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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1 (4/5)

    If I remember correctly, they had bumped into each other prior to traveling and nearly had a fight then...from the previous chapter... I was starting to believe the golden retrievers were truly insane. And if this was only around average version of their behavior… how terrifying could the extreme be? But what truly chilled me to the bone wasn’t the fire. It was the crowd—the onlookers. If the concept of the banality of evil had taught me anything, it was that everyone is responsible… “Hey! What the hell!” A sudden jolt snapped me out of my thoughts. I shouted, swatting away the paw that had clearly tried to pickpocket me. “Thief!” The chaos and noise around us were still overwhelming. No one paid attention. So I stepped forward and grabbed the culprit. “What?” He turned around, his hood falling back—revealing a spotted dog with black spots on his face. “What kind of bullshit are you spewing now?” “You tried to steal from me—don’t think I didn’t notice,” I snapped, adjusting my now-disheveled cloak. “You serious?” The spotted dog yanked his arm free and brushed himself off like I was some kind of dirt. “You calling me a thief just because I bumped into you?”
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1 (4/5)

    Despite the odds...we know out Zorro lives to continue the tale, just how is a mystery....now why did the spotted dog place the photo with Zoro????
  3. But of course... So I did what any horny and depressed young buck in my position would do. Why, I burned down my father’s inn. Of course.
  4. Love like time is precious and leave no room for regrets!
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  5. A sad reminder of the words unspoken...
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    I'd bet the fox guarding the hen house, that several 'chicken' will attempt to flee the coop....much to their demise...
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Well, as far as I can see, the red herrings are in their juvenile stage, not much to go on here just yet... Will has been sheltered far too long, and he's sort of a social newbie... Joey isn't much more than what we've seen other than to think he may have had the same Driver's Ed course as Killian... "It's not that," I cut him off. "Beth and I broke up tonight." "So? You guys break up like every other week. It's a tradition. You'll be dating again next week." "I don't think so. This time was different. She broke up with me." "Whoa!" He looked over at me to gauge my reaction. "Look at the road, please," I said automatically. Having driven with Joey before, I knew we needed all the help we could get. Mackenzie, bears watching, I am surprised at "Joe's" deportment around her, perhaps a dominatrix??? I had a Joe in my life as a very young teen, I knew that he knew we were simpatico, he was scared of the age difference of 3 years, but eventually we went to Mars and back. When he went to college, I used the experiences to my favor....I'm forever grateful to him...
  8. drsawzall

    Prologue

    I needed a few chapters to post in case Killian decides to get behind the wheel and start driving...so much scarier than a lake/pond/river with aquatic zombies, even if they are denizens in a nightmare... A fantastic start...now to the next chapter shortly!!
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 41

    My senioritis faulty memory can't remember if the traitor at Evelyn's Rock was ever caught, the reason I am wondering is, did they get the traitor this time? We see some of the new tech on display in the battle with the Basalt Corporation, do we know what their idiotic motivation was/is??? Do we know or will ever know what was additionally learned from the two, alien ships and those behind the slave labor force??? As to having more children, there is always this incentive... Cheaper by the Dozen (1950 film) - Wikipedia
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 2 S3

    White water rafting is some of the most fun one can have while wearing clothes, having done it several times. I've also spent several summers as a wayward youth following the bluegrass circuit around northern New England and upstate New York, and a cruise on Boston Harbor... For anyone interested... White Water Rafting Maine: Kennebec, Penobscot, Dead Rivers Rogue Rafting Company - ROGUE RIVER WHITEWATER RAFTING & FISHING TRIPS Bluegrass music - Wikipedia
  11. Love the fact they are talking to each other as noted... Brandon grabbed their dicks in his hand and slowly jerked them together. He leaned close and whispered, “I think we should do what comes natural and don’t worry about putting a label on what we do in bed. I just like being naked with you.”
  12. I'm guessing the best part of a season....
  13. Some amazing stories here and some to be discovered!!!
  14. We obviously have not seen the last of Pembroke, a man with a vast sphere of influence in the city, would have his ways of tracking the perpetrators of the incense shop which should have left him incensed.... It is amazing just how clueless Ryder and Danny are and I'm rooting for team Vince and Jack!!! “I see,” he said, still dizzy after their kiss. Danny had a way of pressing his lips against his mouth that made him lose his head. It was completely unintentional, and he usually had a better grip on his mind and body, but it looked like the influence of this human was quite strong.
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    Chapter 1 (3/5)

    I'm thinking we have seen the progenitor of Edward, Arch-Duke of Golden...heaven forbid...
  16. To spare everyone the horrors of oral surgery, testicular removal, combined with double hernia surgery, the order of Presidential succession is shown in the following, and lord help us, it gives me no comfort... United States presidential line of succession - Simple English Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 1 (3/5)

    Smith is a psychopath at his very best, at his very worst, I can't imagine the horror...
  18. Interesting dynamics at play here, one would have expected survivors at the hotel to at least pick up after themselves...a good swift kick in the backside should start that process... I would suspect those running Cheyenne Mountain might have something to say...let's not forget our army, navy, and air force... Cheyenne Mountain Complex - Wikipedia I think the interview just might light a fire under several folk's asses!! Especially the good Doctor Allen, and just what has he been up to...destroying records and evidence...or perhaps a victim of his own stupidity???
  19. drsawzall

    Wedding

    Such a wonderful, low-key day...and as it should be even despite the room booked for the nuptials was commandeered by others...
  20. drsawzall

    David

    What kind of trouble will David bring?
  21. Etienne found true friendship on the voyage over for the short respite it offered. Sadly, Henery proved a different kettle of fish once he was ensconced in the castle...Thanks to a wise woman in the kitchen, he found his footing and the beginnings of Henry's demise. I suspect that Etienne will find himself in Prince Charle's orbit attending to his daily needs...of all types!!!
  22. drsawzall

    Interlude

    At long last we find out a bit more about the witches...they aren't invincible tho...
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 1 (2/5)

    And to think, in our current world golden retrievers are docile, lovable galoots...Smith demonstrated all the tendencies of a psychopath, and Michael endures he abuse to serve his own eventual plan(s)... Like others I would like to know more about the origins of the conflict and find it interesting that the herbivores created the collar tech....
  24. One of my favorite easter memories was the first time I got to help dying the eggs the nights before easter with my mother, my siblings couldn't be bothered as they had 'other' stuff to do...to me it was a magical time spent with mom. Our spring has been wet, windy and a tad chilly...yesterday the temp's hit 83 degrees...wozer a rarity for central Massachusetts. Today was the first time the sump pump has been quiet for the day... Had the family over and the 10lb ham was more than sufficient, sent everyone home with some and will make some split, green pea soup using the hambone and the leftover and ham...
  25. drsawzall

    Chapter 40

    My thoughts exactly @Al Norris along with @wenmale64's comment about William... We've still yet to get answers as to what went/is going on in the Unknown Sector, I keep thinking back to the two, for lack of better words, starships that that Marc as discovered/found...there's some amazing technology there and what we don't know is who is behind the starships....or their capabilities!!! It is obvious that there is another civilization with some of the same needs as Marc's, what we don't know is their collective mindset, are they friendly or foes??? As to William, I can't imagine he's smart enough to pull all of this together, it is more likely that he's a dupe if anything... and woe to whomever makes a threatening move towards the children....
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