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  1. And a mystery appears, a couple truly...
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    Gιllγgατε

    Interesting, looking forward to catching up...
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    Chapter 10

    What a mess...can't tell the players without a scorecard at this point...Hopefully Zdain does not follow thru...but what fun would that be????
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    Chapter 16

    5 orgasms in less than 24 hours....dear lord in heaven...and I've used the image before...but...it applies here as well...I'd be shootin dust....
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    Elysia

    Thank goodness your muse kicked in....this was a fantastic chapter...I still have some doubts about sharing info so freely and concrete steps need to be put into place so technology that should not be shared isn't...now or in the future!!! I assume it is too late for these folks to use stasis while changes are being made!! Simply loved the following... Then Joel grinned, “I’ll show you.” He waved at the empty air. A screen appeared as images of New Charleston began. The City Center of New Charleston, Rainbow Row, the tree lined avenues, the squirrels, birds, the lake and forest...all shown on the screen. The children ran back and forth...and then the view went up to see a blue sky with white clouds, a few birds that flew overhead. Ran shined down on them. There was a collective sigh of admiration seeing an open sky. “We offer you this. To give you access to this. What you have is amazing, but it can grow. If you want it.” Joel could see it was most definitely wanted.
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    Chapter 1

    Very enjoyable, you've managed to do what most authors strive for...create a setting and a tale with an economium of words, richly descriptive and well told!!
  7. Every once in a while, and more often than not on this story site, a story comes along and captivates you from beginning to end. It bears repeating, we are so lucky with the work authors create and posting on this site. it is what makes GA one of the best story sites out there. The story defies casual description other than to say it is about finding oneself and love in the process...Fraught with twists and turns this story will hook you! All I can say is, read. this. story!!!!!
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  8. Thank you for this, it was a tremendous read, one that kept me looking forward to the next chapters, at times I forced myself to wait till there were two chapters posted to double my reading pleasure... I fervently hope that someday we will be able to peek in on them once again!
  9. The technology of the wider world we see on the 'web' is staggering, and yet tomorrow it will be nearly obsolete...In high School, just after dinosaurs became meat eaters and started the American Revolution, our science teacher, lord knows why as I was hopeless at science and math, tried to talk me into joining the computer club, circa 1972-3....I laughed and told him I could not see any future in stuff so cumbersome... If only I had bought stock years later when Apple or Microsoft went public.... When I was 35, I started a new job as a facilities manager and watched as computers took over our business and the world. The pace of growth was so fast and furious that we were constantly renovating/remodeling spaces to accommodate new desktop equipment...And I have to admit, my computer skills were greatly enhanced by looking/searching for porn...
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    Ice Balls

    There are pranks, and then there are the pranks that stand out...What do you do if one backfires...
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  11. What if Hell was more like Club Med???? A delightful read!!!
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  12. Peter is a lucky young man; hope he realizes that his safety is more important than ratings... Could not agree more.....
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    Chapter 1

    If Hell ain't all of what it is cracked up to be, what's going on in heaven???
  14. Hey there....when did you meet my sister????
  15. Thanks for this, and letting us learn a bit more about John...will you be doing this for some of the other folks in this saga???
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    Story Ice Balls

    One has to wonder if the lesson has truly been learned....
  17. Loved this and as a younger person, books also helped me navigate the early years. The summer of my 13th year our family uprooted and moved half a state away, my only consolation was I found, quite by accident, the town library. No longer was I restricted to books in my parents' house, or the very limited selection in the grammar school library, but the world awaited my inquisitive self. Over time through interactions with the librarian, I came to regard him as the smartest person I had ever met, disabusing me of my misplaced awe one day, he pointed all around himself and said, "Most of what you will ever want to know is contained in this building"....also gently reminding me that friends were just as important...
  18. A tremendous use of the prompt, captivating and exceptionally well written.
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  19. A very powerfully written tale of loss and all it entails, well done!!!!!
  20. Fasten your seatbelts this story has more twists and turns than Lombard St in San Francisco....
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    Chapter 1

    Convoluted is the word that springs to mind...well done and very enjoyable!!!
  22. It seems Robert frost was on to something after all... I shall be telling this with a sigh Somewhere ages and ages hence: Two roads diverged in a wood, and I— I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference.
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  23. The shock of meeting the werewolf and watching him change form would have resulted in both of us being nekkid...the issue would have been, if I had not been eaten, as to how I was going to make it back to my campsite after burying my ruined clothes... Loved this!!!
  24. And you thought you knew all about unicorns.....
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    Chapter 1

    I can't get the image of a farting @weinerdog licking himself clean, leastways that's his story and he's sticking (licking?) to it.... Nor will I ever be able to look at unicorns the same way again!!! Simply brilliant!!!
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