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Chapter 52 - The Reading
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 52 - The Reading
Not a great deal of the cards...fingers crossed! -
Chapter 51 - Mud, Part Two
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 51 - Mud, Part Two
What will they find??? More thermal pools?? -
The problem with using recycled paper
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This begs for more!!!! Love the crazy world you created!!
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These guys need to figure out what they need to do...and soon!
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Can't happen soon enough...tho it may not be ideal... Skeptically, Sawyer looked at him, then grimaced strangely. "I probably shouldn't ask you this, but I'm curious. Why did you reject me?" Dante sighed. He'd rather not have to elaborate, but he didn't want to deny Sawyer an answer either. "When Alice and Matthew get married- and by now it's just a matter of when- a property line separates us."
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No rest for the wicked...
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Well now, no problem with the next 100K words, providing Davin and Joel pick up the pace a bit...I mean...ya cain't leave a poor boy hanging with the following...You're killing me smalls @Krista He dropped his hand from my shoulder, and I let out a breath when it found bare skin just above the hem of my jeans where my shirt had been pulled up. Oh lordy, all the pent-up frustrations incumbent in that sentence...imagine how the boys feel...
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Let's see how the Art World reacts to the masterpieces on display!!
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Oh, what a tangled mess is made when Killian drives...Jake...what are you up to, given your propensity for reckless behavior? Your posterior may just come out looking like a parking garage... As to Micah, the following rings hollow, considering he was using v-card-busting arguments with Killian and succeeded. He'd also assured me his views of sex had changed as he'd gotten older, and he never wanted his relationships to be based solely on sex again.
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Perhaps Brent can change. I am willing to give him the benefit of the doubt..
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Methinks Lydia could hold her own in that scenario...she will have to work at it and with Steve and Kenny's help co-opt our intrepid english teacher/international reporter...
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Not the best way to build a relationship foundation, Thomas is a disappointment...
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A Weekend Full of Promise
drsawzall commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in A Weekend Full of Promise
Looks like they were made for each other, I would stay away from the club scene for a while... -
Bus journey – 21 December
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Bus journey – 21 December
A calm beginning, and looking forward to seeing where this goes!! -
And it goes without saying the rude bi%ch at the counter was named Karen...or...can you say...hot flashes??? Or both???
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Thank you for sharing this, as an escapee from a bipolar family, aunts, uncles, cousins, enablers, and f'ing in-laws...I found life on the other side, while not everything is a bed of roses, it is much easier to deal with!
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To say the least, it is a complicated arrangement....
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Never turn your back till the job is finished!
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Let's not forget what Nick's pictures show, the scars on his back...
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Interlude: Nana's House
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Interlude: Nana's House
Oh no...I caught that; my comment was a plea in the dark. As an aside, I started to read some of Ken Follett's books had to stop for the very same reasons...Cliffies are all well and fine, it's when an author overdoses on them... It's sleepy time for me, I will check out Ch 149 in the morning... I thought CJ's chapter, when our protagonist falls off the boat in the roaring 40's and is facing drowning, to be one of his best chapters, cliffie aside... -
Too many 'moments' stood out in this chapter, but I loved the following... She smiled and licked her lips in anticipation, the things she was going to accomplish with Kenny running logistics, her mind was already calculating the expansion prospects. “Oh and I want a ‘If you make my brother cry’ clause that delivers me his testicles on a silver platter.” Lydia smiled a deep, dark, menacing smile. “No one makes Steve cry but me.”
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You might want to make a correction here...see below and anothe r great chapter...thanks!! “Ah, got it. Well, I’ll let you go. Maybe I’ll see you around the condo soon,” he said with a warm smile. He bent down to Forest. “Uncle Marvin’s heading out now, okay? Be good for your dad, alright?” He offered Forest his finger to grab, and Forest clutched it with a tiny fist. Dailan looked up at me again and smiled. “Wait—Marvin!”
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Our offshore pleasure
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Our offshore pleasure
Åke, it would seem, hasn't met the one who turns him on, and yes, America at that time was roiled by culture divisions... -
I have to believe Idalae will always remain Josel's mother once the full story is known... Mocvann, what on earth ever possessed her?
