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I think the three visitors are intent on hearing those wedding bell blues... Yikes...let's hope reason prevails and cabins are built for the tribe!
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Chapter 6 Curtain Up - FIN
drsawzall commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 6 Curtain Up - FIN
And so much for Emperor Piqsirpoq's desire for erasing the various 'social' barriers between the factions... "It seems that mutt didn't train you well enough," came the emperor's voice, heavy pressure crashing in from all sides, compressing my consciousness, making it hard to breathe. I felt like I'd been punched in the gut, forced down onto my knees. "Teaching mediocrity begets mediocrity, after all." I mustered all my strength, pushing back with my consciousness, unable to stand but determined not to fall further. The blood closest to me began to boil, sizzling and bubbling. "That useless mutt couldn't even fulfill the empire's most basic request." The emperor's furious eyes glowed red as he spat out his words. "The empire asked for just one heir to inherit his power, just one!" He emphasized each word with wild gestures, shards of stone floating into the air, spinning as our domains clashed. With a flick of his paw, a sharp whistle cut through the air. Fortunately, I was ready. Several metal fragments slammed into my defense circle, flattening under the force. "And instead, he produced a crippled little bastard?" The emperor's fur bristled, his form swelling to nearly double its size. "I've been lenient, ignoring his 'deformities,' yet he couldn't even meet that one basic demand?" His tone was as bitter as if he'd swallowed something foul. -
Chapter 5 The Pale Blue Dot
drsawzall commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 5 The Pale Blue Dot
Interesting to say the least, much to unpack and think about in this chapter....the following is/was very intriguing... "To manage the scope of memory compression if needed..." Richter looked down at the floor, resting his elbows on his knees, his tail and ears drooping without movement. "I can only tell you that it's an intelligence far beyond our understanding. We're currently confined within the Sol, and the Phantom are the gatekeepers." His tone became somewhat detached. "The only condition for lifting the blockade is passing the trial." He looked up at the airlock's observation window. "But the rules aren't ours to set, and we don't even know what the trial entails." -
Such a sublime chapter, and now to await some 'interesting' developments!!!
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I had a feeling and commented several chapters ago I thought the treasure might/may have been CSA treasure. I am looking forward to seeing what types of coins are found...
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Building a Relationship, But With Speed Bumps
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Building a Relationship, But With Speed Bumps
Lubed/baby powdered or dry???? -
Part One: My First Trip To Mars
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: My First Trip To Mars
Myself, I quit 35 years ago and don't miss it anymore, as to imbibing the God's nectar...it's been nearly 15 years as a steady, overindulgent drinker...recent X-rays of my lungs for another issue, showed no abnormalities or signs of cancer...phew!!!! Quite frankly I can't stand the smell and know that it is one of the best things you could have done for yourself!!! Next time in San Fran, I will have to torture my backside with some of your spicy food!! -
Never a dull moment and no moss is growing under Orion's feet!
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This chapter is/was ever so lovely....Love the slow pace of their beginnings.
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Building a Relationship, But With Speed Bumps
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Building a Relationship, But With Speed Bumps
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A beautiful home and gardens to say the least and do we detect a yearning from Jim???
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Part One: My First Trip To Mars
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: My First Trip To Mars
Time for a shower, just after the craving for a cigarette and a beer pass.... Fuchi que pesta Mama!!!!! -
Richter...ever the lecturer.....
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Nice to see they found actual treasure, and it should set up everyone for a long, long time... Looking forward to Book 3
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Between Pleasure and Grief
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Between Pleasure and Grief
Frank is certainly more than the sum of his parts and image...isn't he??? -
Just found several more stories to read!!! And some to re-read!!!
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Toby has his picture taken
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Toby has his picture taken
Thanks for the kind words, when I say they have spilled out of the clothes closet and into storage bins I'm not fooling anyone. I've been a collector for more than 30 years...and to top it all off...I just spotted this one...thank goodness my wallet is in the other room!!! Paradise Found Star Orchid Rainforest Hawaiian Shirt | AlohaFunWear.com -
Once the captain's pet realizes the power he will have over him, the tables will slowly turn...
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My goodness...what a treat to see this new posting...it is appreciated!!!! I am delighted to see that you are carrying on with this story!!!! I've come to love this crazy/wonderful story and can't wait for more!!!
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Toby has his picture taken
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Toby has his picture taken
Toby continuously amazes me and as noted above, Elise is clearly intrigued/smitten with young Toby. It will be interesting to see if it goes anywhere... I was delighted to see Toby's gumption in seeing out ''Mr. Russ's" help and I have to love his sartorial choices. Having my own fashion disability, my trove of tropical/Hawaiian shirts now spill out into storage bins! Some are truly horrible, purchases resulting an excess of libations, a few others dating back to the 1940's...mind you...much older than I!!!- 15 comments
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Should have taken the beaner when you had the chance Arlo....
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The players are in place, the die cast, how will it all work out???
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Chapter 29 - Heads
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 29 - Heads
There's bound to be a sequel...or not...and I've had the following conundrum many times... “I hope we didn’t just cause something worse.” Thanks for this.... -
This chapter was way too short.....and Good On You Cal!!!!
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Chapter 10: On the Other Side (Nari Perspective)
drsawzall commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 10: On the Other Side (Nari Perspective)
Methinks there's more than Goblins afoot, and one has to wonder if the spring Ben came thru is a two-way portal?? Will we get to see images of goblins or Targon?
