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  1. Just a note...the same line appears twice... They spent the next day back at the safehouse—bodies sore, sleep restless, minds still echoing with the pulse of the prototype chamber collapsing behind them. But the world hadn’t stopped. And groceries were still low. They spent the next day back at the safehouse—bodies sore, sleep restless, minds still echoing with the pulse of the prototype chamber collapsing behind them. But the world hadn’t stopped. And groceries were still low. Oh my....it took me weeks to live down my walking into a telephone pole.... Six tall, strikingly fit men, all with military posture and skin too smooth, jaws too sharp, hair too perfect—did not disappear. Heads turned. Conversations paused. Some women stared too long. So did more than a few men. A group of teenage boys walked into a lamppost. A barista dropped her croissant tongs. Even straight men glanced twice. Then a third time. And looked confused about it. “Dude,” Leo whispered to Ash, smirking. “I think that guy’s pants twitched.” Ash coughed a laugh into his scarf. “Eyes front, soldier.” Rhys nudged Elias. “You promised to tone down the pheromone field.” “Don’t blame me just ’cause I moisturize.” The kid's a star!!! Rhys mimicked T-Rex arms. Ash made a low growling noise that sent Jonah into giggles. Micah pulled up a dino app on his phone, letting the kid scroll through 3D models. Even Quinn cracked a smile when Jonah declared brontosauruses were “basically salad giraffes.”
  2. Well...what have we gotten ourselves into???
  3. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Starting off with a literal bang!!!
  4. drsawzall

    Grandmother

    We can say for certain...the ice has been broken between the two of them... "I’m not sure we know each other well enough for you to make those kinds of judgments about me, Mr Hansen." Todd looked around to make sure nobody was in earshot before replying. "I’ve carried you over my shoulder, passed out drunk and naked. How much more intimate do you need? And as we’re travelling together, do you think you could find your way to calling me Todd?" Well, was there a glint in his eye when Todd made the following comment, and...one thing is evident, crap doesn't stick long enough on either of them for flies to gather... Todd climbed out of the car, but before closing the door, he could not help himself and leaned in to murmur. "I’d much rather hear how you got those lash marks on your back."
  5. Echoing @Summerabbacat's comments, the growth of all of the denizens in this story is truly remarkable, all except that old bloated, pox ridden cow. This just keeps getting better and better!! And @Summerabbacat....will hit 100 degrees today, and possibly showers tomorrow...but it is like Mississippi has come to my quaint little farm in Central Massachusetts!!!
  6. That he hasn't caught anything is remarkable, some more introspection is in order one hopes...
  7. Ummm, channeling my inner @weinerdog, you really nailed the following... It was during that call I heard the distinct sound of hammering outside my bedroom door. Lex paused mid-sip. “Uh… is that construction? Or an exorcism?” “I think,” I said, getting up slowly, “we’re entering the Home Depot meets holy wrath portion of the evening.” I waited until the coast was clear before cracking open my door and peeked out. And there it was. I am now the proud owner of a modest wooden crucifix, nailed, not hung, nailed to the wall just outside my bedroom door. Tastefully centered, naturally. Probably blessed at some point. Might even be vintage. Lex cackled when I showed him. “She really nailed it,” he said, deadpan. Give me a large bottle of Coke Zero and I'm good to go, no coffee or tea for me please and thanks.. You know us writers, 9/10ths crazy 100% caffeinated and mixed with a side order of chapter plans that look like a demented CSIS murder board... But it's why we're loved by our people, they keep us together when we're out of our minds mid book.
  8. I'm heading to the health clinic to get a check-up on my funny bone and sarcasm gland. Dear lord in heaven did they both wear out last night and Ch 2 will have to wait...um...possibly not...
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    Having moved twice in the past two years I am living proof that moving sucks.... Linda...you go girl!!!
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 14 S3

    By rigorous training!!!
  11. Hey all...I'm racing the midnight EST deadline to email @Cia my story...I had to redo it as the dog ate my keyboard...oh wait...I don't have a dog...humm
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Phew.....dodged that bullet....I mean, I'm rather shy, as you know!!!
  13. So you say.....
  14. Before I can answer a question like that, I would need to know if Miastreass Alice is pregnant...
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Time to carpool Killian...
  16. Hopefully the number is not affected by any tariffs...12
  17. So many new to me stories, best set an extra pair of reading glasses aside!~!~
  18. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Oh my, the question is why?
  19. Can't wait... He gets the awesomest ending thought. @Summerabbacat will be thrilled.
  20. That he could climax that many times is a testament to his virility, at my age, a jar of the little blue pills would not be enough....
  21. Someone has been doing math with @Geron Kees...this and his last chapter is very coincidental.....
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    This was an amazing chapter...and can't disagree with any of the comments above!!!
  23. Just loving this tale, so new and intriguing!!
  24. With his larger then average penis and magnetic ass, Shawn best be aware that he could be king of this planet...
  25. drsawzall

    Powerful

    Has Pencildick Pembroke lost his mojo...will the shop assistant (focus on the ass in assistant please) meakly walk away or will he call the cops??? This chapter was kinda like the Keystone Cops meet the 3 Stooges...
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