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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter Six

    Channing reminds me of Joan Collins in Falcon Crest as a young man, it's an image that just popped into mind, what are the chances he's fixated on Todd???
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    Chapter 28

    I think Ollie's Nonna is there with good intentions and to let Andre and Chris know that there may be some subterfuge by 'the other half' of the family. I believe anyone trying to interfere with Ollie will feel the wrath of Auntie Margret....Could ther possibly be money due Ollie that has been hidden from him??? This cliffhanger isn't really a cliffhanger, it is more like a "wait and see hanger'...
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    Take Me Chapter 7

    My goodness...looks like our boys will have their hands full...won't they... Then there's this... Also during the meeting, I was informed that the Amixorian Domain had intercepted many Interstellar Radio Messages sent from Earth since 1974, to make contact with any intelligent living beings in space. I was told that in the past, the Amixorian race has come across several other races, and some were not at all nice, and it would be preferred to keep them well away from this solar system. I was in full agreement with this decision, and I agreed to put this matter to the relevant authorities on Earth to stop sending the messages out.
  4. It would seem the smoke around Heyward's fire is getting stronger, I have to wonder, if he is...how over-extended is he??? Or is it time to take the profits of his serious artworks like any good investor, and focus on the 'new and upcoming masters"???
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    Chapter Five

    Here's hoping Todd slays his demons and he and Barret find each other....that and I have a sneaking suspicion that Todd's artwork is about to take off, possibly like Banksy?
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    Chapter 1

    After about 5 tall Gin & Tonics, with a dash of Roses Lime Juice, I'm guilty of the same forward behavior...Loved this!!!
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    Prologue

    Loved this, looking forward to more!!!!
  8. Late to the party once again, moving house sucks.....and there's so frigging much, and more to go and do...like shopping for curtains for 31 windows...I wonder if I can get away with discarded coffee bean bags from the local roaster, burlap is in or so I am told They have pretty designs...would they be vegan @Summerabbacat??? But I digress...this was a splendiferious chapter and others have said everything I would have but sooo much better!!!
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    Chapter 7

    Loved this chapter, I have to think Uncle Sev might/may need a bit more time than forecasted... The following blew my socks off...how amazing!!! When his dad and Aunt finally emerged, he noticed that Severin swallowed, but smiled and moved toward his Dad. They practically blocked the line as they embraced, Hans putting Severin in a bear hug that Severin clearly didn’t expect. And then he kissed him on each cheek, then ran his fingers through Severin’s hair. This time, Hans clearly took the lead, but unlike over 40 years ago, they both stood and enjoyed the moment. Then his father did something odd. He grabbed Severin by the lapels of his suit. “It’s same one! You’ve kept it all these years…” Hans remarked, rubbing the materials in his hands. Severin nodded his head.
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter One

    Guilty as charged...I might/may have remembered their names, and on the rarest of 'dates' possibly a last name....
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    Chapter Four

    Well now, all I got is hummm....
  12. Can't add anything to the comments above other than to say what this chapter did to me...
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    Chapter Twelve

    Had to do some catching up…..as I remember Guam is an independent island…. Henderson senior could count the number of times he’d ever been surprised in his life, on four crooked, arthritis-ridden digits of his left hand, discounting for an amputated pinky. There was one time during his military service in marine corps, when their brigade was ambushed by Vietnamese in Guam. He Jake still worries me, Liam needs to be staked naked to an anthill naked with a solid bar of rock candy stuffed up his ass….
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    Chapter 21

    Much to ponder in this chapter, love the way this story is coming together!!!
  15. Hey @weinerdog, @chris191070...1st on Pg 3!!!
  16. With apologies to @RainbowPhoenixWI... Jesusmotherfuckingchristonafuckingbycyclemeetingmotherlovingmonkeysodomizersposingasdildoworshipingnuns.....I mean just what the fuck????? If tomorrow's chapter fails to post, what our author might see when looking out his back door... Followed by
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    Take Me Chapter 6

    It would seem the dynamic has changed, I am very interested to see if there was additional fallout from Harold and Charles stupidity...
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    Chapter Three

    Oh the hubris of youth... “But if you get caught–” “I won’t. Damien can’t even tell what I’m doing in the surveillance footage since it looks like I’m just placing the price stickers on instead. He’s none the wiser.” I find it so darned cute when I hear a Bieberler trying to act so 'adult'... “Oh, that’s wonderful,” an older woman said. “People your age don’t usually want to work and rather spend their days complaining, while living under their parents’ roof.” Okay, boomer.
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    Chapter 5

    Great point, and will we see or hear of him again???
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    Greg is growing into his role naturally as if he was born to it. His means and methods are bringing out the best in all those who surround him, the hallmark of a great leader, can't wait to see what the future holds....
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    Chapter 25

    Let's hope Franz quickly picks up the wherewithal to not be a drag or an anchor on this journey to wherever they are going....and that in losing his virginity he did not pick up any 'unwanted guests'.....
  22. Interesting, what will our hero do to set his adversaries back on their heels, will it be quick or will he lay out an even more devious plan??? I hadn’t anticipated such a unique trap, but it offered an intriguing opportunity. Even as our motorcar traveled down the Rue Neuve-Saint-Louis, I used the phantom energy to manipulate small things, like freezing a geyser of water at a nearby fountain for a few seconds or causing a gas lantern to burn a day’s worth of fuel in seconds. Time was not on their side.
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter Two

    Oh, the injustice/hardship of the self-imposed interior prison walls we create...Attica...Attica...Attica!!!!! Then there's Sally Fields accepting the Oscar she won..."You really like me"!!!! One has to wonder just how long and what it will take for both to pull their collective heads out of their posteriors!!! This should be a very interesting dance to say the least!!!
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    I can't add to the comments above, this was an amazing chapter, and like the others has me wanting more!!! I will wait, and not go to that 'other' site, till this story is complete!!!
  25. Mother once told me off after farting in the living room, and as a wise ass I asked/assumed that girls did not, I was politely informed that they 'broke wind' and had the good sense, manners, and grace to do it out of sight....note, she didn't say out of smelling range...
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