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  1. It isn't the sound those walnut cracking butt are making, but the sounds of Ralph's shell cracking...
  2. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Welcome abord Matey...ooops...wrong setting/genre....looking forward to your thoughts and comments...
  3. Intriguing and wondering what is in the way, lack of confidence, someone else, or is it the time is/was never right? Well done!!!
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    Not like they were already busy, this project seems to have legs and is viable. It's gonna be fun watching this take off!!!
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 37 S2

    Hundreds of channels, all shilling incessantly inane programs to follow another inane program... And to top it all off, the political commercials have driven me to find channels so obscure that the only commercials shown are for the newest and greatest Medicare plans, using commercial reruns from 5 years ago... Thank goodness for Netflix and Prime.... and my kindle....
  6. Read.This.Story. Once again, we are treated to an excellently written story that will keep you engaged from beginning to end. I can't add much to the reviews below other than to say, Read.This.Story!!!
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 30

    Thank you for taking the time to grace these pages with your work as noted below... I think with the following you've managed to sum up the essential premise of this story, distilled into a few simple, powerfully written paragraphs... I looked at Andre and it was clear that we were both wondering what was going on, but before either of us could say anything we heard, “Uncle Chris, Uncle Andre, could I be your ring bearer, please?” It was Bradley. I looked at Bradley, “Well it looks like we need one, but why do you want to be our ring bearer?” “I’d like to do it because you and Uncle Andre have shown me that it’s possible to be gay and have good lives, that you can be qualified and have good jobs, that you can be in a loving relationship, you can be good parents and you can be open about being gay and the world doesn’t have to come crashing down around you. And also because of you I met my boyfriend Cooper.” Cooper moved over and took Bradley’s hand. “Both of you are our role models. You have shown us that we don’t have to be worried about being gay, we just have to be good people. That’s why it would be my honour to be your ring bearer.” It is works like this that engage your readers, myself included, and boy did I comment, you had me hook line and sinker, treasuring each chapter as they came out. While I am sad to see it come to an end, you've hit a high note with the ending, leaving us hoping that at some point in the not-to-distant future we get a glimpse as to how all are doing... Thank you!!!
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 37 S2

    Just thinking the same thing...there must be another spot for a second TV...
  9. Karma is a bitch is my mantra...karma is a bitch... So what became of Brendan's parent's house...life insurance policies...bank accounts...and so on...
  10. I get the distinct feeling that Jackie may implode prior to Ludo and Arthur becoming a known quantity...I believe she is involved in some financial hanky-panky at the bank...what bothers me is that there isn't any discussion as to what this important project is or entails between Ludo and her, she is evasive at best.... So, they got another coffee. Ludo told her a bit, but Lesley was never interested in a bit. She was all or nothing. “You reckon Jackie’s seeing someone at work, maybe? Or just fixated on breaking the glass ceiling?” She stared at him, “Look, I don’t want to speak out of turn, but well you know me. She’s not involved in anything dodgy, is she?” “Jackie? Hardly. The bank’s her life.” “I know lovey, but audits, secure jobs, who audits the auditors? That sort of thing.” Good friends will always be just that, good friends where time apart has no meaning or impact...
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    Therapy is needed pronto, Gilly is a firecracker, the imagery of Seth holding a book could be a vital clue, Asher WTF...just where is the book Seth was/is holding and what could be in it, incriminating notes, a list of culprits with evidence, winning Powerball numbers???? If Kane is being hit or beaten by his mother for gosh sake take some pics of the bruises... Gilly's deceased Uncle, an unsolved crime...is there a connection...do we have a bunch of neo-Nazis playing dress-up with KKK robes carrying burning crosses when no one is looking??? BTW...Gilly's father sounds awfully like Killian's father...hummm....
  12. Truly a delightful tale, possibly giving birth to the Brothers Grimm?
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    Anyone believing Alan is straight needs to see me about a bridge for sale…..
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    My suspicions lead me to believe that the four Norwegian's just may be the progeny of a program undertaken in Germany in the 1930's to create a 'super race'....of humans... I can't quite figure the importance of the bowl, that it is important is evident, if not then an expensive red herring...
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Lets see...The Norwegians are fast runners and well versed in DNA, Ralph is a new student who not only put fear into Oscar but had contradictory ideas on DNA research from the 1930's, it leads me to believe that the Norwegians may/might be the result of some clandestine DNA research... Now the bowl, if it came by honestly to the Norwegians, what is the purpose of gifting it? Does it hold a clue hidden or somehow transcribed upon it? Then the camping trip, hope the boys keep nudity confined to the tent, avoiding those pesky stinging insects....
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    I always thought something was off with the twins, it didn't ring true as to me, the interactions seemed forced as noted in a previous chapter... “Sorry Marc.” Said Roman sadly. And he is going to be the one hurt most by our discussion later. Unfortunately. I leaned in and kissed his head before I leaned over and kissed Camile, too. Camile pulled me tight as she looked up at the ship lining up on the threshold. I was watching carefully, as was the Destroyer around the side of the station. I am sure. Roman snuggled into my side. His head is on my shoulder. A fake smile appeared on his face. The term that comes to mind is, ‘Don’t leave your day job.’ As far as his acting ability goes. Camile was doing better. She even leaned in and kissed me. Roman decided he was bored and turned into me for a hug. His lips pressed against mine before his head went down on my shoulder again. Waiting is the worst. Then there is Chris, not sure he ever had what it took to be part of Marc's circle, he's more of a follower, particularly when it came to his dick...Having said all that, not sure he had the abilities to plan and run a smuggling operation, I see him as a tiny fish in a much larger pond. One has to wonder how many families are involved in this smuggling operation and I would not be surprised if the twin's family is marginally involved...what is the old saying, " Keep your friends close, your enemies closer"....
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    An interesting start to say the least, I could certainly see the guys enjoying time together...
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Josel for the lack of better words, is in the fight of his life, and that fact seems to escape him due to his personality! After coming out of that cellar, one would think we'd see a new attitude from Josel, yet he seems to be incapable of change... Despite my criticisms, one of the hallmarks of a good story on a site like this, are the comments they engender, and you have me commenting...
  19. There's another puppet master playing the game, and at the moment holds a superior position, as he/she/ knows Aelfric Elias Tudor, while they remain hidden in the shadows. Possibly working King Johann for the short term and the long term??
  20. Good on Ralph, accepting himself and the joys that go with it!!!
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Then there's Julie Newmar to consider, while she didn't sing, at least to my knowledge, she could fill out leather clothing like no one else...
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    I'm thinking Quinn is riding Orion 'Cowboy' style....yehaww!!!!!
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Per your quotes above, why would anyone trust or put their faith in the boy when he can't stop acting like a child, personally, I'd be tossing him overboard, up to this point he's more trouble than he's worth...
  24. The comment above is what we call over here in the Northeast of the USA, 'Hitting the proverbial nail directly on the head"!!!
  25. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Love it, and glad you enjoyed this story!!
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