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Omg, who the f is Skylar????? lol She's the new Melanie! Who said that? They're right! What a fucking bitch! I don't know what she has planned, but I'm sure whatever it is, is no good. I wonder what's going to happen between Miracle and Jae? Jae will tell Miracle that nothing happened with Sterling, but will Miracle (or Cody), confess to Jaemin?

Heya Trevor! Merry Christmas! Well, it's midnight, so I guess Christmas if officially over. Hope you had a good one! I don't know how I missed this chapter! I thought that Jae killed Sterling; I didn't realize he set him up. I'm glad Sterling's still alive. So now Jae and Miracle are being unfaithful. Why does that not surprise me? Well, it doesn't as far as Miracle is concerned. I just hope Cody doesn't get hurt. Ok, on to chapter twenty-four. I already have a bad feeling about it...lol.

What a great chapter, Rob! That Derek is such an ass. He has some nerve thinking he can 'buy' Eli. Noah is so lucky he has Eli. One of the worst things about a break-up is that you're alone for the holidays unless you spend them with family or friends and that's not always possible. I'm glad Noah will be with Eli. Merry Xmas, Rob!

I really liked Mandi; she was pretty cool. Too bad her folks are so old-school that they wouldn't even let her go to a party with gasp! boys! They have to learn to trust her and trust that they raised her right and trust (too many trusts, I know!), that she'll do the right thing. Of course it's easy for me to say: I don't have any girls! lol But still, you have to trust (there I go with the 'trust' word again), you kids. I'm still not sure what I feel about Stuart, but I'm glad Nick came out to him. Let's see what he's like at band practice. I'm looking forward to finding out more about Alan and Matt b/c from what I remember, weren't they 'together' at the end of the last story? Great chapter, Thorn! Merry Xmas!

Merry Christmas, Elias! I hope you're feeling better. =) Now Matt's lying to his folks, he can't talk to Andy w/o their parents listening in...things will certainly be different for them for awhile. I hate to think what will happen if Matt's folks AND Andy's folks find out that they were lying to them all along. Funny how Randy and Andy think the same way. lol I never realized Oscar Wilde was so funny and insightful. =)

I agree with huk; I read this on the other site a few years ago and just loved it. I'm not into werewolves, but for some reason your story got to me and I was hooked. lol I can't say much here b/c I don't want to spoil it for others, but it's a great story.

What an excellent chapter, Houdinii! Poor Nate just needed some space b/c he couldn't deal with what happened, and now everyone is after him. However, I can also see it from Jeff's pov, thinking that Nate is selfish. I can't believe Henry is dead. That's horrible. And Brandon and Tony are in ICU. They have Jack, right? He's in jail I hope? What a sad, sad chapter. I'm glad you're back Houdinii. Have a great holiday and I look forward to your next update.

Holy shit, Houdinii!!! WTF just happened???? I can't believe I missed this chapter! What rock was I hiding under? Now I'm on pins and needles, but luckily you just updated! lol

I love this, totallyy. I'm a little confused, but it was a beautiful story, one that I would love to read more about so I can put all the pieces together. I'm slow like that. lol I really loved the descriptions though. The way you had the narrator looking at the painting and wanting to be the only one who saw it, and hearing the painting talking to him, it was really beautiful. And, great job with the prompt!

The description of Basil's anxiety is so spot-on. I'm sure we've all been there: clammy hands, every time you think of the person your hearts skips a few beats, the butterflies in your stomach do their butterfly dance...your nerves are so on edge... I'm crossing my fingers and hoping Basil isn't dreaming this. William sounds too good to be true: hot, sweet, true-to-his-word, and an Olympic swimmer to boot! If it's not a dream, I just hope they're not moving too fast and all that lust just doesnt fizzle. I look forward to the next update, Louis!

Another heartbreaking chapter for Keith. At least Elliot woke up and it is true, his memory could come back. I hope it does for both their sakes. Elliot will know then that there was life after Jasper and that he found love again. I'm just sorry this isn't your reality, Keith.

Loved this Christmas story, Thorn! I can just imagine the Northern Lights shining down on a place that was once pitch black. Can't imagine livng in a place like that at all.

I saw it early this morning, oops, I meant yesterday morning, after midnight sometime...and what the heck are you doing up so early???

I'm really curious to hear more about what Trey's thinking about what Mark could do. I think I already said in the previous review that Jackie is sweet to offer this to her brother, but knowing her, he won't get any privacy and she'll be meddling in his business. Well, I guess that could go under 'no privacy'. lol Maybe Mark should just do what we all did in school: work part-time. I had two part-time jobs in college. He can still concentrate on school with one part-time job. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Have a happy and healthy holiday, Renee!

