how did Miracle get a phone? I thought he left his phone with the kid from Philly... And why would they enroll in a school when they're trying to get to Vegas? And their school records would have to be sent and they would need parents or guardians around to register them, wouldn't they? Jaemin's not eighteen is he? Oh, and if they're trying to stay on the DL, then why the hell would Jaemin want Miracle to get in trouble on his first day? I have one word of advice for Ryder: RUN!!!!! lol And never look back!!

Great second chapter, C James! I'm curious to find out about Brandon's past. Gabe sounds like such an ass. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm hooked. I wasn't able to see the pictures though. Oh, and the story is listed as complete...didn't know if that was an error. Ok, on to chapter one.

Cute chapter, Kitt! It's hard to picture the August heat with the snow on the ground and the temps so low. lol We'll get there eventually. =) Oh, I did notice you kept switching from third-person pov to first person (Matt).

What a great new story! Your chapter was very well-written and it was a pleasure to read. I felt so bad for Kaydon - what an ass Bryce was to betray him like that. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great job, Insurgency!

I can't believe Jaemin let Nick have Miracle for a stinkin' twenty-five bucks! That's rather insulting. lol I can understand Jaemin feeling threatened and insecure every time someone comes on to Miracle, but it's not Miracle's fault he's attractive. Miracle wasn't asking for the attention of other people. Miracle just needs to have enough self-respect to say no. And since he was so fucked up, Jaemin shouldn't have left it up to him to decide. Jaemin should have just got in the van with Miracle and left. IMO

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FXjOTG_y4gA Holy crap it worked!!!!! Thank you, Suvitar!!!! :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8zO6Wnmp1DU Ok, well I clicked on the little 'link' icon in the middle of all the options in this post window and copied and pasted the YouTube link. I don't know if it will show up with the video though when I hit the 'post' button. Nope, only the link showed up. No video...I'll keep trying I guess. Thanks anyway, Suvitar.

I agree with Terry; I'm surprised his mom didn't come over and clean Bernard's apartment for him. At least to throw the knife out and clean off the blood stained countertop. I'm glad Jack is there for Bernard. He's going to need all the support he can get to help him with his problems.

Damn, Siggi's good mood won't last? I really enjoyed this chapter! As I mentioned when I was editing it, I kept reading the first few pages over and over trying to figure out whose pov the chapter was in! lol It certainly didn't sound like the Siggi we know and wish we loved's pov. lol It was really a pleasure to see Siggi so happy! I'm glad he's feeling better! He even referred to Dmitri as Dmitri, and not 'the bastard'. lol I'm disappointed his good mood doesn't last though. I'm looking foward to reading more about his family with Arnar.

Poor Akihiko. He certainly didn't have parents who showed him much attention. It's so sad that he doesn't know how to interact with people. Or at least with Hiroki. I hope Akihiko and Hiroki can at least communicate in the next chapter so Akihiko knows he wasn't being rejected. =)

Ok, another stupid comment from me, the most computer-challenged person you'll meet: what icon and where? On the upper left corner of this page, or on YouTube? The only icon I saw on the upper left-hand side on YouTube was three lines and when I clicked on it it opened up my YouTube user name, what to watch, subscriptions, etc. Nothing about copying the link to another site.

How do you copy and past the video? I tried doing that in YouTube but it didn't work.