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  1. Interesting...
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    Chapter 10

    Albin needs a mentor who can/will initiate him into the various mysteries of sex...
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    Chapter 9

    Another thought struck me, Dave is guilty not only of physical assault but of violating Mickey's civil rights with his verbal assault. It was witnessed and charges should be filed ASAP....
  4. When free isn't truly free and with real freedom are you any better off?
  5. This chapter truly hit all the high notes and thanks!!!
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    Chapter 9

    One step ahead, that's Marc...and now his fleet is growing, lord forbid he ends up in the bedroom with all his lovers....😄
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    Chapter 9

    Well, the train wreck that is Dave certainly showed his true colors, sadly, I'm afraid the lesson won't be learned. The humiliation will only fuel his rage. Someone or several someone's should confront Dave regarding his behavior, unfortunately any such words will only fall on deaf ears. Without a doubt, he's gonna strike out and the resulting crash should be an embarrassment of biblically epic proportions...He'll be the counter to the old saw that no man is an island.... Meanwhile, Drew needs to have a very serious conversation with himself. The river is called the Rubicon, Drew, and crossing over that bridge not only won't hurt but will set your soul free...
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    Chapter 13

    I have to wonder if Omar would leave and leave his brother behind…
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    Press Friday

    I think Gordy had the right of it concerning the pace of the legalities….one has to wonder with crossed fingers that the same holds true as to the number of chapters left! Then the law moves guy slowly, the arrest, the court hearings, the trial, the appeal, and such like. And each time the press came out, disturbing the peace. So, I reckon you’re in for a long haul
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    Chapter 7

    It could very easily apply to both...
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    Chapter 8

    What would happen, that's easy...a frigging soap opera....
  12. A very heartwarming, sad and powerful chapter...I now need to add a box of Kleenex to my shopping list...
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    Spring Ch 8

    Much work in getting the event set up has been done in quite an effort and expenditure...no is the time to relax and enjoy the race!!! For those interested and thanks Quokka for sharing this event with us!!! Avon Descent – Not just a race
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    Ark III

    The danger they face from earth is immense and they would be wise to keep earth at arm's length, the probe contained a virus. I would be insisting that Ark III be circumspect in any communications with another of the Ark's till everything is sorted out. “Our threat isn’t Ark III,” Joel said. “It’s Earth. Brazilia may not be as bad without Campos Saies in control. I know his grandson Luis Barroso is not telling everything. Keep feeding your muse, this is a great story!!!!
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    Chapter 8

    Oh Dave the small minded making assumptions, making an ass out of hisself.... As to the health center, is that where he goes to volunteer with the kids....I just think that Dave is gonna look like a fool...that and he needs taste of his own medicine, and soon....
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    White to Blue

    Only way to go is up...on to Ch 2....please???
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    Chapter 7

    Cedric is a putz...a wastrel and I am sure he isn't fooling anyone, especially his grandfather... A house/relationship built on lies won't stand for long...Can/will any damage caused be repairable??? Anyway, you are right. It's going to become a big construct of lies and especially the beginning will be like walking on raw eggs (do you say that in english?) Having actual feelings for someones is just one part of "save my brothers' life"-deal--show. I think the idiom you were looking for was, "Walking on eggshells"...
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    Chapter 8

    It is a bit predictable Plink coopting Zdain....we all know she won't remain captive as there is more mischiefs to be had...
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    Chapter 6

    Hummm....
  20. Congratulations and well deserved!!!!!! Does this mean we can get rugs for the Korner??? A fire hydrant too!!!
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    Reactions

    I can see into the future career changes as our hero's gravitate towards caring for abused children, there's much more to this story and one has to wonder just how deep the rot goes... Speaking of rot...the fuckwad, rat faced scum sucking pissant a-hole is digging his grave a bit deeper each day, either two behind the ear or sleeping, here's hoping he can't swim, with the fishes...but then a nice set of cement shoes would suffice... He's become a loose cannon, endangering those he ostensively those he works for, he's about to bring heat and exposure to those who slither in the darkness....his impulsiveness is going to topple the house of cards the Old Artefacts live in.... Jason Rizzo was deep in thought as he drove. He knew he should cut his losses and focus on the intact schemes still producing cash, but he also knew he couldn’t. The man hadn’t worked his way up from nothing by allowing himself to be disrespected. Roger Cicero had disrespected him, and probably ratted out Joe and Sal. The lawyer was also helping Detective Ramos steal from him. Charlie’s entire operation belonged to Riz, including the boys. He couldn’t let either offense go unpunished. Killing them didn’t feel like enough. He wanted them to respect and fear him before he eventually took their lives. With Joe and Sal out of the picture, Riz was going to have to recruit or promote some new muscle. Flipping cops took patience and time, and the man didn't have either in any measurable quantity. Fortunately, Jason Rizzo knew plenty of people who were willing to do just about anything for money and the promise of power. Even the things that were currently running through his mind. mm
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    Chapter 7

    Again, the two of them need to have that conversation before they are faced with a PR nightmare...before others see the connection and blab... I'll stake my persuasive powers of prodigious prognostication on Jill and Andrew becoming close friends
  23. It's like ripping off the band aide, gonna smart for a moment and then it's over, nothing like a full brazillian wax job down there!!!
  24. As noted, family is what you make of it, and the true measure of success is not in the accumulation of material gains, but in the giving back and paying it forward...
  25. Can’t decide if Tom’s accident will be maiming or fatal…..
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