Jesus, sacred, between Casey, Rachael and her unborn child, my eyes were so blurry, but what took the cake was when Jamie killed himself. That was horrible. What he said, his explanation for wanting to end it all, that despair and heartache was just heartbreaking. It really was hard to read with my eyes so watery. And the ending was also heartbreaking. Ma'am is a monster just like Monster is a monster. I can't believe Zune/Swan has been in that hellhole for SEVEN MONTHS!!!! He's been raped and abused by Monster for all that time, it's amazing that he hasn't lost his mind. I think now with all the losses he's suffered in the past day or two, he might crack. If he loses Angie, that'll be it, but it won't matter, b/c if Nine doesn't kill Angie, Ma'am's gonna take out Zune. Poor Nine. What a decision. Well, you know from my email what I think could happen, if he were to take that chance. Anyway, this was another fantastic chapter, sacred! You have us all on pins and needles!!!! And I know you have readers; I've seen the number of views for the chapter - WHY ISN'T ANYONE ELSE REVIEWING THIS STORY???????????? Come on people!!!! lol All it takes is a minute of your time.

It must have been very hard emotionally for Danny to realize he didn't thnk about Brian once during the day before, when he kept feeling he was missing something. After all, for eleven years he thought about his husband at least once during the day. I liked Danny's and Cayden's playfulness after the play. I'm glad Danny was stressed out over nothing when it came to them being intimate. =) For some reason though, I thought Cayden was the taller of the two. You kept referring to Cayden as the smaller man; I thought Danny was the shorter one. One more chapter to go and I'm already missing these guys!

Arthur McKay! What a little bitch, attacking our Jean like that! Although Jean seemed as if he liked it. I still feel badly for Henry. Jean continues to flirt with anyone with a dick and Henry just has to sit and take it. (ha, no pun intended). I'm looking forward to the dinner with the parents. Great chapter, James!

Stuart seems cool, but if he gets in between Nick and Dave, I'm gonna HATE him! Just a warnng... For some reason I thought Matt and Alan were together. It surprised me when Matt got that phone call and wouldn't tell Nick who it was. I do have one complaint though, Thorn: the chapter was too short!!!! I got down to the bottom and thought, "Shit, the chapter's over! I need more!!!" lol

Chapter 11: "A motley bunch of heathens..." That was very funny. Glad to see the old crotchety Mr. Willams has a sense of humor after his meds kick in. =) I really like Paul and Kevin. Of course i can guess what "Does he know?" means, but I can't wait to find out what Ellis did to Peter. It's also good seeing Jon trying to make friends with Kevin b/c kids can be cruel and it's nice that he's not worried about other boys being nasty to him b/c of who his friends are. Did that make sense? lol I wonder what Ellis has in store for Jon now? I'm sure Ellis was staring right back at Jon before and I know he's probably going to pick a fight with him. It's good that Peter isn't too far away. Too bad Paul's not on their bus... I had to laugh when I read, 'he was sat at' and 'was sat there with it' because I know that's British English, but coincidentally, I just read an email from "Daily Writing Tips" that talked about just that. It mentioned that the British were trying to veer away from that type of speech, since it is considered an old-fashioned way of speaking. After having read a few stories from British authors, I must admit, I do like the way it sounds. Great chapter, Caffled! Hopefully you're back for good and the next chapter will be out sooner!

I didn't even see this in the main section. I'm so glad to read about Sky again! Thank God he didn't die! lol He just became a vampire. No big deal, right? hehe And who could blame him for being so pissed at Dermot? Dermot treated him horribly. He did apologize, but still. A little too late, you know? I guess in the end, love (or lust, or vampire lust? lol), won out and now Sky has his Master back. Great story, Addy!

Louis!!!! I LOVE your story!!! =) I can feel Basil's madness; living like a hermit would drive anyone insane I think. I love the way the writing is so descriptive; I feel like I'm right there watching the whole thing unfold. I look forward to the next chapter.

Ah, so many questions, Circle, so many questions. I had originally thought the story the boy was writing was an autobiography. I had orginally thought YOU were the boy writing the story. : So obviously, much of the story the boy wrote was what he wanted to happen. I hope now he can go over to 'his' David and make a new friend. This was a terrific story, Circle and I'll miss reading about Dan's adventures. =) I thought it pretty ingenious that 'Dan' submitted his story to GA, and now the young boy is doing the same. You're a great writer, Circle and I hope to read more from you in the future.

I need to go back and re-familiarize myself with the original story b/c with all your stories in between, I forgot some of what happened. lol Can't wait for chapter two!

Another awesome beginning to another awesome Thorn Wilde story! On to chapter one!

Holy crap, Caffled! You're back! I didn't read the chapter yet, I have to finish doing my happy dance first. =)